Sage of Mount Hua

The first part grovels to Lao Zhang and those associated with him; the second and third parts grovel to Da Song; and finally, the biggest flaw is exposed: whether you can ascend or not is controlled by your so-called World Spirit, and the martial arts peak of that world can even surpass the World Lord. The most ridiculous thing is that you claim to be in seclusion on Mount Hua, but you actually went to Tai Xuan Island, and the World Lord couldn't even find you? Are you kidding me?

The first few chapters are quite good; they remind me of the adventure stories in martial arts worlds I used to read. I hope the author won't give the protagonist a different body when changing worlds.

The idea of ​​time travel and Xianyu Tong is unique, and there's nothing inherently wrong with it. The fact that he didn't try to retrieve the Nine Yang Divine Skill is a highlight! Frankly, if I were to time travel, I wouldn't find anything in reality!

The author's ability to build upon classic elements and create a truly solid story is rare and commendable.

To be honest, I didn't have high hopes when I first came across this book. I was just looking for something to read to kill time, and I happened to find one that was readable enough not to make me want to curse. The first two volumes, set in three worlds, weren't particularly good or bad, just above average.

Most fanfiction of "The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber" likes to whitewash Yin Susu and Xie Xun, which I find baffling. Yin Susu is quick to wipe out entire families, and Xie Xun is even more foolish, indiscriminately killing people in an attempt to force Cheng Kun out. I really don't understand what's so whitewashing about these two. Is it just to maintain a good relationship with Zhang Fei and appease Zhang Xun, to the point that they can't even distinguish right from wrong?

Handsome and dashing, highly skilled in martial arts, both righteous and wicked, charming but not vulgar, decisive in killing—I hope the author will consider this. Lu Xiaofeng, The Peerless Twins, The Moon and the Sword, The World's Number One, The Storm Riders (1.2), The Return of the Condor Heroes, Tianlong, The Great Tang Dynasty, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, A Romantic Tale is a must!

Based on the current content, it is speculated that the world has a world will or something similar, but it does not have a fixed destiny (fixed plot). There are chosen ones in the world, and the world will tend to favor them. The world will monitor outsiders to a certain extent, but generally will not interfere with their behavior unless it has a significant impact on the chosen ones. The above is just personal speculation; the actual outcome depends on how the author writes it.

I think the "man with a thousand faces" concept is a complete failure. To be fair, do you all like the simple story of Xianyu Tong? Do you all like the story of Zhuo Bufan? He is indifferent to fame and fortune, because he is afraid of death, so he dedicates himself to the Great Dao and his heart to immortality. That should do it.

I sincerely have some advice for the author. Writing about Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils is fine, but you were already a king in The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber. In Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils, you completely abandoned the skills you learned in the past in order to seek the Dao and chose the Northern Darkness Divine Art. It was a step down because too many people had chosen the Northern Darkness Divine Art before, and readers were tired of it.