Two Worlds: I Have a World of Ancient Martial Arts

You obviously have a golden finger, but you still play like this. It's such a crapshoot, you'll feel uncomfortable just looking at it.

This novel feels very similar to my setting of a world of cultivating immortals, 🙂🤭

You can laugh to death with the help of external forces in the college entrance examination, but you can just take the hammer test and compare the equipment directly.

The root bone at 8 points is said to be extremely talented, but the level is only 5 levels acquired 🤔

Ten years ago, Celestial Candou Tudou was still writing about the third chapter of "Strength of Fighting", which was a standard slap in the face. This genre was very popular at that time, and the subsequent eras are improving, but the author's writing level cannot keep up with the progress of the times. It will be like this book. The author's thinking is obviously still stuck ten years ago, and he will eventually be eliminated if he cannot keep up with the development of Internet literature. I'm curious, don't veteran authors read novels? New trends, new genres, you can try all of these. Ten years ago, it was a waste material slap in the face, but ten years later it will still be a waste material slap in the face, which is boring.

There are too many loopholes in this book, and there are many inconsistencies. One moment it says that you cannot go down the mountain unless you are born with it, and the next moment you can go down the mountain. You can also take the college entrance examination wearing equipment. So if a rich person just wears a magic weapon, can't he just read this book? Do you still need to take the exam?

Can visualization improve the root bones? ? How to improve mental strength? What is the relationship between qi and blood and realm?

Why is it that there is a catastrophe in all books? The aura recovery technology has not disappeared. Moreover, there was not much aura in the beginning, so it cannot be too strong. And won't there be a breakthrough with more aura technology? In the past, it may be because of material problems.

The world setting is extremely rubbish: in a world where fast-changing beasts are being destroyed, all levels of society are still locking up martial arts and secret skills, and even low-level martial arts have set various thresholds. How lack of intelligence does the leadership have to do this? A level 2 concept method is not even taught to those admitted to the Immortal Palace. So where is the resistance in this world?

To be honest, what I am dissatisfied with is that nowadays, almost every novel about a high-level martial arts world and starting with the high school entrance examination gives people the impression that "if you fail to get into the top university in the college entrance examination, your prospects will be unsatisfactory." Therefore, the protagonist in each book relies on a golden finger to show off his skills. He obviously does not have many resources, but he can soar in the few months before the college entrance examination, and then enter a top university. Continuing to rely on Golden Finger to soar into the sky, but the resource advantages of the top universities highlighted earlier are not visible at all. Regardless of the great name of the school, the protagonist's growth is almost entirely driven by Golden Finger. Then I felt like I couldn't stand the book anymore.

This novel that received two literary bonuses is the most rubbish! The setting is time-travel, and the protagonist's behavior and behavior are completely indigenous. He also has a low IQ and performs all kinds of stupid actions. The entire world structure setting is also stupid, cannot be justified, and is all kinds of unreasonable. Once again, the protagonist is such an idiot, it makes me furious!

They are all poison points, national panels, inexplicable hostility, suspicion, low IQ, random settings can be changed at will, and even inconsistencies must be explained. Withdrawn

This book is 100% written by AI

I hope the author will stop writing it. The whole thing behind it is written by Al. It looks disgusting.

They always write about how others look down on the protagonist, think the protagonist is inferior even after winning the battle, and think there are various problems with the protagonist before the battle. What ancient writing method is used like this? This writing template is too rigid.

There were a lot of bad reviews, and Shen Nong was also scared.

What I wrote earlier will also apply to the college entrance examination later. It simply ruins the outlook on life. The first college entrance examination should be relatively fair. It's to find real geniuses. Rather than genius in equipment and background. The second is the difficulty of the college entrance examination. Is this called the college entrance examination? Let's raise Gu. Third. A third-tier city only has one quota. The author is kidding me. The book mentions that there are only over 100 cities in one city. Even if I accept a few hundred students in total. How did four schools with one school get no points? Are there dozens of times more teachers than students? In short, too much is not enough.

Extremely poisonous, the kind that will poison you to death in the first chapter. Firstly, the background is a civilized society. There are less than a hundred universities on one planet. Secondly, a concept is set, and only talented people teach. My God, in these two days of civilized society, this kind of mechanism that blocks people's progress, couldn't it have collapsed long ago?

