I'm Building a Starship on Earth

My light novel. The first 50 chapters are almost all daily without getting to the main point. The Nantan setting is a big mess, and other nonsense is wasted for a long time. There is also an offline for a long time in the middle. If you don't have the writing power, you might as well just write the rabbit girl to death. By the way, I suggest you leave it in the two-dimensional area.

Brother, please reopen ①Submit light novels to the two-dimensional area or simply go to other sites. Not many in this area like the kind of grinding, sticky and sticky novels that disturb daily life even if they destroy the world. It is not your fault but the fault of your choice; ② In today's fast-paced society, if you don't plan to continue the Japanese style, you'd better learn how to write the three golden cards and the boss battle in Novice Village; ③Tenderness and friendliness are not the mainstream of male protagonists' online stories, decisive killing and decisiveness are, and pleasure and grudges are. Don't stay overnight if you have a grudge. Only by reporting it on the spot can you maximize your enjoyment; ④ You can't be a housewife by licking a dog. You either let the heroine take the initiative, or you don't want the heroine at all. Just kidding, in a world where you can become stronger by working hard, women are just supplements, not necessities. Instead of wasting time doing this, it's better to become a stronger woman and take the initiative to post; ⑤ If you want to be scolded in a novel, the longer the foreshadowing can be buried, the better.

It has the flavor of an ancient second dimension, with the loser Asasi as the protagonist, a powerful heroine, weird daily life, and a sudden appearance of a supernatural organization, which gives you a sense of déjà vu. The whole text is about sudden shooting. You can use other methods to fight. After everything is done, the protagonist is just like a normal person without the slightest fear of death. It is not necessary to shoot. The act of not shooting will have no impact on the follow-up.

This author wrote a book almost twenty years ago, written in the style of a space opera, called Constellations. Xia Lan mentioned in this work is the content of the previous book, and now it is used as the background. As an old book friend, I am looking forward to the reappearance of the Tyrant. If new book friends think this book is worth reading, it is recommended that you search the Internet for supplements to previous works.

1. Illegal possession of guns is a big deal in our country, not to mention shooting a person who was killed more than ten years ago now? 2. Is this how the other party shoots you and wants to kill you? 3. Our country is a society governed by the rule of law. As long as you call the police and say there are gunshots somewhere, let alone a mountain road, the special police and the police station will let you know what happiness is. 4. If you say you dare not call the police for fear of being exposed, then I have nothing to say. Since there is stealth and uncles can drive a stealth and hide the rabbit, it will be fine. 5. Brother, guns are now banned in China! Ban guns! Ban guns!

Surprisingly, the lazy lion is resurrected. It was 21 years ago when I read the last book You Wei Tian, ​​but it feels like I haven't seen you in ten years.

The first few chapters are too slow, and it seems that the author can't keep up with the development of the online novel.

It wouldn't be science fiction if we didn't write about subspace, right? When did subspace become a standard part of science fiction?

The first 40 or so chapters can basically be condensed into five or six chapters. Then the title was thought to be a cool article, but it turned out to be a daily article. It is recommended to change the title or divide it into sections.

It's so long-winded and not suitable for me to read.

The author is a liar, Stars has always been the best space opera in my mind.

Is the author Japanese? Why do you feel like you are inside and outside the industry? It feels like a little Japan.

It's so poorly written. For someone who shoots at him as soon as they meet, he actually wants to reason with him instead of directly killing him. It's like playing house.

The writing style matches my radio wave, and I think it's okay. It's just too wordy, with a huge amount of descriptions of psychological activities, and untimely plot development, it's hard to resist. I couldn't hold my breath when I saw the part about going back to recycle the bunny girl's equipment and adding a lot of experience of the motorcycle girl's internship. What's the point of putting this in if it's not about saving the little alien girl? Does it have anything to do with the current plot development? The ambush was not buried at this time. The audience is eager to see the plot of retrieving the equipment unfold. I can't stand it anymore when I see this. This is no longer just writing. It's because the author has completely let himself go.

I really liked "Constellation" back then, and I still watch it now. Unexpectedly, the salary thief and Admiral Rice Chong of the past came back to life again. But it seems that I came a little late. I started reading it, but then it stopped updating again 😵

The author is still here, Xingqun has been around for almost 20 years, we are really old friends.

It's too late, let's see who I find 😰

It's been more than ten years at the snap of a finger. It's great. Since you want to go to the stars and the sea, you have to persevere. Come on!

I used to see your divine companionship, but now I can still think of it occasionally

Very good, with a leisurely and comfortable pace. I haven't seen a book that suits my taste in a long time.

Oh My God. I've seen stars before, how many years has it been?

I was a fan of Xingqun's old book back then... I always thought that the old lion was born at the wrong time~ In addition to the character names that deceived the author, the other plots and writing are also above average~ It's been almost twenty years~ Just come back

Pounce again? Boss, write well!

Looking forward to the day when it becomes a natural disaster

Not bad, update soon. Thanks!

It looks good, it looks good, 🤭🤭, more updates from the author.

When I saw the lion, that familiar feeling rushed over me.

The speed at which this plot unfolds is at least 10 updates per day.

It seems pretty good, but I don't know if it's because I haven't read this type of article before or something.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~