The God Modification Plan

The author cut off the fandom of a certain anti-human comic author and gave it a good review first. I hope the author's mentality will not collapse and he can continue to write 😁

The Pure Love Party has gathered together, today we will shoot a group of tauren!

After reading the first ten chapters, my head hurt. The goddess is a pig teammate. I couldn't stand the loan shark scene. There is also this female doctor. I initially thought she was a character similar to giving out welfare, but it turned out that she was here to trick the protagonist. She took other people's underwear and tricked the protagonist. The protagonist was stabbed with a knife. He also teaches the protagonist a lesson in return. The character of the protagonist is also a bit tricky, a typical male protagonist in Japanese comics. How should I put it? If it was an anime, it would be fine, we would think it was normal and interesting, but if you are writing a novel, this is the poisonous point.

I just saw the happy ending of Yoshida Saki on the forum, and I burst into tears. Send it over and take a look

The tauren are number one in the world! Minotaurs gather!

Kill all the billions of tauren

Reposted from Gongba Brother's picture

The picture I saw accidentally... Made me laugh

I originally thought that the author would write about Kira Yoshikage in the next book, but suddenly I found that the protagonist of this book is also Huangfa, a self-proclaimed ordinary office worker, ntr element (the one Kira took up his identity in the later period), which is so touching. Even when he lets himself go, he never forgets his original intention. Is this the author's ideological consciousness? Tears!

First of all, I have to agree. After watching anime for about ten years, I have certainly seen a lot of characters like female doctors. For me, it is probably not a big deal. The part about owing money to the goddess is similar to Aqua's behavior. But the problem is that these two negative plots need positive things to adjust. In anime, there is a supporting character who misunderstands the protagonist. Within two or three chapters, something else will be done to divert the conflict. Either the supporting character's shining point will be shown, or the situation will be reversed to regain the situation. In the plot of the female doctor, there are some shining points. She cares about the injured female classmate, and there is a reversal. She admits her mistakes and apologizes, but the intensity is completely insufficient. I clearly saw the existence of this plot but it did not have an adjustment effect at all. After reading it, I still feel that the female doctor hates the male protagonist and received a punch in vain. The same goes for the goddess part. The reason why Aqua's behavior is not annoying is that on the one hand it is because there are a lot of jokes to fill the sandbox character, and on the other hand she is also working to make money and is reliable at critical moments, which makes people think that the mistakes she makes are harmless. Looking back at Dorothy, I personally feel that the fundamental reason why this plot is so controversial is that there is not enough foreshadowing. There are no other descriptions to accumulate enough positive emotions to cover the whole story. Suddenly, a trouble-making plot directly drags the negative emotions into the negative emotions. This gives people a really bad impression. This is purely based on my feelings. I don't know if the author didn't handle it well or if he just wanted to write it like this on purpose. It's great that the author thinks this feedback is valuable. Feel free to delete it if you want.