Wei Zi’s Journey to Immortality

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Demining: There are basically no top-quality books in this book (I don't think there are any in the book anyway), but there are countless outstanding brothers and sisters. For example, our Senior Sister Tang and the Master who have appeared more recently have attracted countless comments. I would like to emphasize here that there is absolutely no male protagonist (female protagonist) in this book. The master and apprentice are all serious people, and the senior sister is also a serious person. Therefore, anyone who wants to have an unethical love should give up. After all, I want to leave my outstanding and lovely little brothers and sisters to everyone, how could I let Wei Xiaozi keep them to myself?

Let's talk about the issue of adding updates. Looking back, I feel powerless recently. The more updates I add, the more I owe, so I can only change the rules for adding updates. However, the updates I owed before will definitely be made up as soon as possible. This will not change. There are three chapters in total with monthly tickets and two chapters with rewards. New rules for adding updates: An update will be added if the reward exceeds 10,000 coins. Hui Mu will build another reward building. From now on, Hui Mu will write down every reward given by the little cutie. I love you all. Yes, you read that right, Hui Mo just canceled the monthly pass in such a superficial way. Although looking back, I still really want all kinds of tickets, but I am really afraid of owing more and more. It has taken me so long to write the article, and looking back, I have never broken my promise. Since I can't do it, I can only explain it to everyone in advance. I love you all, and I hope that after I don't have monthly tickets to add updates, I can still receive tickets when I look back. 😢😢

The real no cp is that there are no emotional scenes from the beginning to the end. It does not mean that we are not together in the end. It is the most poisonous thing if we write that we are not together in the end. Those who prefer no cp and those who have cp are uncomfortable, and both parties are not happy. I personally am an omnivorous person and read it with or without CP. However, reading miscellaneous books does not mean that I like reading miscellaneous books. The biggest poisonous point of this book is that it writes an emotional scene but ends up saying it has no CP. It is too complicated. Since the heroine didn't like the male character from the beginning, why did she write a kissing scene that was so offensive to him? Why did you deliberately give the male character a role to make people misunderstand that he is the male protagonist? Isn't it good to say no decisively when it's time to do so?

The little cuties are very concerned about the issue of additional updates. Looking back, I would like to explain here that normal updates are double updates every day. If there are additional updates, they will be specifically stated. Otherwise, double updates will be defaulted, so the cuties will not have to wait any longer. After you have saved enough manuscripts, I will add updates from time to time. In addition, I will also set the rules for adding updates. 1. If the reward exceeds 10,000 coins, one update will be added. Looking back, we will build another reward building. From now on, every reward given by the little cutie will be written down one by one. I love you all. 2. One update will be added for every two hundred monthly tickets, and there is no accumulation. I can only think of this much for now, and I will add more to you from time to time.

I feel tired, and every time I watch it I have to complain about how little it contains. It's been a long time since I've seen such a tasteful article about cultivating immortals. Alas, the quantity is too small. Please add more updates.

It's a very interesting story. The heroine can be said to be the proud daughter of heaven, but she is down-to-earth and hard-working. She has a lively and cheerful personality and is a bit of a scoundrel. She is very cute. Unlike some stories, the heroine is persistent at best and pretentious at worst. Although the heroine is the protagonist, she has experienced many difficulties every time she gets an opportunity. It makes people feel that this is the difficult history of a monk's pursuit of Taoism, rather than the "legendary" life of a Mary Sue. Neither the female protagonist nor the male supporting characters are top-notch, and the main supporting characters are all very good. There are no messy emotional entanglements, no unreasonable grudges and jealousies, it is mainly about the heroine's life of cultivating immortality, the favored son of heaven. The story is very good, although the content is still short, but it can be seen that it is a good novel about the heroine cultivating immortality. ~~~But the volume is too small and not enough to read. The author would like to ask for more updates! !

