Ninja Life Starting from Kirigakure

The plot and system setting of this book are still good, and the character of the protagonist is good. Although the characterization is not good enough (a common problem in online novels) and it is toxic (I endured it two or three times). Although it has a general routine of fantasy novels, what is outstanding is that other Naruto fans have almost adopted a fusion power system (it was weak in the later period and was as unfinished as the original Naruto). The author deeply investigated the original settings and added logical groundbreaking settings and ninjutsu, which very well ensured the readability and rigor of the novel.

It's really annoying. Terumi Mei went to the Mizukage audition to dance because she hated it? I'm really convinced that the protagonist is so accommodating and follows her, Terumi Mei is a ninja, why would she go to trouble someone just because she has a small opinion without any benefit? Don't you even use your brain? The protagonist just followed without stopping? You have no purpose, no interests, and no desire to change anything. Why are you going to give us dozens of anime plots? I'm really convinced. Isn't a fanfic just a novel written because you feel it shouldn't be like this and you want to change something? Show me the plot?

At the beginning, the protagonist's IQ was online, but after Chapter 37, he was forced to lose his intelligence, and all kinds of sexy operations came. Why can't he bear to kill people, chatting with girls on the battlefield, it's so awkward.

There's a lot of nonsense, no passion, no fun. After reading a hundred chapters, it's all about fighting. The fights on the battlefield are very slow, and there is no plot transition. After reading a hundred chapters, I still don't feel what the protagonist wants to express. At least it should be a little bit fun. There's nothing there.

This book is highly toxic and watery. It is best not to read it.

Judging from the protagonist's behavior of pursuing advantages and avoiding disadvantages, we can see that the protagonist is essentially a selfish person, which can also be said to be ruthless and unjust.

The author talks about the problem of leg strength. Walking and running are different. At the same time, the range of Rasengan and other fireballs is only tens of seconds, but it is exaggerated in comparison. It's better to say that you can see the animation effect. For example, Kaihuang Yekai physically distorts space. But the animation effect has been flying for a few seconds, so you don't really think that Ye Kai's speed is so slow 😵

Who is the protagonist? Who are the supporting characters? The protagonist's role is almost non-existent. After watching it for so long. It's almost exploding. 2 Updates a day. No climax. No updates, just plain. Uninteresting. It's so uncomfortable for book lovers

To be honest, Naruto is a story about fighting against father and ancestor (blood inheritance limit)! From Rokudō and Rokudō's mother, to Indra and Asura, to Hashirama and Madara, and finally Naruto and Sasuke, it was basically Rokudō and his family that caused the trouble. Those who don't have blood inheritance boundaries are just soy sauce. Even if there are blood inheritance boundaries and have nothing to do with the Liudao family, their lives are soy sauce! The most embarrassing ones without blood successors are Orochimaru and Jiraiya. It is possible that Namikaze Minato was the reincarnation of the sons of Six Paths. When he found out that his enemy was not reincarnated, he forcibly died and passed it on to Naruto (the Uzumaki bloodline was so embarrassing that he never fucked Minato, so Naruto inherited his yellow hair. You must know that the children born by the Uzumaki bloodline all have red hair)!

After reading dozens of them, I don't think there's any big problem. I just have something to say about the part where people gouge out their eyes and whiten their eyes. When Ren Zhishui fights against Tuan Guo King, he will be in a trance for a moment and his eyes will disappear. Why did the Zong family insist on writing three chapters while lying on the ground? In the final analysis, it is the so-called "don't want to lose the advantage of predicting the future", but what you are writing is a fan novel. If you don't have something of your own, then we might as well read the original work. When reading these fan novels, we just want to see the author's own thing and see the protagonist change the overall situation.

Through this book, it can be proved that the author is a senior water ghost. Everything else is fine but it is too watery.

The beginning of the Mist Ninja Ice Escape Orphan, Graduation at the end of the three battles, Zabuza at the same time, Demonic transformation story flow, Early war, Mid-term farming, Late four wars A qualified fanfic that requires careful reading and brainstorming Advantages: Excellent plot The battle description is outstanding There are endless exquisite settings and small details that help AB fill the gap The battlefield description reminds me of "Konoha Cold Wind", but it is better. It is very well written, full of layers, there are back and forth, and the protagonist is not brainless. The four battles are particularly well written! Poisonous Points: The psychological description is very awkward, the pig's feet seem to have no psychological fluctuations, which cannot be reflected in the language, and the feelings for Zabuza and Ao are very fake The mouth escape and its awkwardness The description of the group portrait (large scene with multiple supporting characters) is even more awkward When you get hurt, you only know a little bit Another: The article is watery but delicate The degree of magic modification is very high, but it is more reasonable and self-justifying The birth of Kiri Ninja makes Kirigakure Village 10,000 times worse than the original work If you don't lick Konoha, you won't lick the protagonist! Every time comes, heaven and earth work together, and heroes are not free when they are gone.

