Tokyo Ghost Story Notebook

After reading Chapter 60, I was completely shocked by the author's views. My younger sister and her classmates appear too few times at home so I won't comment on them. I only comment on these people who have appeared on campus. Kobayakawa, the character is a fool who will sacrifice his life to protect his friends, so he keeps finding fault with the protagonist. I can't stand it. Xingchuan, I don't know why he is related to Guitan Crow. The character image is not clear and I will not comment. But these next ones are really weird. That senior, a bully, almost beat the protagonist to the point of vomiting blood in the opening scene. If the puppet had not come online to fight for him, he would have overturned with so much pretense. In the end, he was cleared of his innocence, and he even recommended the protagonist to join the club with a very loyal look. Aki is a top-notch bully, isolated, and a disgusting woman who turned the protagonist's former reputation into the "number one pervert". If she disagrees with her, she will ask the protagonist to take off her underwear and throw it into the women's restroom for people to laugh at. For such a person, the author can actually write that she said confidently, "It's because you are so strong that I am afraid, so you have to take responsibility." However, the protagonist who heard this did not slap her, but said "don't care" with a cold face? Facing a shopping invitation from a sister who is really good to him, he refuses it, and he accepts the bully's unreasonable troubles without retaliation. Is this the protagonist? It's Asasi, I love it.

To briefly summarize: The protagonist subdued a monster in the previous plot. When the protagonist arrives at school, he is looked down upon and threatened by gangsters. The protagonist starts to show off. The protagonist makes a one-on-one duel with the gangster on the rooftop. The protagonist finds that he cannot defeat the gangsters, and who of the monsters he conquered falls asleep. The protagonist cannot defeat the gangster and is beaten for two consecutive chapters. The protagonist remained calm despite being beaten for a long time? ! Said "I haven't lost yet!" After the protagonist endured the beating for a long time, the monster woke up and successfully helped the protagonist defeat the gangster (so is this gangster some kind of big boss? The end of the show?). The gangster said to the protagonist, "You win." The onlookers were shocked. ? ? ? What do you want to express in this rz plot? 🙂

I really thought I could resist any poison. Author, you really persuaded me to quit the rooftop brawl This story is not about supernatural beings, it's okay, it's just off topic A date for a duel, it's okay, just a pretense to set the stage for a showdown After the fight started, I found that the subdued supernatural being was sleeping, so I just thought it was necessary to show off, and I could accept two hits before the explosion Then I'm really going to keep getting beaten? Finally, the supernatural got up to help solve the problem, and asked if it was the right time, the right time, ha, just the right time, these four words sent me away These four words alone are nothing, combined with the plot I almost vomited Maybe the plot written by you, the author, may be good, but to be honest, I didn't watch it I have the motivation to go on I wanted to leave directly, but after thinking about it for a moment, I feel really sorry for leaving without saying anything. After all, it was a new book I encountered after half a year that completely made me want to curse. If there are newcomers who want to read it, I suggest you skip this school story. I can only stick to this point.

The campus chapter is poisonous! I seem to have returned to the era of the King of Soldiers novel ten years ago.

I see so many people in the comment area saying that this book is not good and that is not good. It is undeniable that the plot is indeed toxic, but I would like to share some of my opinions on this book. Today I saw the latest update. Generally speaking, it is quite to my liking. I skipped some of the poisonous parts. The style is a bit like the new show "Fictional Mystery", which pays more attention to the dialogue and relationship between characters, and promotes the development of the plot bit by bit from the specific interactions of the characters. The style is very delicate, which is why some people say it is watery, but it is also easy to shape the character of the character and make the plot more reasonable. For example: the character Aki has been in line with her character from the time she appeared until now, and the same goes for everyone else. Many people say they hate Aki. She has both good and bad sides to this character. She can choose to bully the protagonist because she saw her being bullied. She also felt emotional and chose to donate to them because she was bullied and saw disabled children living in this world. This is the complex side of human nature. The author has successfully created this character, but I do not deny that there are indeed some poisonous points in the plot, which is very good! ! Generally speaking, the style of this novel is to develop the plot in daily life. It is very delicate, very slow-burning, and very "watery", but it is more in line with my appetite. Friends who really, really, really can't stand it, don't force it. First, you spend money to read it and get angry😅, and secondly, it's really bad for us readers who can stand it to keep watching you scolding you in the comment area. Finally, big cheers to the author! ! I have seen everything you wrote in the book. Your writing style is quite special, not the kind that caters to popular sense and fast food literature. Just follow your feelings, write a good outline, and don't let the plot collapse. There will be people like me with different tastes who will watch it. Come on, come on, come on 😃

I can't stand the school chapter anymore. It's so toxic. It is recommended not to read it

I just finished reading the campus chapter and then I looked through the comments and found that you said it was so poisonous and annoying, but I don't think it's poisonous. I can tell now that the author is writing very carefully. I can't say it's writing, but creating the content of the book. Through the campus chapter, you can see that all the characters' relationships are three-dimensional. Basically, every character is well portrayed. I just want you to say that so and so is really annoying. It is indeed very annoying, but this shows that What does this mean that the portrayal of this character is very successful, I just want to return the mother-in-law Rong in Zhugegeli. Although it is really watery, both the relationship between the characters and the foreshadowing are very successful. As an old bookworm, I prefer to read this kind of three-dimensional character portrayal. Come on, the author, I hope the author can improve it so that everyone can see it and don't be dissuaded by those who don't know the truth. If you like this kind of writing, you can read it and don't be dissuaded. If you don't like this, don't force me to read it.

The setting is good, but the plot and characters are too cliche The character of a younger sister and a pretty classmate has long been ruined by various Japanese light novels, and there is nothing new at all. Moreover, the selling point of this kind of ghost story novel is to create a suspenseful and terrifying atmosphere. A bunch of beautiful girls will ruin the atmosphere.

Apart from anything else, school bullies deserve to die. The way the author handles the character of Aki makes me want to vomit. I have no desire to continue reading. The author doesn't really think that school bullies can be forgiven, no, no, no, no, the author was such a person when he was in school.

This kind of calm and rational protagonist is good! Japanese background... I just want not to be a dog licker, not to have a harem, and to be supernatural. As expected, being with abnormal people is the most interesting [Funny]