Or Are the People on Earth Ruthless?

I've read Chapter 270, so take some time to write a book review First of all, the author's emojis are very expressive, which is what attracts me the most. Secondly, although the writing and plot do not meet the requirements of a master level, it can basically justify itself and has its own system. Finally, the novel is well written. Then, let's talk about the shortcomings, because I haven't read the author's other books and I don't understand some of the plot points very well. The thing that made me complain the most about this book is the character setting and creation of Gao Wen Gao Wu. I think the author probably wanted to portray Gao Wen, who is outgoing and cheerful, daring to love and hate, and Gao Wu, who is introverted and reserved, and gives silently, which forms a cute contrast with their names and characters. However, Gao Wen gave me the impression of being a bit bitch, with a relatively strong personality. As a result, Black and White have long been portrayed as having a bottomless feeling of kneeling and licking Gao Wen. Although everyone has their own preferences, and there are such people in the world, they still conflict with mainstream values ​​and are difficult to be accepted by everyone. Secondly, the author's foreshadowing of Gao Wu's appearance is too bad. Instead of writing so much, it would be better to write that when Gao Wu, who transformed into a cat, meets Black and White for the first time, write that Cat Gao Wu gives Black and White a very familiar and important feeling, but it is overshadowed by Gao Wen's existence. This can also highlight Gao Wen's cheerful personality and attract the public's attention, and also portray the importance of Cat Gao Wu to Black and White. The portrayal of Gao Wu is also a little worse. Gao Wen and Gao Wu should have complementary personalities. In this way, Gao Wu can make up for some of the feelings that Black and White cannot feel in Gao Wen. In this way, Gao Wen and Gao Wu are the indispensable bond to Black and White. The current Gao Wu gives people a feeling of unwillingness, a feeling of being trying to steal a corner, and it feels like he is a little behind in terms of realm. Furthermore, for each copy, it would be better to review it in black and white and explain the various film and television timelines that are mixed together. For example, Spider-Man, I was confused about this timeline. After the system announced it, I would use half a chapter or a chapter to refresh the timeline. I don't mind it, I just want to review the past and learn something new. Finally, a book review is a book review after all, and it only represents my personal opinion. The author can accept it or stick to it. After all, success can mean absorbing everyone's opinions or sticking to his own ideas. For readers, it represents an opinion and is for reference only. You may find it very suitable for you.

Aren't there women who can play tragic roles? It would be great to ask Gao Wen to make one

Damn, the author is asking for advice again. . .

For housekeeping, order another batch of lunch boxes. If the delivery is so slow next time, I will replace it.

Can I call it a trap if I cheat you as a teacher? That's called a test

Why can't I watch it? It's not that the writing is bad. I feel that the main character has no characteristics and has a bit of a dog-licking taste. It just feels like it's missing a bit of flavor.

Don't worry, don't be crowded, there are still lunch boxes, get in line

Noble weapon for men! Still wondering which one it will be

Director, um... Look at me dying so miserably, can I add chicken drumsticks to this lunch?

The Bronze Saint cried and fainted in the toilet

Give me everything you took from me in exchange for it,

Housekeeping, hurry up, another one is coming out

Director, it's really miserable. Why don't you add an omelette to him?

Well? I feel like this game is stable, so wouldn't it be possible to still fight?

Director, what kind of lunch did you order for me? This is almost finished, can we talk about it?

I'm not as violent as the profile says.

Wonder Woman's son is Captain America! Only Captain America, who possesses the Godhead of War and the Golden Dragon of Luck, is qualified to participate in the final battle! I probably guessed what the author had in mind! Hahaha 😄

I haven't seen it on the shelves yet, but the author's emotional dramas are already disgusting to me. I don't understand why so many authors are so confident and want to challenge things they are not good at. If you don't know how to write, why don't you just stop writing emotional dramas? I don't care whether it's a harem or no cp. What I want to watch is not emotional dramas. Write less and make less mistakes.

This protagonist is really useless in the early stage, with all kinds of tricks, low IQ, and all the secrets told to Gao Wen and the women in the relevant departments. Can't things like belief systems be traded? All the guns were traded and the belief system was completely pulled out. After discovering the belief weapon, I also added a piece of information. As a mission, I read more than 50 chapters. The protagonist asked the relevant departments for help several times, and these 50 chapters involved so many movies superimposed on top of each other. Some of them have never been heard of. It is very complicated and messy. The protagonist's personality is not great, but the subject matter and writing are very good. The portrayal of the characters is also good, but it looks terrible and tasteless.