In fact, the fact that the main character is so watery now is to pave the way for the real main character, Obito Mizukage, to appear 🤫🤫🤫

The story is very interesting, but I feel like the word "playful" is almost filling my screen!

I don't understand. In the early stage, three genin and one chuunin led the team, so they dared to go to the head of the Hyuga clan alone? I remember that their clan leaders are usually at least jounin, right? And at least he can master the Eight Trigrams and Sixty-Four Palms. And in the world of Naruto, jounin can't be killed by a normal number of people, right? At least if you want to have a single jounin without too many casualties, the configuration should be satisfied with a special jounin + 2 chunin? ? And he is also the Hyuga clan leader of Konoha. I think Asuma must at least be a jounin and lead 3 ordinary Konoha chuunin. Reading what you wrote, I feel like the Hyuga clan leader is like a weakling who can be singled out by anyone? If your protagonist is a 3 genin + 1 chuunin and chases other clan leaders, even if there are many of you, there may be masters. The most you can do is support him, right? Your protagonist mode is also turned on too much, it feels bigger than Naruto. When Naruto and the others fought against Zabuza, the two of them almost died. (Sakura paddled the water monster) If Kakashi hadn't gone after Zabuza and left Haku to the two of them, Zabuza could have killed them casually, right?

Wow, the pace is too slow. I'm really not used to it.

The word count of the update is too small. One chapter is only 13-15 pages. What a huge pit. 24 Pages of other people's novels

The water is really good! As expected of someone from Kirigakure!

After seeing the ninety-ninth picture, I would like to express my thoughts. First of all, I feel that the portrayal of Orochimaru is not good enough. Orochimaru's mental journey of chasing the protagonist has always been "resentment". I don't think it should be like this. The description of Orochimaru's mind feels like the author took a common ninja, changed his skin, added some plots and psychology commonly used by novel villains, and just forcibly created Orochimaru. In my personal impression, Orochimaru remains sane 80% of the time, and when encountering abnormal things, he first thinks and then becomes interested, and it is almost difficult to see Orochimaru angry (does the author have any misunderstandings about Orochimaru?) As for the plot, there is actually nothing wrong with this aspect, that is, he often skips scenes and forces a watery word count, although Although it does not affect the progress of the plot, it still looks a bit stiff, but it is still within the acceptable range for most old bookworms # The following is my argument The author's new technique setting says, "Those who are hit by this move will either die or be disabled. There can never be anyone whose physical strength can be as strong as steel and diamonds." Regular chuunin jounin does meet this condition, but what about a level as strong as Metkai? Lord Ban asked, "How hard is jade?" Kai gave him a kick. Do you think the human body is as strong as steel? Is it comparable to diamonds?

I'll just talk about how the author abused the master. It took me three years to practice immortality. The Kirigakure Village appeared after Obito turned it into a puddle of mud. Wouldn't the protagonist make arrangements in advance? From the very beginning, she and Terumi Mei talked about the blood-stained snare. Even if they could say this, why couldn't she be guarded against Obito? Really vomited. Hurrying back, were you caught eating bear paws on the way? Then I went back to fight, all kinds of rhythms were played, and I felt uncomfortable even watching them. After practicing senjutsu and not being able to accomplish anything, he then resorted to subterfuge to torture Lin's body and force Obito to retreat. This must be too disgusting. The worst thing is that after doing all this, Mizukage hands him over to others, which is no fun at all. Author, do you really want this book to be popular? The protagonist is a guy who knows how to use despicable means to suppress others.

To all my book friends, don't try to read my last book just because you didn't feel it was enough after reading this book... It will kill you... You will make your eyes go blind... Listen to my advice... 😆

This is indeed an eye-catching high-quality Naruto fanfic Not to mention the discussion between the protagonist and Mei Terumi about blood stains, which makes people have to lament the author's whimsical ideas The whimsical ideas may be a bit exaggerated, but after seeing too much scientific research, the protagonists seem to have all their abilities. In terms of ability, they have to be close to Kaguya to be considered strong The protagonist here focuses on ice escape and Terumi Mei is obsessed with Blood-stained elimination, two lines, two development routes There are too many Naruto fans who are doing scientific research The Naruto fans who are affiliated with you also like you As someone who came from the Konoha Eight Colors era I have seen the protagonist's physical skills transcend time I have seen the permanent opening of the eight gates I have seen Naruto's defection through time For readers who focus on Naruto for a hundred years, this book is still worth reading. Personally, I feel it is not worse than those on the list.

