This Immortal Maiden Is a Little Too Cunning

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Away. Based on the game, the two worlds can be understood as two servers in one game. They cannot advance at the same time but the props can be communicated with each other. The heroine broke into the big account on the Langhuan server, used props (stone beads) to return to the early save point (island period), and at the same time opened a small account on the Yaoze server. Push the game on the Yaoze ship for a period of time and then save it, then jump to the Langhuan ship and continue pushing. Saving across servers requires energy storage and cooling time. The Langhuan server is an old server with mature development. There are many experience posts for reference, but the resources have been divided into seven, seven, eight, eight, and the heroine is too late to open an account and can only miss out; the Yaoze server is a new server, and the heroine has opened an account earlier and can dominate the server with the experience accumulated on the other side. The author's writing skills are OK, but the details are a bit rough and the rhythm is not coordinated enough. For example, the death of Uncle Fu is a very important plot point, which is directly related to the heroine's performance during the entrance examination and the direction of her apprenticeship. However, this scene was handled in a hurry: as soon as Uncle Fu walked out of the screen, screams were heard within a few lines, and after a few lines the heroine was already exhausted. The emotions in the first few paragraphs have not been well developed (Fu Bo insists on buying storage bags in order to save money and the writing is quite long, and the heroine buys health elixirs for Fu Bo while Fu Fu is away is only mentioned in two sentences). It can be said that the car suddenly brakes just a few meters after starting, as if it were child's play. It does feel like "giving the heroine a spiritual weapon" as mentioned in the book review. There are also some small bugs that appear from time to time... It is recommended that the author find a friend to read it before posting important plots/important new background introductions 😥 I have seen many authors easily make a mistake: they have constructed the plot and background in their heads, and when writing it, they forget that the reader does not know much about this world view, and the result is either cumbersome, wordy or confusing...😂

What's going on? ? Why hasn't it been updated for so long? ? Even the eunuch still managed to say something! How could it be that it disappeared without a sound? This was already the case in the last book, now again? ? Then I will definitely be on the blacklist!

I heard that there is no male protagonist, so I immediately added it to the bookshelf and waited to be fattened up.

As the author writes, he seems to have forgotten that the heroine is reborn.

It's so irresponsible. I finished writing the last one but ran out of time, and this one started running a little faster and then ran away again. .

I didn't dare to read the title Death of Bob, it's so cruel

After reading so many books, I found that no matter how good the writing is, the author must be poisoned

I just read the beginning. Is it okay not to go back after being plotted like this? I have good qualifications and skills and can still hunt for treasures as a casual cultivator. But I can't feel at ease when I go back to the family and scheming. I can't go out casually because of my cultivation and only have so few resources. She had the memory to find a nest in the mountains which would be much better.

I don't understand, so I stopped updating the starting point and still push it every day.

The author is great. The heroine was very beautiful when she was a child, but she became disabled as she grew older. Can you understand the mood of a mother who watched her grow up? Can you understand that I want the most beautiful daughter in the world? If I can't achieve it in real life, I can't achieve it with you either?