I'll Build a City in Another World

Well, I feel like the author is very young, the plot is very childish, and simple logic is incomplete without saying whether it is reasonable or not. Even a novel should pay attention to some basic principles.

It looks okay from the front, but the national war is too trivial. There is no direct description of the outcome of the war, there are no number of participants, and the war involving millions of troops ended in a day or two?

The book is very good. I hope the author will continue to read it. I will try my best to recommend it to my friends.

Although many of the plots are not compact enough to read, I hope the author can create it carefully. Come on

I read and discarded the novel The Queen's Lover before. I hate people who suddenly gain power and then come back to show off. As a Chinese, you are not forced to help the government, but you still show off your sense of superiority in front of state departments, which makes people feel uncomfortable. They don't understand their own position clearly. They are just freeloaders, and they rely on women to win the whole process, so stop pretending like that.

It is indeed a bit unreasonable, so just read it as a cool article, otherwise it will be more serious and I really can't stand it, it's too unreasonable. Opening a store with such powerful and effective products has already attracted the attention of interested people. You really think they are all good men and women. You have eaten so hard that you have eaten all the bones. Are you sure that this little leaf red sandalwood really dares to directly use the raw materials? It is still so big and so new. When someone investigates your background, it will be revealed. Don't be too brainless. When you write an article like this, it depends on your good intentions so that no one will read it. If your intentions are not good and the writing is full of loopholes, no one will read it. I hope the author will get better and better. I really hope to see more good works 🤐🤐🤐

Has the author celebrated Children's Day? Please update soon 🙂

The author's ability to travel back and forth is too big for this kind of feudal society. As long as he contacts the government, he can become CEO in minutes, marry Bai Fumei, and reach the pinnacle of life. It's just that this pig's trotter has no brains, and it can't even tie its thighs.

A low-end version of the pretty girl from the Empress' family

When it's over, I don't even know the queen's name 👍

I originally thought the novel was okay, and the alien development genre suited my taste. I didn't expect that I wouldn't take it when I saw it. After the customer ate his meal, the blood continued to flow, so he took a basin to catch it, for fear that it would contaminate the ground and make it difficult to clean up. The female customer was bleeding, so he stabbed her wrist with a knife. I have to say, you are a real tiger! Look at the description at the back, "A few people shed half a basin of blood." Oh my God, are you a hotel? Aren't you afraid of being shot as a terrorist? This magical novel has opened my eyes 😰

What are you writing about? If common sense is not online, you can still see if you forget about it, but if you lose IQ, the problem will be big. A war is about to begin, but the generals below have not received the news. It took only three days to mobilize an army and go on an expedition, which was even more impressive than modern times. I can bear to watch these. But the new currency has not been popular for a long time. In order to occupy five cities, we just throw the currency and Dingguo Shen to eject these two nuclear weapons. Only children dare to play like this when they are playing house. Are there only three countries in the world? Just five cities? You must know that once trust is destroyed, it is not twice as difficult to rebuild it. Unless there is no need to issue new currency in the future.

To be honest, the protagonist should have died in the first chapter

You can still read this book without thinking. There are too many places in it that you can criticize, but I don't know how to criticize. The author writes the book without thinking, and we readers don't use brains either. Newbies can read it.

Overall, it's pretty good, but the author didn't consider everything. The most important issues were area and time. I found that the speed was too fast, like reaching the beach in one day. According to your previous description, this is unreasonable. There is also the problem of the time flow rate between the two worlds. There is no best of both worlds. It is impossible for the leaves of a world tree to speed up the protagonist's time when he goes there. The time flow rate should be set to constant. There are also things like building houses and factories, which give the impression that the protagonist only needs one sentence. But it all takes time. It is recommended that the author can increase the number. It's like cultivating immortals for n years. Don't be like some novels where it takes a year for an ordinary person to cultivate to a certain ability. Reaching a point that it took others thousands of years to reach.

There is obviously more that can be written. Why is it finished? Things on Earth are finished. The parents on Earth have not been shown the development process of their daughter. There is still so much to write. Why is the world finished so quickly? I am still looking forward to the protagonist taking the empress and her daughter to find the parents of the protagonist.

Yes, after reading two chapters, the empress threw a hydrangea and the ball flew into the protagonist's arms. Then the supporting character said that if she killed the protagonist, the empress would throw the hydrangea again. Little white text. Well, that's probably it. Fine!

I'm drunk. The New Earth is really vulgar and there are no rules and restrictions. It's really disgusting. Isn't it good to write science fiction and build industry? It has to be some kind of fantasy

The protagonist's name is important. Don't use random names, which will affect reading.

What kind of imperial dining room is opened in modern times and the subsequent plot really poisoned me to death?

Archeology, incomparably, incomparably, incomparably ancient

I don't really like the modern plot. It's too abrupt. It suddenly jumps when I watch it. It feels like I'm not reading the same book.

I finished reading it in a few minutes. The author's new book is okay, but this book is just a rip-off.

Does the author have no idea about the collection of financial expenses? All the taxes collected went to the imperial city? You don't have to pay your own wages, don't you know that production and construction consume the most money? As soon as I had some money, I was speechless when I gave it to the Imperial City. It really comes out of nowhere. .

I can't stand it anymore. What is courtesy, what is control, what is power? I don't understand why I wrote this kind of book. I ran away.

It's a good idea, but the writing is not good and it's a bit tasteless. Friends who are not good at reading can give it a try.

What is the queen's name? I don't even know after reading it. She's about to get married and calling her empress is a bit strange.

I,,,, you,,, ugh

I have seen Chapter 650 before, but when I changed my phone, my previous subscription was locked again

This is my first time reading a book and commenting on it, damn it! It's too poisonous, right?