Looking at Black and White's love mission, I just felt that it was too poisonous. If you have a girlfriend and find a true love, why don't you break up and focus on loving your true love? He confessed his love to Lin Mei from the bottom of his heart while having sex with Gao Wen, and then said that he only had responsibility. This responsibility is probably Black and White's own selfish comfort that he at least did not dump Gao Wen. Now looking at the idea of ​​going to the United States to save Gao Wen in anger before, I am afraid that he also wanted to use his strength to scare others, which is the biggest purpose. Some people say that the author has always been the principal and the mistress. At present, it seems that the principal is responsible and the mistress is the most loved. I don't know how many people can tolerate this kind of principal who is only in name but not loved by the male protagonist. I don't know if Lin Mei will directly become the principal after being resurrected in reality and then dump Gao Wen. After all, it is true love in black and white. I didn't like Gao Wen at first, but now I hate Lin Mei even more because of the black and white scumbag. I really can't stand the emotional drama in this book...

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. The way of writing the ex-girlfriend scene was common in ancient times, and according to today's terms, it is extremely poisonous. It doesn't have to be a female protagonist. In fact, it can be deleted, or a plot can be set up later.

If it weren't for the cheating love line, this book would be a hit even without being a god. . . Hanging on the male protagonist ~ green tea, threatening and jealous at every turn ~ savage girlfriend, this kind of annoying female protagonist comes with two characters, the author is really awesome (¯ㅂ¯crimin)

I can't help but complain. The plot is very good. It's hard to find something similar in so many books. It's just the portrayal of the heroine that makes me feel extremely uncomfortable... Of course, it's just my feeling. Some people like it and some don't. I didn't like Gao Wen at first, I thought she didn't even look like a normal girl. What the hell is this feeling of falling in love with someone above you? Is this love or not? But the emotional scenes in black and white left me even more speechless. Love is really, really true, and very selfish. Once you are in a relationship with someone, you will never want others to share your partner, and a truly responsible person will not hook up with others (so I feel that Black and White are not responsible to Gao Wen to a certain extent. Don't whitewash me, cheating is cheating, No matter what the reason, you betrayed your partner. Gao Wen has more resources. Why didn't they find a "male version of Lin Mei" for Black and White? ) Although Black and White and Lin Mei spend a lot of time together in the plot, you have slept with Gao Wen, and you didn't accept Lin Mei before, but now you accept it? There is a suspicion of not cherishing it once you get it. The plot after rescuing Lin Mei is similar to announcing his love affair to the world. It really disgusted me. Would you like a little face? What the hell is it that makes you feel so confident about cheating? I know not everyone will feel uncomfortable. Maybe they like the plot of a harem? Or do you think Lin Mei and Black and White are more suitable? But my friends who step into Black and White's shoes, I would like to ask, if Gao Wen and the others also go on a love mission, each brings a lover back, and then suddenly and confidently broadcasts it live to the world without Black and White's knowledge, what a surprise, I can't stand it anymore, I just love, I just want to be together, I just want to express it and announce to the world that I contracted this NPC, I don't know how many people will feel uncomfortable seeing it? And what about the original young couple? One person leads one lover, do you still ask the other person to be tolerant and accepting? From the relationship of two people and the entanglement of three people to the love family of six people? Do you still feel good? Comparing my feelings, although the role of Gao Wen was not well portrayed, she did not leave after the protagonist cheated. A girl with strong self-esteem did not leave and wanted to redeem herself. I think that although she is not perfect, I will not hate her anymore. But what about Lin Mei? The standard mistress mentality is that if you love me, I don't care about the whole world. I just want to be with the person I love. I just want to be on top. What was she thinking? She would kill her first wife, and then the black and white would be hers. What does this reveal? She wanted Gao Wen to die. Compared with Gao Wen, the judgment is clear. Of course, I also know that this is just a character in the author's writing, and there is actually nothing like that. How the plot develops is all in the author's writing, but I just can't help but think that if I were Gao Wen, I would have let the protagonist die long ago. No matter how strange Gao Wen's character setting is, she has never felt sorry for Black and White. Why is Black and White so comfortable cheating? Normally speaking, I think Gao Wen is still thinking about competing for men at this time, which is a bit unrealistic. I don't know what the author's thoughts are on love. Everyone in the harem must love the protagonist and fight for favor and beauty until life and death? This is not a Gongdou romance novel. Except for a few strange women who can sink into the dust for love and abuse themselves, in reality, I think it is more likely that Gao Wen will leave, not as an enemy but as a passerby in this life. Really, I think the rest of this book is pretty good. It is this emotional drama that has been challenging my three views 😅. It's true that I can hold on even if I don't watch the emotional drama. But when it comes to the emotional drama, I can't hold it in anymore... I can't hold it back even if I look at the black and white emotional lines. Alas╯╰I blame me for thinking too much, so I don't have a book to read.

