Pokemon: The Special Forces Commander

Apart from logic, there is nothing wrong with this book. Logic is the biggest flaw. Reason for joining the army: To protect the country and join the army, I am very speechless. I would rather say that I was framed and had to join the army to avoid the crisis. After all, the country is in a terrible state. Recruit: Directly targeted, fasting and high-intensity training are constantly occurring among them. This is to kill people, not training. Battlefield: This is the biggest highlight of this article. I can't deny it, but I just want to say that the new recruits come directly to do the work of the special forces. This country is in such dire straits. The overall layout, the protagonist is fighting in the army, no matter how strong your team is, what's the use? The country is corrupt and powerful is in power. Can it be solved if the country's strength is high? You know the mythical beasts, but you don't have an elf in your hand. Are you kidding me? Must I claim it?

I suggest you just write a wolf-warrior type of military novel, and don't mention the elves, which would be really awkward. When writing an elf novel, don't mention heavy themes about country and nation, as it doesn't match the warm and warm growth style of the elves at all. The star source you wrote about is not worth protecting, so you might as well let the protagonist revolutionize it.

1. The author does not understand psychology at all. A normal person would already suspect that there is something wrong with the top management at the beginning of the draw, and would not be stupid enough to continue to follow. It is already good to not cause trouble and not jump to counterattack, but what if you continue to target and directly counterattack? 2. The author doesn't understand the human body at all. Super high-intensity exercise, training and punishment, let alone a top student who just joined the army, even if he recruits an ordinary soldier in the army, he can't thank you. He doesn't give him food, drink or rest. He laughs to death. Ordinary people are put in ICU on the spot. Soldiers also have to be weak for a long time, and may even suffer from hematuria, exhaustion, moderate to severe dehydration, hallucinations and auditory hallucinations, insufficient blood supply to the brain, soft tissue damage, lactic acid accumulation in the muscles causing extreme soreness, weakness, and cramps, and other states. Not to mention that the human body in the Pokémon world has been slightly strengthened. 3. To hide and cultivate the seeds, the first thing should not be full pressure, but to lay the foundation first. What can we talk about when our life is almost gone? You can eat and drink less, but nutritional supplements are added secretly rather than nothing at all! 4. It has the assistance of legendary elves and is a sacred beast with a position. It is stronger than ordinary mythical beasts. It has the qualifications to negotiate with the country instead of becoming a virgin. 5. If you don't know how to write about women, it's best not to write about women. If you don't want a female protagonist, don't deliberately add intellectual dialogue. You will make me think that your protagonist is not a top student but a waste like a mother's baby. I don't want to say anything else, that's all I saw, I left, I won't be able to write well after that, it's like this when I go out, don't expect me to wait to see him grow up, because the protagonist is not a simple child.

I can only say that many people like you can't stand it. Since the national army is like this, and it is still a vassal state, it is like the national power is already weak and the army is in such a bad state. What can be saved? It's so small.

A country is now a vassal state, it doesn't have any mythical beasts, and its military is still in such a mess, what kind of future does it have?

The subject matter is good, but the biggest problem is that you have this kind of corruption in the military. . . . . It can only be said that the army is like this. Can this country be saved? Why would the protagonist join the army under such circumstances? And in this case, can the protagonist's friends let Larulas be picked up? Are the people in this country stupid? What's more, the elves issued by the army also include an injured Kati dog? If you want to make the protagonist more difficult, why not just choose a character with a low racial value? I gave up after reading the first 4 chapters. Even if the protagonist grows up in the future, what is the point of being loyal to such a country and such an army?

What is this about? When I read the introduction, I thought the protagonist's country was similar to a big flower plantation. He joined the army with all kinds of friendship and passion. But what the hell happened? Did he enter a small Japanese country?

Writing military, is your country worth protecting? You know, not every country is like China. The military in countries other than China is more of a profession. Please forgive me for not accepting that the protagonist does not take advantage of his own advantages but joins the army with first place results, is suppressed by military connections, and maintains such a corrupt country. I hope the author can attract his own readers. Goodbye

I don't know why the author couldn't think of it. It feels quite nonsense. At the beginning of the training, I stood in the hot sun for several hours without lunch, ran 15 kilometers long, and skipped dinner. Still have the strength to clean and sleep. It's also outrageous

Why do officials who are bigger than the protagonist have no brains to target the protagonist? Others make mistakes or are targeted for irritation, but the protagonist keeps silent and is still being punished. Then the reason is whatever. Bah, you are making a grudge! It was really unpleasant to watch. He was targeting for the sake of targeting. He practiced until he was exhausted all day long without even giving him anything to eat. I really feel sorry for the protagonist. The top student went to the army to serve as a soldier and ended up like this. Not to mention the key training targets, I only saw the protagonist being innocently targeted, so I stopped watching!