My Years as an Immortal in Tokyo

I looked at the tombstone in front of me quietly There was only the word "Bai Fan" on it, it was so simple that it was a bit crude I felt deeply angry for him, but there was nothing I could do about it "Oh, maybe it belongs to Bai Fan" The era is over."

I was completely confused in the first chapter. Pig's Foot said there is no need to prove to others that he has lived for more than 1,000 years. So why do you tell others that you have lived for more than a thousand years?

I think this book is very interesting!

If the author can solve the trouble neatly and perfectly, then he can solve the trouble neatly and perfectly. Don't write the protagonist who is a bit protracted just to advance the plot with a low number of words. The character of the protagonist who has lived for a thousand years, the reader's subconscious character is a perfect human being: intelligence, abilities, skills, connections and status are all top-notch 1. Chat with the eldest lady about how long you have lived, arouse her interest and promote the plot. Unsteady (The thousand-year-old demon character has a hidden character: steady and well-informed) You can also arouse her interest by describing that you are better than the eldest lady in exams and that you are better than her in a certain ability! 2. Break through the underworld organization and recover the debt. Unwisdom (The thousand-year-old demon character has hidden wisdom. If you deal with many things, you can make perfect, and you will learn more knowledge and methods, and the pattern will be bigger) You can also use your connections to suppress others and help pay back the remaining money yourself. If the content of the novel is expressed in this way, the popularity of the novel will decline. It is recommended that the author polish the plot to improve his ability to control the plot I take back what I said before, the thousand-year-old demon is somewhat perverted and twisted in his heart, and any reaction he makes is in line with the old demon's heart. Unreasonable places, automatically brought in may be because I am too ordinary in my heart and do not have the mentality of immortality But it will indeed lose some readers

I just want to say that after living for so long, thousands of years, not to mention that people become better with age, your protagonist's behavior in the world is as straightforward and boring as a stick-in-the-mud.

I was blind, thinking that I was an immortal in the Northeast, and thought it was written about a great fairy or something like that. When I looked at Tokyo again, my mood changed from surprise to dullness.

I still feel that the painting book is the most comfortable to read. . . . . .

Why would an immortal mix among middle and high schools in the ordinary world? It's not a fantasy world, the main characters are all in middle school and high school.

Today's Qidian is full of white-collar articles... One or two are readable but the author is a eunuch... The editors-in-chief are all pornographic! !

The results of the next book may not be better than the first one, there is no doubt about it, but I wonder how the author can master the style of three books. The first is supernatural, the second is daily life, and the third is urban supernatural. So I hope that when starting a new book, the author must think clearly whether he can finish it 🙂