Don't look at it, it's poisonous. The protagonist, a time-traveler, knows the plot very well. When he meets an important person, he will definitely kill him. Every time he hesitates to kill for fear of disturbing the plot, then he takes action, and then he is rescued. It took 5 years to learn the sage mode, and then it was no longer used to fight enemies and civil strife. It was used to show off and suppress the tailed beasts. I skipped and read, but in the end I found that it was still unfinished and unfinished.

You wrote Obito too strong... If Obito was so strong, Naruto would have ended the show long ago. Even the Buddha on top of the Senju Hashirama can't defeat Obito. I'm afraid you have some misunderstanding about the "God of Ninja".

I read it in one go, the book is good, the writing and conception are quite satisfactory It's just too slow, 1.6 Million words are covered in such a short time span, and I still have several years to learn the magic of immortality If I really wanted to pursue it, I would definitely give up halfway through, but it was still very smooth to read in one sitting

Regarding the complaint that I can only say 150 words in this chapter, the specific chapter discussed is the timeline chapter. The other half of the Yin chakra of Kyuubi was sealed by the ghoul, and it has been in the stomach of the god of death, and the half of the yang chakra is in Naruto. Then Naruto died, how can the half of the yang chakra be resurrected? So if Naruto dies at the beginning, the Kyuubi will also die. If the mask of death is not broken, can it still be considered alive if it has been in the stomach of the god of death? Although this must be a set-up, because there is a setting for the resurrection of the three tails later, so Kishimoto may have added a setting, saying that Naruto only has half of the Yang-type nine-tailed chakra sealed in him. When I first watched Naruto, I always thought that the entire nine-tails was with Naruto. When I saw the setting that the tailed beast can be resurrected, I was also very surprised why. Kyuubi wanted to help Naruto prevent him from dying. Later I saw Kishimoto's supplementary settings. When Minato sealed the Kyuubi, he only sealed half of it with Naruto, and when the other half was sealed on himself, I realized that the Kyuubi was Minato's gift to Naruto. You can only suppress the tailed beast, so it is really difficult for other jinchuriki to become a perfect jinchuriki. I also admire the eight-tailed jinchuriki who can become a perfect jinchuriki. I think the perfect jinchuriki of the Fourth Mizukage is fake, that is, Obito controls the three-tails or something, but Naruto does not need to suppress the nine-tails at all, so I really like it. Minato and his wife, this is just like telling Kyuubi clearly: You can't resurrect my son even if he dies. The other half of the chakra will be entwined with me in the belly of the god of death forever. If the whole Kyuubi is with Naruto, then the Kyuubi will definitely not be afraid of Naruto's death, but it is only half of the chakra. Kyuubi: I am also very helpless. Manual🐶

Let's just forget about Terumi Mei. Anyway, the Kiri Ninja Village was bombed, and I don't know anyone anymore. It would be so happy to be a free time traveler, but Terumi Mei is useless anyway.

Zabuza's death was a forced plot kill, and the protagonist's IQ was at the lowest limit. To deal with Obito, just channel Lin's dirty soil directly. It's no more useful than any other move. He casually said that he has a hundred ways to completely dissipate Lin's soul. I don't believe that Obito dares to do things in front of the protagonist. He insists on writing off the two supporting characters. To Obito, my pain is greater than yours, ugh! Forced plot killing

Ahem, cough, cough, it's a really good book! The author writes the book very carefully. This is not a fast-food article. The author has greater ambitions. He is really talking about that era and that world. Instead of simply writing about the protagonist, what did the protagonist do? In the author's eyes, the protagonist is on the same level as the trendsetters of that era. The protagonist can benefit from the tide of the times and adapt to its development, but one person cannot dominate an era. (Just like Roger in One Piece, one person can start an era and influence it, but it cannot be like in some cool novels where the protagonist can do whatever he wants) It is a very real and realistic novel, and there are many other excellent characters in the book. The supporting characters have flesh and blood and brains, and the protagonist just has an intelligence advantage. A very good book.

I saw more than 150 pictures, and to be honest, I felt a bit wet behind the scenes. The author's writing skills are good, but I can't stand a murderous Kiri ninja Terumi Mei who always pouted her little mouth, cried with joy, and had a blush on her face, shyness, kissing and the like I don't really want to read romance stories recently, so I collected them first and will read them later when I want to.