Naruto: The Eyes of Xuan and Su

It's understandable that a story set in the Hyuga branch family, without any special advantages or harem elements, and with mediocre writing and plot, would have poor results. Pure Naruto fanfiction really tests an author's writing skills; failing to write an engaging story is tantamount to suicide.

What kind of novel would you write if you don't even dare to use cheat codes? You need at least one of the following: background, talent, temperament, ability, bloodline, opportunity, or a cheat code, right?

Shinji Hyuga, Shinji Uchiha, I want to write a Shinji Senju novel.

This one needs to make the protagonist reach the pinnacle, there needs to be a satisfying moment. The protagonist's final strength in the previous books wasn't very satisfying, lacking any real thrills.

Would a modern person help an old man who has fallen down? Would a ninja help an old man of unknown origin? Chapter Three: Persuasion to Withdraw

The evolution of the Byakugan into the Tenseigan is truly the biggest leap in Naruto's evolution, far more exaggerated than the Mangekyou Sharingan or Rinnegan. It directly reaches the Six Paths level, and the evolution is also very simple. All you need is the Moon Otsutsuki chakra plus the Pure Byakugan. It's simpler to evolve than the Sharingan, and it takes less time and is more effective. Its strength also feels stronger than Madara's Rinnegan.

Extremely bland. Just randomly guessing at the plot. Boring. Still garbage after dozens of chapters. Time to quit.

The very beginning is enough to make you want to quit 🙂. An old man carrying two people moves with incredible speed and can even whip kick them, and the two pigs don't even put up a fight in the middle! Zabuza's water prison can be broken by a genin, I'm speechless.

Sending the branch family children to Root like that, without any fear of them being used for breeding, and then being exterminated like the Uchiha clan? It seems a bit unfair to just send them away without tampering with the branch family children.

This is a story about a brainwashed, saintly character. As a member of a branch family, she has neither the power to resist nor the pleasure of revenge. It's so frustrating to read. I skipped around to read some parts later, but the whole story is basically devoid of any satisfying moments, just a bunch of angst.