Fengshen: The Immortal Venerable of Great Love

In the world, the wind and snow stain the temples with frost, always exchanging heroism for hesitation. Seeking fame is full of tears, but seeking profit is full of wounds. Time lingers in the mayfly's dream, so why fear the long road to immortality in the world? One day, the sky will hold the Taoist master, and the waning moon will replace the true sun! ——From the introduction of this book

To be honest, the protagonist is a hypocrite. Since you believe weakness is the original sin, stop saying things like Taiyi Zhenren killed him or Yuanshi Tianzun looked down on him. Since your foundation is so shallow, who else but you should die? Why doesn't the protagonist feel any remorse for killing others?

I saw a few hardcore readers saying in the book review section that I was a little careless in my use of allusions. Let me explain it here! First of all, I know that this allusion was used by the people of the Xia Dynasty to curse Lu Gui (Xia Jie).

Brother, you've even got the introduction wrong. "When will the days end? I will perish with you" is a curse from the people against Xia Jie, not Xia Jie cursing Cheng Tang. Please check the history before using any classical allusions.

After reading three chapters, I feel there are a few issues. Since it's a primordial world, how could a dynasty, as the core of humanity, only last a few hundred years? It's a bit strange that the protagonist, who murdered his father and relatives, was imprisoned in the animal realm for violating the natural order.

Han Yi's political acumen is too low, even though the author tries his best to portray him as an ambitious, courageous, and well-rounded lawless evil. But Han Yi really offended everyone, whether they wanted to or not. If the author hadn't protected him, he would have been killed by Hunyuan Rendao long ago.

There's really no need to completely cite someone's ancestral knowledge, especially since your record of sages is utterly meaningless.

The beginning was quite discouraging. The Emperor's naive and pretentious attitude was really low-class, unlike someone who had cultivated for many years and possessed great supernatural powers. And what's this about the Book of Life and Death only recording sins and not reasons? Please, the Investiture of the Gods calamity is over; there's no longer any calamity obscuring the will of Heaven.

Cultivating immortality? They've lost all humanity!

"Han Yi, what exactly did you do? How are we supposed to fight against the Heavenly Dao without Hongjun?" The crowd stamped their feet in anxiety. Han Yi smiled calmly, "It's simple, I'll just become a Venerable." After saying that, his cultivation level was revealed: Chaos Great Dao Venerable.