Unorthodox Martial Arts: While Others Train, I Cultivate Immortality

If possible, everyone should try not to keep books, because it is easy to keep new books to death.

It's beautiful, but why isn't it popular? From the perspective of a long-time bookworm like me, the writing style is pretty good, there are no big problems, and the storyline is also good. Maybe people nowadays still like to fall in love and read romance. When I read female videos, they are all romance novels. Anyway, all the stories revolve around relationships. If you don't fall in love, it seems like you will die. Then I watch male videos, all kinds of self-improvement and achievements in careers. Anyway, they basically revolve around self-growth and changes, promotion and wealth are the main themes, and there are basically few romances. Female videos focus on relationships, parentage, and men. Anyway, relationships are indispensable. I really lament that women's love brain has been obvious to all for thousands of years. Personal life and growth seem to be indispensable. Women are like this, they lack growth too much.​​ ​This book is a breath of fresh air in my opinion. The heroine kills decisively and becomes an immortal in a leap. I feel that it is better for women to do this. What's the use of putting so much emphasis on men's family relationships? Just look at the thoughts of male channels and you will know that women are nothing in their eyes. You will know that by looking at the articles written by male channels. In their eyes, women are just inferiors and accessories. Women occupy a very small proportion in their lives.

This book is good to read, the heroine is decisive in killing, and the supporting characters have their own characteristics. For example, the old wolf is very vivid, a little coquettish, a little enchanting, and very obedient. The heroine's sister was very lively and cheerful just now. Later, she experienced the death of her grandfather and became a bit clingy to her sister. Later, she learned that the heroine had other relatives and was afraid of losing the heroine. Her personality is a bit extreme and left-wing. Of course, she is still kind and enthusiastic when facing relatives who are not the heroine. If this was a male video, it would probably be very popular. It has the comfort of the countryside and the grudges of the martial arts, and there is also a faint sense of satisfaction that the heroine is different from others. The author writes the heroine and arranges villains for her. It is based on the improvement of strength. After defeating small monsters, bigger monsters, and then bigger monsters. Each mountain is higher than the other. You won't feel that the plot is dull, but a feeling of ups and downs.

Guess I like... It doesn't have to be all this

Now that family romance novels are so popular, aren't there any female videos writing about them? Cultivation, farming, management, and family upgrade. . Didn't find any

While others work hard to practice martial arts all their lives, the heroine starts directly cultivating immortality. Hahaha, this is so cool! Moreover, the trouble-provoking villain, the garbage man, basically has a bad mouth in this chapter, and will be ridiculed by the heroine in the next chapter, hahaha, there will definitely be no overnight grudges. The plot also stands up to scrutiny and develops smoothly. The fairy cultivating heroine gradually grows into a powerful person in a low-level world of martial arts.

No wonder I said it looked familiar, it turned out to be a familiar text. Here are some exciting excerpts↓

It can be seen that Yanbao really wants to improve his writing style. The environment descriptions in these recent chapters are very detailed, as if they have been witnessed with one's own eyes. This is an improvement that deserves praise. But it was too detailed and I wanted to write it comprehensively, so it ended up being too overwhelming. The description of the environment is too long and takes up too much space. It not only seems watery, but also seems to be full of words to show off the writing style. It also takes away from the performance of the characters. Such shifting of priorities makes it tiring to read. It is recommended that a long description of the environment should not exceed 200 words. One hundred words is enough. When a large description of the environment is needed, it is best to divide it into several paragraphs and add some dynamic descriptions, character descriptions, etc. In the middle. Don't just describe the scenery. You can use environmental description to hint at the character's psychology and foreshadow the subsequent plot development. Make this description closely linked to the context so that it doesn't look like it was copied and pasted from other places. For example, when I wrote about going to the courtyard of Elder Baixiaolou, the 1,000-word description of the courtyard seemed very tedious, with a lot of bells and whistles. Apart from showing that the house was very expensive, it had no other use. It had no life at all and seemed very tacky, making it difficult to read. The description of Yingxiang Tower in the back is much better than the previous one. Although there is also a lot of description of the death environment, some character interactions are added in the middle, which adds a bit of life, and it is not as expensive as just to show that Yingxiang Tower is expensive. For another example, when writing about Su Wanwan receiving the invitation letter, you can add a paragraph: "The oil in the lamp gradually burned out, and the room seemed a little dim, but the gilding pattern on the invitation letter became more dazzling and charming. The shining golden pattern made her hurriedly remove it. Put it away in the drawer and don't dare to look at it again." This not only implies that Su has something she wants but can't get without spending a lot of money, but also uses her hesitation and struggle to set off the kindness she showed when she asked the madam not to abuse the girls (if the price is evil). There is progress in writing skills, but it is also accompanied by shortcomings. We must work hard to maintain progress, while also overcoming shortcomings and not letting them slow down our progress! Come on, Yanbao! 💪(≧ω≦)! (Author's statement: My humble opinion, you can delete or spray 😢)

After thinking about it, I'd better just pursue it, otherwise I'll send it again if I keep it. I read your sickly girl on QQ Reading, and it's pretty good, but I feel like the ending part could be a little longer.

No, I am the only one who has posted so far. There are too few people! 😢😢😢