Monsters, Fields, and a Little Money

The author should not blindly let the protagonist suffer. The protagonist is already a master and has integrated into the rules of this country. Logically speaking, how can he not know the prices? Is that Fangshi intermediary just for a living? Don't always write about that novice. You've already written her in a negative light. If you're trying to whitewash her, then I'll quit. The subject matter is obviously very good, water.

The writing is okay, the setting is good, and it has the potential to be a hit. Don't be an eunuch easily. Many of the books are based on accumulated experience.

Aren't you the trash protagonist of Japanese comics? Have you never seen a woman ask you to go to a health care store? No normal man can stand a woman like Bai Minghua. What men like is always the gentle type. He has never seen a woman or been in love before and thinks that as long as she is beautiful, anything will do.

If it was a man who kicked the protagonist, it would probably be an undying hatred, but what if this person was a woman? Then he might be taken in as a mistress by the protagonist. Is this kind of mentality normal?

This woman Bai Minghua is too poisonous. If I don't kill her, I will feel uneasy. If the author continues to write like this, it will be cool!

I feel that the protagonist is a bit cowardly. He obviously has collateral, but he still has to be arranged in various ways. After finally finding a way to pay back the money, he still has to comfort himself after being targeted. He also has no ill intentions towards that short winter melon. There is also a medical potion worth 500 in one tube. Do you give it to others casually or just give it to one bottle? Are you not in a hurry to pay back the money?? If you give it to Guan Hai, it can be said to be of indirect help. Then why give it to someone who always laughs at you!?? Isn't Xian's taunt harsh enough? And the thief Xiao B who was injured because of stealing things has too much money and no place to spend it???? The author's writing is okay, but it's not to my liking. I'll leave now.

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Well, I was attracted by the subject matter at first. It felt like I was in a different world and was attracted by different folk customs. There was also special energy that gave birth to special species. I thought it was Pokemon. I thought the author's main focus was to write about monsters with various characteristics. There are also various barbarians with different racial characteristics. In short, they are considered to be farming people. Later, refugees, famines, devastation and chaos appeared, and the protagonist achieved the result of various coincidences that turned the tide. Well, although I feel that the subject matter is not purely farming, these are acceptable. The final reason for abandoning the article was probably the protagonist's character and characterization. I don't know what kind of person the author wants to write the protagonist into! Holy Father? He made the thief his subordinate, and Chang Pu accidentally made a mistake that caused the protagonist to suffer so much loss, and even almost put his life in danger, but Good Luck was saved, and the protagonist never scolded her. The female clerk rashly brought Pu Chang to the workplace, and she didn't feel any remorse afterwards, which was very inconsistent with the protagonist's description of her character. The protagonist was saved by the young master of the Bai family. This was not just the use of the precious phoenix spiritual water. Well, he saved a dying man in the wilderness, used the store's treasure, and then brought him back to resettle him. Then the protagonist's reward was to pay back the money for the medicine, without any gratitude to the young master Bai. Later, because he didn't know if he could make the elixir within half a year, he didn't want to pay back the money but instead returned the medicine. Haha, why doesn't the protagonist want to repay those who are kind to the protagonist, and why does the protagonist not even blame him for those who have caused substantial harm to the protagonist? This character creation is too strange! There is also Bai Minghua, her character creation is hard to describe in one sentence. One moment he is said to have business talent, the next moment he appears to be such an idiot, the next moment he is portrayed as a villain, and the next moment he is whitewashed in various ways. There are many others too lazy to give examples.

I can only say that the idea of ​​monsters is very good, but the relationship between the characters feels disgusting. It is not well handled and expressed well. I don't know what the author wants to portray Bai Minghua into. Our readers' view of this Bai Minghua is: very annoying. It just forcibly fabricates the feeling of a villain without expecting the author to correct it. Abandoned🙂

The beginning of your book is pretty good, about that Bai Minghua, and that Yan Shi. Well, I'm not a person who doesn't like to suffer losses, but you have a problem with your kind of suffering. You, that whole Bai Minghua, I feel that you should I should have wanted to write about tsundere, but now you don't look like a tsundere, and your personality contradictions don't look like a strong business woman at all. I feel like you're just a stupid, silly person, a very annoying woman, and that Yanshi, whether it's When his teammates were rescued, he taunted the protagonist, tried to take action, or went to the big pit and kicked the owner into the pit. I felt that this woman was unacceptable. I felt like I wouldn't survive three chapters. I saw Enshi kicking the protagonist into the pit. I feel like I can't stand it anymore. I'm afraid there will be another plot like this, and I won't be able to bear it, so I'll withdraw first. Generally speaking, I think what I wrote before is okay, but in general, it's a good book at the beginning, and that's it from now on, right?