Wei Zi’s Journey to Immortality

When I first opened it, the heroine was precocious and could tell the height of eyebrows. Then she saw how her biological mother died. When others asked about the cultivation method, she explained it and taught it to others. You have to take care of your younger brother, but you still have to find an opportunity. The author wrote the younger brother to death just to increase the heroine's ability to resist the inner demons. The key process was also skipped. Was the younger brother's death the right time to run away? The cultivator herself is an outsider, but she still has to write that her father, her mother, and her aunt are good to her. If her native family has no problem, she can just leave and be done with it. Why do she have to write about her younger brother? Did the younger brother do anything wrong? Baffling

The plot is quite good, much better than some of the same genre. The protagonist has a good personality and the story is exciting enough. Don't worry too much about the protagonist's behavior in the early stage. She is a child, not an adult, and she cannot think of everything so thoughtfully.

It's really good-looking. The heroine is a smart one. The experience of cultivating immortals is a coexistence of risks and opportunities. The author talks about it in a eloquent way, which neither makes people feel boring nor exaggerated. It is grand while retaining the smallness.

Uh... I'm so speechless. Although her stepmother is not very kind to her, her brother doesn't do anything to her, right? Oh, when facing a stranger, you can lead others to cultivate immortality and give your elixir to others. When facing your own family, even the stepmother only wants to go out and play by herself when giving birth. Since you want to cultivate immortality, why don't you go out and find opportunities to cultivate immortality by yourself? Why stay at home? Since we are still at home, shouldn't we, as family members, do our part?

The author always writes comparisons between the heroine and the supporting characters such as the heroine. For example, so and so is good, but the heroine is not so good. This is to highlight some of the advantages of the heroine. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can't stand it anymore.

I gave up after reading over two hundred chapters. The overall framework is good, traditional cultivation of immortality, although the protagonist has a lot of halo, it is acceptable. But the main problem is that the character creation is too simple and crude. The author really wanted to write the protagonist as a character (who is aggressive and decisive externally, but cheerful and cute internally), but the writing is really not good, and it makes people feel very separated. Other characters are also relatively flat. Also, the writing style is relatively average. Some of the clips are intended to be humorous, but they are just too boring and embarrassing for viewers. There are also a lot of typos

It's very interesting. It's a traditional fairy tale about a heroine. Don't you read it now? There are so few people.

In this article about cultivating immortals, the social background is written like a feudal society. The female monks are not thinking about improving their qualifications and becoming stronger, but about becoming beautiful and getting married. The sect also assumes that women are not as good as men, so as to highlight how powerful the heroine can be in Class A to compete with men.

In fact, the writing is pretty good. I don't know why the score is so low. Looking through the reviews, some people said that the death of the younger brother was what happened to the heroine. I just want to say that the heroine is just a child. He also said that the heroine is always ambiguous with others... I really don't understand this. Is it because men and women can't have friendship, or that men can't admire women? Who can tell me where the ambiguity lies?

No cp, often ambiguous