Naruto: The Eyes of Xuan and Su

Traveling through the Hyuga Separation, there is no golden finger, no harem, the writing and plot are not outstanding, and the poor results are understandable. A pure Naruto fanfic really tests the author's writing style. If you can't write an attractive story, you are really asking for your own death.

What kind of novel do you dare not start writing? Background, talent, character, ability, bloodline, opportunity, there must always be a golden finger, right?

Shinji Hyuga, Shinji Uchiha, I want to write a book about Shinji Senju

In this book, the main character should be the ceiling, and it should be more enjoyable. The final strength of the protagonists in the previous books was not very satisfying and not very satisfying.

Would a modern person help an old man who fell down? Would a ninja help an old man of unknown origin? Chapter 3: Persuading to Retreat

The evolution of the Byakugan, the Tenseigan, is really the biggest evolution in Hokage. It is much more exaggerated than the Mangekyou or the Rinnegan. It goes directly to the sixth level. The evolution is also very simple. Just add the chakra of the moon Otsutsuki and the pure Byakugan. It is easier to evolve than the Sharingan, and it takes a shorter time to take effect. It feels stronger than Madara's Rinnegan.

A bland batch. It's okay to think about the plot. Not interesting. After dozens of photos, it's still rubbish. He ran away decisively.

He persuaded them to retreat at the beginning 🙂. An old man sandwiched two people, walking fast and whipping their legs. In the middle, the two pigs would not join forces to resist! No matter how much Buza's water prison is broken, the genin can break it. I really can't complain.

In this way, the children of the separated family are given to the roots, and they are not afraid of breeding for others. Are you trying to exterminate the clan? Just like the Uchiha clan, it feels a bit deceptive to just send the children away like this without using manipulation methods.

Madonna for the mentally retarded, as a branch of the family, he has neither the strength to resist nor the pleasure of revenge. It was so disturbing that I skipped over to read some of the content. The whole text was basically not interesting at all, but a lot of abuse.