Door to Rebirth

Isn't the introduction about time travel Naruto? There is no sense of being a time traveler at all. Absolutely indigenous. . The sense of immersion is instantly reduced. So the results are not as good as the previous work

Don't write about the spiritual power of middle-term chuunin. There are various kinds of diaphragms.

After reading Chapter 11, apart from the many useless pig feet, has anything else changed?

At the end of this book, I was really depressed. Can Kakashi be resurrected?

After reading it, I just want to say thank you. I am very happy to read this book. Although it may not be the best, or even unfinished, it is indeed the most special one among the dozens of fan fictions I have read. It left a deep impression on me. Finally, I would like to say a big cheers to the author.

There is absolutely no comparison between this and the previous one!

Isn't this cover Tsurumaru Kunaga from Touken Ranbu? ? ? ?

The opening chapter was okay, but why did he suddenly go to another world? It looked so boring (~_~;), so I ran away

From the beginning to the end, it took several months. Watching it grow from a sapling to a big tree, the early stage was good, but towards the end, the wife may have become confused, and the more she wrote, the weaker she became, until it was unfinished. I also write novels, and I clearly understand the frustration of suddenly discovering that the writing is crooked. This also shows that my wife's writing skills cannot control the plot well. Take a break, and then bring us better works and a better version of you, whether it's fan fiction or original work, just live up to your original intention!

After reading the chapter names, Naruto becomes popular🔥. Don't put other things in it. This is the last thing you want to read.

Kakashi died, and Tobiru took over the original Kakashi's place. It's a good idea, very novel, and it's the first time I've seen it.

Don't just let it go just because you didn't write it well. It's not easy to become famous by writing. Why don't you write in a smaller size? What should I do with such strong self-confidence? How embarrassing. Although I am the kind of person who is very bad at writing novels, but come on, don't give up on the previous efforts. You have led me on the path of writing fan fiction, so don't change your account, okay? Waiting for your next book.

I feel like this book is pretty good. Why did I choose it so much? I feel like Mo Hen's settings are not as good as this one.

This cover is probably Tsurumaru Kunaga from the game Touken Ranbu.

The more you watch, the more boring you become.

The biggest failure is that the protagonist has only watched half of Naruto, and those who don't know the plot behind it, either know all the plot, or have not watched it. You who have watched half of it and let us know the ending clearly know who the final boss is, and the final boss is right in front of us, but the protagonist is still guessing and toying with us!

This plug-in is useless, and the muscles have atrophied?

I ordered all of the last book, and I've read a little bit of this one and am getting better at it. Can anyone tell me why it suddenly ended? ?

I like this kind of novel with a strong sense of substitution, Why Eunuch?

The most annoying thing is someone who has been in a coma for several years due to stimulation.

It's too toxic, I don't recommend watching it, it's a waste of time. I think the level is around 2000 recommendation votes at most

It's over after more than 200 chapters, and I'm still not happy with it! ! !

Chapter 3, Kakashi actually has all attributes? Drunk too