My Wife Has Recovered

Stop narrating, it's like Naruto, always switching to science or reminiscing at crucial moments.

Three chapters a day, mostly flashbacks, the plot has stalled, it's unsatisfying to read. Sigh, it's a pity to abandon it, but it's tasteless to continue. I'll see, if it continues like this...

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I've noticed a few inconsistencies that I find unbearable. The first is her eldest son's marriage. He initially refused to break off the engagement because he was angry that the female lead treated his marriage like a game. She was the one who arranged the engagement, and she was also the one who advised him to break it off, which is why he was unwilling to.

This is so melodramatic. It would be understandable if the male lead felt strange and uncomfortable, given the 15-year age gap, but the female lead just woke up after giving birth. It's completely unnecessary to act like this, as if she's the one who experienced the 15-year time difference.

Author, have you even read the comments? All your books have this problem. The plot and writing style are fine, but who taught you this writing style? Stop constantly interspersing internal monologues! What should be a simple two-chapter narrative becomes ten or more, diluting the main point. It's frustrating to read; only children can't distinguish the main points in their essays.

I think it's very inappropriate to hit your husband in front of so many guests, especially in ancient times. If you're going to fight, you should do it behind closed doors. That princess is still around. I think it would be more interesting if the couple teamed up to fight the enemy, drove the princess away, and then closed the door to turn on each other.

The plot drags on too much, with repetitive flashbacks, explanations, and retellings, offering no real progress. Is the author writing too bluntly, or are they treating us readers like novices? Judging by the tone, this will be an extremely long story. Everyone works hard to earn money, and I'm broke, so I'm definitely dropping it.

I don't like the female lead anymore. No matter how angry I am about the flower viewing party you organized, you can't let everyone watch a monkey show.

What great water... A few chapters about a little thing… The plot is dragging on...

To be honest, I'm getting a bit annoyed. I posted before that the female lead's psychological transformation was a bit excessive, and now it's more than that. On one hand, she's a shrewd and capable matriarch, a caring mother, and on the other hand, she's a spoiled and arrogant little girl who's been pampered by others without realizing it.