Pokemon: Trainer Shinji

Here's a small suggestion: for a protagonist like this to develop improved moves, he should have a good grasp of them. Unlike other characters who use practical moves, the protagonist uses magic modifications and then abuses them, which feels very brainless. Of course, the current overall direction is still very good. Come on💪

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At present, I think the pinnacle of elf literature is The Fifth Heavenly King. The descriptions of emotions in it are truly touching. I hope you can do the same.

To sum up, this book is actually delayed by sit-ups-like updates. Personally, I feel that he is not much worse than the elf leader. The writing is smooth, the plot is compact, the training has personal characteristics, and the imagination is big. It is not the same as just combat upgrades, guarding poison without brain-blocking bugs, or even a low-level elf guarding the kind that can resist the ultimate move of a mythical beast, just like the game. The only shortcoming is that there are too few, basically only the main line is written. Although there are some daily ones, they are not outstanding compared to the main line. It would be much better if this book could be written with more than 3 million words. Not just getting stronger, getting stronger while participating in the original plot, traveling to one area after another, meeting one character after another, and defeating one out-of-control mythical beast after another

😎 Both his temperament and his knife path are cruel and ruthless. The continuous attacks are like thousands of waves.

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Boscodora

After reading the chapter about Gardevoir and her daughter, I suddenly felt that Shinji's approach was no different from that of Pokémon hunters. It may also be that I only saw the transfer of Larurus back to the breeding house before posting, and did not see the follow-up arrangements. If I made a joke, I would like to apologize in advance. You pursue your dreams, and in order to compete with the champion of the king, you must select the best. It is right to pursue the elves who are talented and willing to make progress. This is what the first Sapling Turtle did in front of you who was unwilling to join the team. If you don't agree with my philosophy, it's no problem. If you have different paths and don't work together, just let them go. Then things changed later. How did you do it? Send out all your Pokémon to catch them to see their talents. Take away the good ones and release the weak ones. The rare ones are sent back to the breeding house for breeding. What's the difference between this and Pokémon Hunter? It's just that he wants both good and bad, and you only want the good. If you kidnap your daughter, the mother comes out, beat her up and take her away with her, there is no difference except that there is no middleman to make the difference. We all do this in the game, but when writing a world, the elves in it should all be alive. The author also distinguishes it in this way. From the moves, world view, battles, and characterization, everything tells me that this is a world of flesh and blood, but the protagonist's own behavior is somewhat incompatible with this world. In contrast, the protagonist is not like the cold-faced and enthusiastic young man who works hard for his dream, but more like an impersonal slave owner who treats the elves as commodities or slaves.