In my opinion, it is wrong that technology cannot become a saint. You said that scientific weapons are only catalysts for the use of laws, but isn't cultivation a catalyst for turning oneself into laws? But one is to let the weapon become a catalyst, and the other is to let yourself become a catalyst. If you let the weapon become a part of yourself, you can also become a saint. And you said that a world with complete rules cannot practice cultivation. If you can't even practice cultivation, how can you become a saint? Therefore, becoming a saint through science and technology is the right way. Let the weapon become a part of yourself, rather than letting yourself become a weapon. Make a clear distinction and don't make a mistake. Moreover, science also includes biotechnology and energy technology. It is not just mechanical technology. Anyone with 3000 avenues can achieve enlightenment.

Why are there so many dog-licking male protagonists? Isn't it good for two people to be in love? How is this different from amnesia + misunderstanding in romance novels? Now that I see this book, I am still quite attracted to it. The plot and setting are good, and I have the idea of ​​renewing it. However, as soon as the female protagonist appears, the male protagonist's character becomes immature and he is always licking. We don't ask for brainless harems, male chauvinism, or the murder of girls to prove the truth. Wouldn't it be better to be more equal? I wrote so much just because I thought this book was very interesting and to my liking. But when I read this book, I felt like it was a plate of delicious scrambled eggs with tomatoes, but the male protagonist's attitude towards the female protagonist was like adding ginger and green onions, and suddenly I felt something strange.

I just read two chapters and I'm confused. Is the protagonist in the real or virtual world? At the beginning of the game, the protagonist came out of the virtual world and sat on the train. I thought it was reality, but a plot suddenly popped up on the train. Then I thought the protagonist was still in the virtual world, but when I thought about it, it was wrong This train was bound for Spain, and some agency in Spain said that it was preparing to challenge the Terminator plot there, so this should be reality. Why would the plot of the movie pop up in reality, or is everyone in the virtual world?

Gao Wen is so disgusting, so disgusting to watch. And Fantasy opens some junk stuff every day, hard pressed. Failure. Without these two points, this book could have done better.

Bad luck is actually not a bad thing. The problem is that the protagonist lacks the wisdom to control the layout and the decision-making when the situation arises. He seems to have a conscience, but with a little temptation, he can immediately break through the bottom line. You said it would be good to write a story about ordinary people growing up step by step, but the problem is to give the protagonist a family who pretends to be crazy and a girlfriend who doesn't know how to fall in love with him. . .

The plot is scattered... The characters are vague... The heroine is suspected of being green tea... The male protagonist is essentially a dog licker... 1. Plot, hammer here and there. Each plot is written like a separate copy, but the author forcibly pulls them together. Some can be justified, but most of them are forced nonsense... 2. Characters, plot There are many characters, not to mention that the NPC characters are not in line with the original work, but the character design of the protagonist is a bit inconsistent. It was chaotic neutral at first, and then it became chaotic good... But many things are still somewhat conflicting... 3. 4. The male and female protagonists. The so-called "misunderstanding" in their youth caused the two to separate, but the root cause of the misunderstanding is still the female protagonist. On the one hand, let alone the bug that the male and female protagonists do not communicate, if the female protagonist does not know this, then the female protagonist is considered a fake Bailian. If the female protagonist knows this and does not explain it to the male protagonist, then it can be regarded as real green tea... (One of the characteristics of green tea: I don't say whether I know or not, but I know you must care, I just won't tell you, I just won't explain to you, I just Let you guess, just to make you care about me.)... And the male and female protagonists met again or the male protagonist was on the announcement, and there was another plot. The female protagonist "want to have sex with me? Take the announcement in exchange for..." Is not the exact words, but this is the meaning... And the male protagonist has not changed his nature of being a dog licker, and still wants to swallow his anger and work hard without complaining... Tsk... Can you figure it out, good men and dog lickers are essentially different...

I just want to say that if Medusa wants to get love, she can only save herself, not find someone who loves her. She will never find someone like this, but will only find an extremely loyal licking dog.