The Mortal Girl's Immortal Gourd

I don't know why so many people don't like Ye Tianyuan. In fact, the male protagonist is sincere in everything he does and knows how to respect the heroine's past. With a tolerant heart, he no longer touches the heroine's feelings for Gu Li. He understands the heroine's guilt for Luo Yucheng and gives the heroine and Luo Yucheng a special farewell. He is a perfect husband. Maybe more people like Luo Yucheng's exquisite heart with seven orifices, but his wisdom is bound to be broken. He thinks too much about emotions and cannot face his own heart. In the end, he can only miss it. He hopes that Yucheng can find his true love in the spiritual world. Personally, I think Yucheng should find a strong, smart and lovely woman. As for Gu Li, he is the most distressed. He may not understand his feelings for the heroine at the beginning. When he cannot let go, he is afraid of causing harm to the heroine and can only bury it deeply in his heart. His care and care for the heroine is selfless and desireless. I hope that Master can find an elegant, beautiful and beautiful partner in the spiritual world.

I hope that the author can continue writing the "Spiritual World" chapter after fully developing the plot. Although it becomes more difficult to come up with new ideas as you go on the road to immortality, and the plots tend to be the same, but if you can create some opportunities for Gu Li or simply replace him as the male protagonist, I believe the plot will be exciting. Looking forward to

I used to see mortal girls in their youth, but years passed by, and their youth gradually faded away. I wonder if I can wait for a movie about the spiritual world... Alas!

The heroine was upset when she saw her. She had no control over Ye Tianyuan's body. Usually people who can't control their thoughts can't control their bodies, otherwise everyone would take drugs. One moment she likes the master and flirts with him all at the same time, and then another Luo, it makes people feel that she flirts with each other, which is disgusting to death. How can such a person calm down and cultivate immortality? The author also fell into the cliche and wrote that the protagonist must be a lone star of evil spirits who can cultivate immortality. However, this is too impersonal. The Mo family was wiped out, and the only relative, the kind grandfather Mo Min, was also written to death in a strange way. It seems that one cannot become an immortal if his relatives do not die. This kind of article is heartbreaking and boring to read.

This book would rather have no male protagonist than Ye Tianyuan. The male protagonist had no communication in the early stage and then fell in love with the female protagonist inexplicably. Then the female protagonist also fell in love with the male protagonist inexplicably. The writing here is very abrupt and blunt. What's even more speechless is that the male protagonist has a very unpleasant personality. Even Gu Li's character is better than him, let alone Luo Yucheng. It was already a bit painful for everyone to read the book because of the wrong CP, but the ending was very rushed, which can really be said to be a continuation of the story. Oh... A little sad

It is a novel about the evolution of the author's writing. It took me a long time to read it slowly. On the one hand, I was hoarding the chapters of the author's new book. On the other hand, I was curious whether the level of the fairy tale was consistent with other time travel novels. Until the end, I couldn't believe it. There were a lot of foreshadowings. It would be great if there was a chapter on the spirit world. I look forward to new developments in the ghost world. I hope you know that there are still people looking forward to the continuation of this book about cultivating immortals, and I hope the new book will get better and better.

If one day, Luo Yucheng knew that he was the original wife...

Alas, I haven't seen much. The article is good, but there is one thing that I can't bear the most... Why do almost everyone not use the pronoun "I" when they call themselves? Always say his own name, for example: Qingchen said: "Qingchen likes it so much, Qingchen thinks..., Qingchen knows..., Qingchen Qingchen Qingchen..." You can't say I like it, I know it, what am I doing? How can anyone always say their own name when talking? It's so unreasonable and too pretentious. Moreover, it's not just the heroine who talks like this, but other people too, such as Mo Ningrou and so on. Because of this, I have read this novel in vain. I have endured it for a long time and I can't stand it anymore.

Every time I read this book, the little person in my heart is shouting: Why not Luo Yucheng, why...😭

A long poem——Inscribed on the Immortal Gourd of the Fairy Girl There are thousands of paths in the universe, and the path of the past returns to the origin. Cleaning away dust is like a clear mirror, clearer than a true immortal. Born with perfect qualities, I will search for the source of heaven for a long time. Just use it as a sword without an edge to sharpen the world. The east wind urges the flowering period, and the spring fragrance is suddenly stained with blood. Abandoning my hometown thousands of miles away, it's hard to feel at ease even for a moment. Old brothers and sisters go, what will the living bear? Under the wine market, Ling Ding sleeps drunk. The most ridiculous thing is God's will, which is the same as hatred. The fairy family is filled with strange music, and the Yao light reflects the Luan. Weak body becomes a handyman, unable to avoid power. Walking on the ice, holding the day and selling straw for money. Fortunately, with the help of Qi Hu, he further learned alchemy. Start the drug addiction and study exotic herbs and flowers. I was taken captive by mistake and drifted far away in the East China Sea. I have traveled through the waves, but I am even more uneasy when I return. I have read it many times in this world, and suddenly fell in love for the first time. The lover shields you from the wind and rain, and smiles as brightly as a sunny day. You gave birth to me before you gave birth to me, this feeling is just a sigh. Don't dare shed tears, the path to immortality is too far away. —— This is a poem that I like very much! ! No matter whether the care is ordinary or unintentional, the rhyme still continues and changes, I am very satisfied! It's a pity that after reading the novel, I forgot it very quickly. I can only write the first half of the plot based on partial memory. I only wrote about the part of the real person Waguang. My favorite Luo Yuchengdu has not yet had a role... If I have a chance to re-read it, I will make up for the second half! Today I came across a manuscript from half a year ago and posted it on a whim. Speaking of Luo Yucheng, I felt something in my heart when I was composing a poem, and wrote a favorite line for him: "His wisdom is amazing, his ruthlessness is also touching." I really love Luo Yucheng to death TT. The original poem, especially at the beginning, uses a lot of puns, incorporating names of people, swords and so on. I won't point them out one by one here, after all, I almost forgot about it (I'm not saying that) Finally, I really, really like this Xianxia novel written by Liu Ye at the beginning, give it a try. Although it is obviously still not very tactful writing in the early stages, it really poked fun at me! And included private goods: Luo Zhenren is really handsome (super quiet bbbbb...)