Lord of the Demon Realm

，（），， Even making changes based on mythology would require a lot of data review. I am a student with no money, so I can only watch pirated versions instead of genuine ones, so I don't know if I have the nerve to say these things here. But I still want to thank Sizuo for bringing us such a good book.

The author seems to have lost contact with his new book. What's the matter?

I finally found a way to avoid being poisoned by the garbage coming and going at the starting point. This is also the correct way to use the Qidian app! At the same time, it is also a way to solve the shortage of books and the short and weak author. I have only 46 chapters for so long!

Come on, come on, the boss, the author wants women's clothing in white silk stockings. I'll book tickets with a reward of 10,000 yuan first. If this building exceeds 10,000 yuan, the boss may live broadcast the pure land of paradise in women's clothing.

What should I say when building a reward building~ Hmm~ How to settle the settlement depends on your mood~ Whether cleaning the building counts also depends on your mood~ Hmm~ I'm in a good mood, let's give it a try first~ 23333~

Anyway, the plot at the beginning is okay, and there are some surprises. The language was very strange, but I tolerated it. After that, it became more and more popular, especially promoting girls took up more and more space. It might be better if it was written as a party struggle, but it would be uncomfortable if it was written as Brother Cheng.

Alas, a good book is so unfinished. What a pity. There is obviously still a lot of foreshadowing. The story of the gods has not been finished yet. There are many, many more. What is the reason for the poor results?

I have read about 50 chapters, and I feel that the plot in the novel is too rushed. There are so many plots within an hour of starting the server. You are not giving ordinary players a way to survive! Everyone has a process of adapting, let alone an online game that spans generations. For most players, it takes half a day to stretch their muscles, become familiar with the plot, become familiar with the gameplay, and observe around to satisfy their curiosity, and then there is a huge gap between them and those so-called internal beta players.

It's so good, the audience has too much fun. Who plays a game and follows you just to watch you show off? Nowadays, all online games are written this way, and I can't stand it after reading Chapter 2. Just keep your game plot quiet. Forcibly inserting viewers into it to make up for the word count will only make the writing more difficult.

Blank, brother and sister, is this a tribute to the anime game life?

In the beginning, the 100-plus chapters of the game plot were brilliantly written. However, once the author met a woman, his style of painting suddenly changed. After the samurai became a woman, the interaction between the two was really awkward in my opinion.

Don't write novels, rely on shit

I just found out it's finished now. I thought there would be more to come, but today I clicked on the introduction and found out it's already finished. Didn't the author even have a final statement? ? ? Or don't even want to add the word "finale"? 🙂 It's uncomfortable. Unfortunately, I have been looking forward to the follow-up. My mentality has collapsed.

I really want to know how to use a hula hoop

This author can't distinguish between cities and games, and writes too many things about the real world. . . Can you write a good game?

Is the welfare group still there?😥

Do you still recommend the guide that I watched earlier? No new books at Qidian?

Damn it, this is too stupid. It's normal to explain ten sentences in one sentence and two or three sentences in a chapter. The rest are just explanations. And women are too self-righteous. They get angry when others don't like them. Do others know them? Too poisonous

I felt uncomfortable reading the introduction. How do the 24 time zones correspond to the 16 realms?

I read this book in high school and thought it was pretty good, except for the ending. Unfortunately, it's 24 years now and he can't keep up with the times.

I'm looking for an old book with a plot very similar to this one. The protagonist is also reborn to steal someone else's hidden career. He also gets a stronger hidden career, but he feels ashamed that the person originally gave him his hidden career before he was reincarnated.

I was shocked. I suddenly saw this book on the recommendation list. What happened?

Fungus himself also said that the plot has reached a critical point, and reality and the game are gradually intertwined and synchronized. Regarding today's update, I have a somewhat immature view. Although the protagonist's identity that he had been trying to hide in these two chapters was exposed, which was very unpleasant, and Su's character reversal was even more disgusting, but when I think of the 3,000 words that were deleted due to pressure from the chapter reviews before it was published, and the author's words that he "didn't gain trust", I feel that as a reader, we should believe in Fungus and believe that he can write a wonderful plot through this turn, instead of becoming a depressing and poisonous point.

Isn't this book from a few years ago? I remember returning it and dropped it.

Are there many female protagonists? Not much so I won't watch it

More than 50 chapters and not even level 5😅😅

What the hell is the protagonist's tag, Jiang Xili?

I get it every day, it's a bit outrageous

Reporter: I saw this book again on Twitter. Did the author have a prosperous trumpet account? Cold rice can also be fried every day

Although I am still a student, I still support the author. I have been watching it since The Witcher. Although the fighting scenes are very good, there is no unique and exciting plot to support it. I feel a little tired after watching it. The author of this book has obviously been digging holes. He probably hopes to lay out a line one by one, and finally pull up a huge network to form a wonderful and rich storyline. It can be seen that Zhongerji has great ideas. He hopes that the more he writes, the more exciting he will be, and the writing will not collapse. I really like authors who have ideas. By the way, isn't it about Norse mythology? Why do I seem to see mostly Greek mythology? By the way, here is a little suggestion. Since you are writing about Bai, you should give her more perspective and make her more plump. I think Bai's current character is too common. Almost all girls have this character. You can add some other things to her to make her whole character very unique and impressive. Of course, this also requires the author's level of character construction to support it. For example, if you have a fierce and heroic temperament, after entering the game, you will be able to take charge of your own business, be wise and martial, and be wise and powerful. Or Bai particularly likes something, such as a big hammer, which seems to have violent tendencies (weapons in the game), but in fact it can create a huge contrasting effect. (My opinion is a bit cute, and it may differ from others) I think the most important thing about a book is the plot (the background of the novel reflects the depth), but the character structure is also extremely important, followed by the ability to polish (that is, the writing style, at some times, some readers regard this as the first priority). The author of this book is obviously very thoughtful, and the plot and background settings are very good, but in my personal opinion, the characters are a bit weak. My humble opinion, I just hope it can help Zhongerbusa. Of course, every author has his or her own strengths and weaknesses, so just work hard and your ideas, skills, and writing style will continue to mature. Come on! !