Online Game: The Apocalypse Invasion

Rebirth articles are about foresight that can bring you a sense of satisfaction. You have so many surprises before you even get out of the novice mission, so what's the use of your rebirth?

If you use AI, it is recommended to use it sparingly and look for the plot in the adjectives.

They are all reborn, and there are so many explanatory texts. There are 8 pictures of the place of resurrection.

After reading Chapter 14, I feel like I don't want to read anymore. There are too many useless modifiers in the text, and the plot advances very slowly in terms of content. The biggest problem is that what I encounter after rebirth are all accidents, and there is no prophet.

It's an all-time classic, online games, rebirth, the only special profession, but the problems are the same as those 20 years ago. It can't even be considered a Renaissance, because there is no progress at all. I always feel that as an author, at least when writing a certain type of work, and this type is very old-fashioned, you have to be a little innovative and progressive, even a little bit?

Being so verbose should be the limit of the author, not the limit of AI, right?

Many settings are really unreasonable. When a doctor changes his profession, he needs a spider mother's poison sac before the boss explodes. The boss is also reserved, and many materials can only be collected by collectors, which will be very expensive later.

Fifty percent of the plot in one chapter, the rest is all expanded using AI

This is a pile of words. AI won't be so verbose. Let's polish the writing.

Every chapter has the same problem, with almost 5-60% of it being adjectives. Whether it's the environment, objects, or actions, it's like writing a story and adding a bunch of adjectives to increase the number of words. It's really uncomfortable to read. Should the author consider changing it?