Sage of Mount Hua

The first article kneels down and licks Lao Zhang and people related to him, the second and third articles kneel down and licks the coward, and finally complains about the biggest flaw. Whether you can ascend is controlled by what you call the spirit of the world. The peak of martial arts in this world can surpass the Lord of the World. The funniest thing is that you said that you claimed to be in retreat in Huashan, but actually went to Taixuan Island, and the Lord of the World couldn't find you? Are you kidding me?

I have read the first few chapters and it is very good. It has the same feeling as when I read the martial arts world adventure before. I hope the author will not change the body of the protagonist when changing the world.

The idea of ​​traveling through time and space is very unique, and there is nothing wrong with it. The highlight is that I didn't pick up the Nine Yang Magic! In fact, for me, if I traveled through the past, I would actually find nothing! People who often go to the mountains will know that looking for a book in a mountain that they have never been to is undoubtedly like looking for a needle in a haystack, which is not realistic at all! As for the character of the protagonist, it is indeed a bit bad, but the author's creative point is that it is OK to start with a small character! The only drawback is that the character's characteristics are not outstanding enough! This cannot be too realistic, the protagonist must have at least one point that can attract people! Even if he is successful, there is a reason for success, but it is not highlighted from this point of view! Come on, author!

The author has unique ideas based on the classics, and it is most rare to write a story in a down-to-earth manner.

In fact, I didn't have high hopes when I first came across this book. I just didn't have much to read, so I was just looking for a book to pass the time. I just happened to come across a book that I could read without scolding me. The three worlds in the first two volumes cannot be said to be very good or bad. I can only say that they are above average. I may even read the updates and this book will be slow to put on the bookshelf. I can't even remember reading it, but the wonderful story written by the author only really begins when the author opens the third volume and starts writing about Shushan. If I only read the first two volumes, I can only say that this book is just like licorice, which can quench hunger and thirst, but it is not necessary for daily needs. Starting from Shushan is considered as food and grass, so I started to update it every day. I hope that the author's imagination will become bigger and better, and his results will get better and better!

Most Yitian fan fiction likes to whitewash Yin Susu and Xie Xun, which makes me wonder. Yin Susu is always killing people, and Xie Xun is even more stupid. He kills people indiscriminately in an attempt to force Cheng Kun out. I really don't understand what these two people have to whitewash. Is it possible that just to build a good relationship with Lao Zhang and take care of Xiao Zhang's emotions, they don't even know the basics of right and wrong?

He is handsome and handsome, strong in martial arts, both good and evil, romantic but not obscene, and decisive in killing. I hope the author can consider it. Lu Xiaofeng, the peerless twins, the Moon Sword in the End of the World, the best in the world, Fengyun (1.2), The Divine Eagle, Tianlong, Tang Dynasty, turning the rain and turning the clouds, romantic and romantic stories are indispensable! ! ! , I hope this book can become a high-quality product and describe the charm of martial arts and the hateful five elements.

Based on the current content, it is speculated that: the world has existences such as world will, but there is no fixed destiny (fixed plot). There are children of destiny in the world, and the world will will prefer children of destiny. The world will will provide a certain degree of "monitoring" to outsiders, but will generally not interfere with the behavior of outsiders unless it has a greater impact on the children of destiny. The above is just personal speculation, it depends on how the author writes it.

I think the Thousand Faces setting is a complete failure. To be fair, do you like the story of Simple Xianyu Tong? Do you like Zhuo Bufan's story? He is indifferent to fame and fortune, because he is greedy for life and afraid of death, so his body is committed to the great road and his heart is committed to immortality. That's it. You have to follow the routine and set up a mastermind. The handwriting of the mastermind is very bad. It requires IQ but not IQ, moral integrity but not moral integrity. It is not good to be strong. According to the setting, this is the Alaya Consciousness of all living beings! Do you know what he thinks? Practice? So I don't think there is any need to write about the mastermind behind the scenes. I just follow the nature of the first-generation protagonist and appreciate the elegance of different martial arts worlds. If I want to clear up the protagonist's cultivation, I can write that this is the price to pay for reincarnation. Why does the protagonist want to be reincarnated? It can be martial arts, heart, body, qi, etc. You want to perfect them one by one. The purpose can be changed by the author at will, but there is no need to set up a mastermind behind the scenes. There can be opponents, but there is no need to have enemies. If you must write about enemies, I hope you can make the enemies stronger. Take a look at the thoughts of the Thousand-Faced Man, the logic behind his difficulty with the protagonist, the difficulty with which he was defeated by the protagonist, and his performance after being defeated. Is it worthy of his identity? In short, the author writes about an ordinary person who seeks the truth, which is great! It's very immersive. I don't have enough skills to write about the conspiracy layout and the mastermind behind the scenes, so please use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. It's also interesting for everyone to watch along the way. Forcibly writing a villain who lacks both ability and intelligence looks like the next year, and the enemy reflects his own level, which also lowers the image of the protagonist. There is nothing that can be changed at present, and I hope these problems can be avoided in the future.

I sincerely give some advice to the author. It is okay to write about Tianlong. You are already the king in Yitian. When you reach Tianlong, it is just to seek the Tao. You completely gave up what you have learned from Quan and chose Beiming Shengong. You are really inferior. It should be because there were too many people who chose Beiming Shengong in the past, and readers are tired of reading it.