The Heavenly Dao’s Domination Plan

I don't object to male protagonists or not, but I am very disgusted by members of the cult without male protagonists who think they are correct even though they are obviously wrong. Now, if I write a story about cultivating immortality, does it have to be without a male protagonist? I just want to ask if in order to cater to that group of people, I wrote a book without a male protagonist or a so-called pseudo-male protagonist. If the subscription results are improved, it will make more money than if it has a male protagonist? 🙂

... The plot is good, but a lot of nonsense. It was annoying to watch in the early stages.

The pace is too slow, and it only took more than ten days to read more than 100 chapters... There are too many explanations, and it is easy to get distracted while reading, and the explanation content feels unnecessary. It feels superfluous to talk about details, but not enough to talk about water. In short, the reading is very sluggish.

Adopting... Come on. Expect…

The timeline is so messed up. It's only been half a month since chapter 130, and only two months after more than 300 chapters. The heroine was just over 6 years old, then under 6 years old, and then under 5 years old again. She is getting younger and younger as she lives. At first, the heroine planned to take any test, but failed to achieve any test and entered a new plot. The heroine took the martial arts test and did not upgrade because of the reward for being first, and then because she could not get promoted? The exam was taken three months later, and another month later? ? ? Even if you don't want the heroine to grow up and remain a little girl, there's no need to be so far-fetched.

The writing is too detailed, too detailed, and only a few days have passed since many chapters, and I really can't keep up after hundreds of chapters.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh not. Kavin is stuck in a wonderful place, i think i need to start saving articles

It's so annoying that others always don't know her true strength, and then she becomes a pig teammate. Shouldn't we understand each other's abilities when we form a team together? Even if we can't tell some trump cards, teammates who are doing tasks together must have an idea of ​​the general strength of others, right? Just rely on brainstorming to cooperate? Not knowing the combat effectiveness of teammates leads to wrong judgments and wrong decisions. The battlefield changes rapidly. If the delay causes serious consequences, everyone else will be killed.

The writing is really good, but it's also really boring. There are too many embellished words, which makes it easy for people to get confused and lose track of what is written.

Why does it feel like Yue Xi is getting more and more alive, especially the recent scene of snatching meat, which is simply too childish, just like the Yue Xi in the beginning. Unlike the Yue Xi who was in Yunzhou before. I still like Yue Xi who is brave and decisive. Also, the meat-grabbing scene is too embarrassing, like the silly son of a landlord. I know Yue Xi is the favorite of the group, this book is written like this, but can you let Yue Xi really grow up for a time? She has always been a loli, and when she becomes stronger, she can't just recognize her father! How many relatives have you recognized? And why do you no longer care about your former relatives when you become stronger? Madam Yue and Dad He haven't appeared for a long time! Since you want to write about family love, then don't write so utilitarian! Either don't write, or write well. Don't be like this!