A Prestigious Marriage

In fact, the author's character creation and plot description are quite good. But after reading several of the author's articles (I didn't finish the second one), I found that there is a problem that has always existed and is getting more and more serious, and that is laxity. It can even be said that there is only relaxation without relaxation. There is always one plot after another, one after another. Not to mention that the protagonist is always nervous, and the readers are always on tenterhooks and worried about the protagonist while reading. The reading experience is naturally not good, and it is easy to abandon the article halfway and not be able to finish it. Although it is said that sunshine always comes after the storm, but if your article is always exposed to the storm, readers will run away before the sunshine. It is necessary to arrange more bright and relaxed plots and characters. Don't always push your protagonist so hard. If the relaxation can be done properly, I believe the author's novel will undergo a qualitative change, and it will naturally become a red text.

I was introduced to it by Daguan Dada. Qin Xi's writing is really good. The heroine knows medical skills. It's great. It's my favorite type.

Renew! End! The road is long and long! Come on!

You guys are so fast!

The author comes out and we have a good chat! Isn't Mrs. Xu, who is over fifty years old, not the British father-in-law and Xu You's grandmother? Isn't Mrs. Fan's daughter Fan Ying Xu You's cousin? I mentioned earlier that the impeachment of the fifth prince's British wife's natal family was affected and the entire family was exiled. What's going on now? Isn't the old lady at home well? I am very disappointed in you. This kind of problem started from the time when I was a boudoir!

There are no spring flowers, no mountains and flowing water, no pavilions... Only endless battles with villains. I have already lost count of how many I have defeated after reading more than 300 chapters. Before one villain falls, another one comes, but it is still seamlessly connected. Moreover, all the villains in the book are all the same, stupid, evil, and have strong backgrounds. The minister, the marquis, the prince... These villains have gone through many trials and hardships. If they are villains and don't say they can cover the sky with one hand, don't they all have some means? He fell down just because the heroine said something? What would Aduo's attitude be like when he comes from a small country to ask for help? The villain created in the book has no character logic and no sense of reality. The entire court feels like a villain and is defeated by the heroine. I am really disappointed with this book!

Congratulations, and may Dandan's new book sell well! 🤭🤭🤭It's booming! I finished reading two chapters in a blink of an eye. I feel like I have to save a few more chapters before reading, otherwise it would be really annoying to read one chapter a day! Not enough at all

I just want to ask, does the author write an outline before writing the article? I have only read about twenty chapters. Why is it that the protagonist's mother died in childbirth in the first chapter, but she fell into the water and died in the next chapter? …And didn't the opening chapter say that the protagonist was plagued by all kinds of illnesses in his previous life and died in depression, with his children having no one to rely on? Why did he become the protagonist later and worship a famous teacher, with superb medical skills and lightning-fast methods, showing everyone's style? There is also the one in the temple, who is said to be richly dressed and looks like someone from a famous family, but later said that it is no wonder she is so depressed... Let me talk about the funny one, Mrs. Zhu San. If the author hadn't said she was from a local aristocratic family later, I would have thought she was an ignorant country woman somewhere... All famous families cherish their feathers... What's the matter with the scolding of a shrew and the villain's revenge...? After reading the first few dozen chapters, I always feel that the author writes the plot for fun...

Author, your writing is very good, but there is a plot that keeps repeating. People who look down on the protagonist endlessly appear, and they are slapped in the face endlessly. It makes me tired to read. The characters are different, but the details are all the same. They are all the same, they are all the same, they are all the same, they are the same, they are the same, and they are tortured to death. After reading too much, I feel visual fatigue, too tired and too tired to breathe. Can you change the content of the article? Let the heroine advance. Instead of jumping endlessly at the bottom, let her rise higher, do meaningful things, or enter her real marriage stage. How about?

This book has a single routine. There are people who look down from above and look down on the heroine. They keep trying to make the heroine have a small nose and small eyes. They kill one and make two more. The whole text is endless and disgusting. The plot is simple. It is about being killed, disliked, and then slapped in the face in various ways. I want to ask the author, what is in his stomach? There are no other inks. The format of the article is too low, and the storyline is too simple. If you counterattack a villain, you will offend another person or family behind him, and then be designed to avenge him, and then counterattack again, and then offend those with higher status behind him, and then counterattack again. With just this little information, you can write like this forever! One article can last a lifetime!