Pokemon: The Special Forces Commander

Aside from its logic, this book is otherwise quite good. Unfortunately, logic is its biggest weakness. Reason for enlisting: to protect the country. It's ridiculous. I'd rather say I was framed and had no choice but to join the army to escape the crisis, since the country is already rotten to the core.

I suggest you write a military-themed story like "Wolf Warrior," don't include elves, it feels really awkward. If you're writing about elves, don't bring in heavy national or ethnic themes, it doesn't fit the heartwarming growth style of elves at all. The star source you're writing about isn't worth protecting, you'd be better off having the protagonist participate in a revolution.

1. The author completely lacks psychological understanding. A normal person would already suspect something was wrong with the higher-ups at the very beginning of the game, and wouldn't be foolish enough to continue following along. It's already good enough if they don't cause trouble or rebel; what's the point of continuing to target them and turning against them directly?

I can only say that many people can't stand by and watch what you're doing. If the country's army is like this, and it's still a vassal state, it's like a weak nation with such a rotten army—what's the point of saving it? It's hopeless.

A country has become a vassal state, it doesn't even have mythical beasts, and its army is still such a mess. What future does it have?

The premise is good, but the biggest problem is the corruption within the military... If the military is like this, is there any hope for the country? Why would the protagonist join the army under these circumstances? And why would his friend let him get a Ralts? Are the people in this country stupid? Furthermore, the army-issued Pokémon include an injured Growlithe?

What is this? From the synopsis, I thought the protagonist's country was similar to China, and that he would join the army and experience a lot of brotherhood and passion. But what is this? Did he end up in Japan?

If you're writing about the military, is your country even worth protecting? You need to understand that not every country is like China. In many other countries, the military is simply a profession. Please forgive me for not being able to accept the protagonist enlisting with top marks instead of using his advantages, being suppressed by those with connections in the military, and having to maintain such a corrupt country. I hope the author can attract their own readers. Goodbye.

I don't know what the author was thinking. It seems pretty absurd. Training starts with standing under the blazing sun for hours, skipping lunch, then a 15km run, followed by another skipped dinner. And they still have the energy to wash up and sleep? It's ridiculous.

Why are all the higher-ranking officials targeting the protagonist so mindlessly? Other officials are targeted for making mistakes or being troublemakers, but the protagonist is targeted without saying a word, and the reason given is something like "training." Pshaw, this is just making enemies! It's so frustrating to watch.