A Dragon, a Farm, and a Little Free Time

Does the author have any special hobby for Dragon Lady? Every book has

The first book has 1.53 Million words, the second has 320,000 words, and the third has 450,000 words. It exposes the shortcomings of insufficient understanding of current online writing ideas and outline plots. It is better to reflect more on the lessons of this book, a novel fantasy worldview and the idea of ​​​​farming literature. Ordinarily, there is nothing wrong with the two concepts, and the combination is also a work that can be expected, but there is no doubt that problems still arise: 1. The plot setting is too immature and rough 2. The characterization is too cliched and barren 3. The imagination development is too ordinary and boring If a two-dimensional indicator is used to measure the novel, then the most intuitive thing is the depth and breadth. Within the limited number of words, what makes you surpass other people's works is the depth or breadth of the story? Just now that you have finished the book, I can speak freely. If I were to write about this subject, I could write that the protagonist is an air pirate with a ship and a few like-minded assistants who came to Green Spike Territory by chance and became the lord here. The sky here is filled with many empty islands, the ground here is an endless sea and sporadic islands, there are tides of chaotic beasts, many countries and many strange and powerful creatures, there is the Golden Triangle trade, there are imperial fleet battles, there are great geographical discoveries, there are magical weirdos, there are rare treasures and wonders, the ancient empire thousands of years ago, the legendary empty island that fell into the sea, Atlantis, which contains infinite treasures. . . Just think about it, there is so much to write. This is the breadth. Is it difficult to write 1800 chapters? Look at the witch next door. The clichéd plots can be successful. Fantasy works are inherently infinite in breadth. If you can't write them, it just means you're lazy. Secondly, in depth, think about your theme, love? Conquer? You can write a lot. But why do they have focus and depth? Because we all know that fantasy works are false, but love and conquest are what we long for but cannot obtain. It is precisely because of these things that there is a bridge between fantasy and reality. In order to pursue the happiness that is unavailable in reality, readers are willing to cross the bridge and watch your false world instead of a collection of exquisite and complex settings. According to my setting, Chloe is the female fleet general of the empire, and you are an air pirate. The two are irreconcilable, but she eventually fell in love with you after experiencing a series of adventures. This is both conquest and love. Isn't it much more exciting than the original encounter? Lady Si Deng is a rational and wise female bachelor. They accidentally landed on an isolated island during a cooperative expedition, and supported each other and finally escaped from danger. These two plots are very cliché, just think about it, but which one is not better than your repost? The logic is reasonable, the characters' IQs are online, and the plot tension is very good. To be honest, I think the reason why you didn't write this book well is simply laziness.

Lion, come out here. When will I fill the hole 😡

He has a Western background, but he speaks in classical Chinese. He is a young master and holds a humble position.

The sky pirates cried, they contributed to the armed forces of the Green Spike Leader! ! ! 😏😏😏

I can only say that I should keep it first. The death rate of Lion's books is too high. So far, except for "Stars" and "Dragon Princess", all of them have received 404. I was so screwed by the fucked up starting point that I vomited blood, so I had to observe it before talking. And to be honest, the works after "God's Favor" have a feeling of ending hastily. I can wait if the update is slow, and I will keep up with the books that are updated every year, not to mention the monthly or weekly updates? But please be sure to tell the whole story and don't cut it in half. Leo, please work harder.

Ahem, author, this is my first time talking to an author. If there are any scumbags, please let me know. There is a big problem. The main reason is that there is no land in this book. Well, first of all, the floating island you mentioned is probably the same as the small stone underneath in Minecraft or Creation and Magic. This is unreasonable. First of all, the book clearly states that there are iron and copper mines. It is difficult to have such resources on an empty island, or in other words, it is difficult to have an entire stone, let alone the male protagonist. With the hang glider, even the airship cannot get close to the bottom of the sky island. This is called a floating island. It is not a block floating island in Minecraft or a command block floating island in which wood is exchanged for resources. It is urgent to change it now. For example, the capital of their country is located on a continent with rare minerals, and therefore has dominance. Otherwise, the sky island factor, not to mention buying iron or stone, how to make currency is a problem, isn't it?

Faster, faster, more. . . . . Why hasn't it been updated yet? Believe it or not, I will send you a blade. Let me tell you, my home is a blade factory. . . .

Come on, Lion~ From when I was watching Constellations in high school to now I have become a middle-aged uncle, I have always supported and liked your works!! Now I have the financial ability to give monthly tickets and subscribe to all the works I have read before. I have been waiting for this book for a long time and hope to continue writing. It is really good~

Read Chapter 20 Where is your dragon? What about the fields you farm? Why is a fantasy-style book called fantasy? Are you kidding me?