It's quite difficult. There are two poison points at the beginning. The first is to test the medicine and teach the skills in the ancient temple. However, you suspect that there is something wrong with the medicine in that temple. When you hear the inheritance of the skills, you immediately give up your mental barrier and accept the initiation. . . What you shouldn't worry about is having your body taken away? You were beaten almost to death by that guard nearly a hundred times, and they cured you. Are you worried about him using medicine to harm you? You should worry about being taken away from your body after spiritual empowerment. . . Second, the gambling agreement before the college entrance examination is a pure fool's agreement. It is called a free agreement. No matter what, the other party will make a lot of money. What you pay and what you get are not equal at all. You gamble the entire material for emergency overtime pay? If you win, you still have to publicize it? You only have to pay the emergency overtime pay for 6 days? You even have to pay the original processing fee? If you lose, the materials worth 2 million are gone. . . At least try to get all processing fees waived and refuse free publicity. Just like a primary school student, he is a time traveler and loses his underwear 😥

I wanted to watch a few of them for free, but I didn't click on the comment section before reading it, because as we all know, the comment section of Qidian is not good at storytelling. The more I read, the more awkward I felt, but I couldn't tell what was wrong. I clicked on the comment area and found that everyone was thinking the same thing as me. This was enough to dissuade me, but what was even more dissuasive was the author's respectful reply... If the author has time to reply to these outrageous comments, why don't you go over your outline again and correct some inexplicable questions?

Alas, I thought about giving it a try with limited exemption, but I didn't expect that even with limited exemption, I couldn't stand it. .

It was a good read, but the author forgot all about the setting and discarded it.

Author, ask yourself, do you really know what you are writing about? You said that the 12 families are a trap. Most of the top leaders of the alliance cannot believe it. Moreover, the trial ruins have already shown that the alliance's system, including personal chips, is a trap Previous There are conspiracy theories and monopoly theories, and then there is a small problem when casting the foundation. It is like a dog looking at daddy, and it directly asks the artificial intelligence to self-destruct. If you wait for ten days and a half, this thing may be restored, but it turns out that it can't even wait for a day Are you afraid that others won't kill you immediately if you blow up your foundation? It's just a big protagonist template. No matter how hard you try to die, you won't be killed. The caution and caution in front of you can be thrown away in one breath.

The first few chapters are full of loopholes. You have a good foundation but low level. What are you busy with at the same age? The inexplicable bracelet can travel through time, it's better to just set it up and bring it over again! An adult is reborn and still talks and acts like a middle-aged boy? The protagonist can be said to have no highlights. The school beauty, the rich second generation, just pretending to be a slap in the face without even looking at it.

Why is this book exactly the same as "I Have a World of Immortality" 😰

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist's world power upgrade system is unreasonable, and the visualization chart improves the bones... So setting up running like this must be to improve your understanding. The setting is also wrong. The protagonist's superimposed talents in the two lives are not given preferential treatment, and there is no care for top students? The function of the gold finger is also very unexpected. Suddenly my mother bought back the ancestral gold finger? And in the martial arts society, every family has no secrets and only learns the most basic things. The whole family pools money together to buy an internal skill and no one in the family can share it? It's not that entities cannot be shared. It feels like it was written with the joint idea of ​​a studio. Avoid poison.

There are 1088 chapters in total, which is 200 chapters. The first realm, the acquired realm, has not yet been perfected. How about you?

The protagonist has a problem with his IQ. He often makes repeated mistakes. I don't know whether it's because of the author's poor writing skills or the poor word count. There is also a problem with the settings. His combat effectiveness fluctuates. He often has mismatched prefaces and follow-up words. I have forgotten the previous settings. I guess the author has not thought about it carefully.

I read more than 900 chapters and can't stand it anymore. It's too toxic. Starting from chapter 890, there are very obvious logical problems. There are often plots that have never appeared before or even no foreshadowing. The realm is chaotic. The protagonist can swallow concepts. He also feels dangerous to a guard of a chamber of commerce. It feels like a dream.

I'm speechless because the college entrance examination was so embarrassing. Making an armor was like a gambling agreement and all that mess.