I personally feel that the plot of this book is actually very good and the writing is good, but the protagonist is too soft-hearted. In fact, I have said this in the article. I don't know what other people think. I read it all. With the help of the master and when he got the opportunity, the protagonist in the article went through several reincarnations and tempered his mentality. Especially in Zhang Zhou's life, he should have gone through forty years of dark training, pain, suffering, and blood. Under such training, his personality will change to some extent. Although the memory returns in the end, the personal experience has not. Just annihilate it, but keep it in mind, but why do you always try your best to give those children what you think is best for them when you meet some strangers who ask for their children? Although the protagonist also received the kindness of the orphan, I don't think it is this. The good is a bit too much. The feeling of always thinking about those people is really over-described. There are also some supporting characters. Many people don't like Tang Muge. It's true that the protagonist has a higher cultivation level than her and calls her senior sister. Of course, she joked that she asked Tang Muge to call her senior sister Wei Zi, but she glared at Wei Zi. Wei Zili was cowardly. This is how the world of immortality should be, so why shouldn't she call her senior sister. Later in the article, when Tang Muge's cultivation level has improved, she calls Zhenjun Guang Ling her senior brother. I know there is already a contradiction here, but it doesn't matter if the protagonist doesn't call her senior sister above. Now she calls someone with a higher cultivation level than her. Wei Zi is a junior sister, but she also calls her senior brother Guang Ling Zhenjun. This generational hierarchy is already messed up. Since she calls her senior brother Guang Ling Zhenjun according to her cultivation, she must call Wei Zi, who has a high cultivation level, her senior sister. She cannot mess up the seniority just because of a good relationship. Although there are many places in the article where seniority is confusing, it is not mentioned in a large space. After all, no one can criticize the protagonist if he is willing. What's more, some places are called according to their cultivation base. After all, it is the principle of the immortal world. The above two points are contradictory in my writing, but they are more contradictory in the article. It can only be said that the image of Tang Muge as a supporting character was not well written. Other readers also said that Wei Zi did not lack love, but she placed too much emphasis on Tang Muge. Tang Muge always accepted but gave very little, and what he gave was just that. Most of the time, he was just worried and worried, but Wei Zi was trying to get treasures for Tang Muge, and could easily fall into danger. Wei Zi took her too seriously, too much. When Wei Zi first entered Tai Suzong, he received the care from Tang Muge's aunt, which Wei Zi deserved, and even later, but these cares are far from enough to make a person think about everything all the time. I remember one place in the article said that Wei Zi thought that if something happened to Tang Muge, Wei Zi really didn't know what would happen to him. Here, after that, Tang Muge gave Wei Zi soft care. Love, for Wei Zi, is maternal love, but at the same time, she will also restrict Wei Zi's actions and let Wei Zi save her regardless of her own safety. She is unwilling to let Wei Zi be involved in danger and wants Wei Zi to be safe. Saving her will get severe criticism. Is Wei Zi wrong? No, Wei Zi does not have the obligation to tell Tang Muge everything, so the description here is also a bit inappropriate. All in all, the supporting role of Tang Muge was not successfully established. Also, there should be a lot of talented people with good qualifications in the article, but many of them are not mentioned. It only focuses on Tang Muge except Wei Zi. The others are not mentioned clearly. Although it is not a big deal, it makes Tang Muge's supporting role very obvious. Some shortcomings will be magnified and easily cause dissatisfaction with this supporting role. In addition, the article mentions that the protagonist awakens the memory of his past life, but others do not. The writing is too abrupt and unnecessary, and the subsequent article does not add to the suspense left here, so it can be regarded as a major failure in the article. The above is not a criticism of the author's book, nor a criticism of the characters created by the author. I really think it is inappropriate. Since I have said so much, it means that I read this book seriously, and I respect the author and the book. But at the same time, I hope that the author can think more about the description and performance of the characters. In time, he will become a well-known writer and write more wonderful stories.

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The further back I go, I don't know why my feelings towards Tang Muge are getting worse. . . . . . Every time the heroine holds a treasure or an opportunity comes to her, there will be a long or short verbal or psychological confession, ah, I would rather not have these things and want my junior sister to be safe. These are not worth a hair of my junior sister. Then she figured it out again, if I don't accept it, I will be separated from my junior sister, or I want to use these to improve myself quickly and not hold my junior sister back, and then I accept it with peace of mind! ! ! The most disgusting thing is that every time, the heroine is the one who is begging for help and puts it in such a lowly manner! The heroine seems to have no shortage of love!