Soul Land: The Anomaly

I originally thought the settings were okay, but when I saw that Wuhun was a mobile phone and computer, it crashed instantly and I lost all my expectations. Really.

Haha →_→, Wuhun is a mobile phone and a computer, so I can barely tolerate it. After all, the writing is okay, but, haha ​​→_→, the principal is Dumbledore, and the heroine is Hermione, haha ​​→_→, try your best, this novel will be destroyed by you sooner or later.

Well, I personally think the idea of ​​martial arts is pretty good, but the soul skills have nothing to do with mobile phones and computers. I feel like this is far-fetched. For mobile phones and computers, I can't think of attack skills. If the protagonist can be written as an auxiliary type, such as long-distance communication skills. Of course it's just my feeling

It's better to read the original work and just watch the ending. You don't need to read the previous ones.

Not interesting. So many fan fiction novels all revolve around Tang San. Forget about surrounding it. At least he stole the heroine. Wuhun Palace must win! Long live Bibi Dong!

Although the book is finished, I still want to say something Soul Skill: Telephone Card Make a phone card and attach the card to any object to make calls 😆

Any sidekick in Douluo is more beautiful than Hermione

The writing is okay, the plot is pretty good, not to mention the updates. But the author has never thought about why Mao's grades are so bad. I don't know what to think. There are so many female supporting characters in Douluo who are single and have quite a lot of roles. However, getting an original heroine is a taboo for fans. Originally, Douluo has an extra protagonist, which is already difficult to grasp. It is also difficult to find an original heroine. , There are only so many scenes in total, and adding an extra protagonist requires a relatively large space to describe it. It is not something that the author can simply write about. In writing like this, in addition to setting the heroine, there is no strong supporting role in the character creation, and the plot of running with the team is like a doll, with no sense of existence.

The protagonist's character is not likeable, not like an adult, too childish. He is a cultivator, I am not lazy, I don't care if I have a soul ring, I just absorb it. And the author also opened a bug that makes the body invincible. In the Douluo world, beating the soul beast with your fist is also drunk.

The author is so bad, Hermione has improved it to the point of disgusting her to death. Can you, a small author, change the book written by a master?