One Piece General Wenhu

The protagonist's strength in this book has improved so fast that the author had to write a disgusting plot of the protagonist fighting Big Mom and Doflamingo, and he was beaten like this after ten years of hard training in prison. In addition, the protagonist of the military soul system has been selectively forgotten, otherwise the protagonist with massive points can defeat the whole world. Systematic novels are not suitable for large-length novels. The power system has collapsed. If you can't continue writing, stop writing. Instead, you should accumulate writing experience.

Let me talk about my feelings after reading more than a dozen of them so far. There is one point that I think is really shocking. The protagonist's first batch of companions died on the battlefield. The protagonist collected his boss's bloody cloak and wore it in battle. There are always descriptions of this cloak. The key is that the blood will turn black and smelly when it dries. I don't know that the author always describes the color of blood. I can convince myself whether the cloak is awkward or not, but I am really sure about this. It happened more than once. I have described the appearance of this cloak three or four times. I have only read Chapter 12. The protagonist has killed a lot of pirates. The description of the system is insensitive. I... Well, why are you writing about the cloak of justice again😂

I think if you have a chance to win, you can fight hard, or if you have something you must protect, you can fight hard, or if you can't run away, I can accept it with the mentality of killing one person and earning another. However, for the belief of the navy, leading the troops to attack Roger, an attack that is impossible to win, I think it is ridiculous. The protagonist is not mature at all, more like a brainless middle school boy

It's a pity that the system Shenyin immediately persuaded people to withdraw after putting it on the shelves.

I only saw it before and after it was put on the shelves. I won't talk about the back. I will only talk about my feelings after reading the part. The author's language skills need to be improved, as well as the setting of One Piece and the creative background of One Piece, and he should also read more fan fiction Momo Rabbit is named after Gion, the flower street in Japan, which can roughly explain the author's writing habits Main The character's three views are not objective enough. It can be said that a lot of personal feelings are involved The logic of the plot is not smooth enough. The final boss of the protagonist breaking into the enemy camp alone is also inexplicable. The protagonist and this strong man are like this regardless of their status You also need to learn a little bit about naming. Most of One Piece's naming styles are Japanese-style. After it was released, the prison section was also covered by clouds and fog. The painting style was wrong, and the sound transmission and retrieval of objects from the air were all out. Overall, the author is a strong-willed author. A self-confident person One more thing, the author has read more novels in the past ten years. The background of this novel feels a bit "old" to me. The author is too heavily influenced by the novels he has read. There is a sense of "Jin Yong Gu Long" in the text.

Waited for three days and watched for one minute😭

It feels like the author is writing a fantasy book using a pirate background. It's so awkward to read.

One month, a few chapters updated 😰

There are a lot of Chinese vocabulary in the Japanese comics, and I was immediately taken aback after watching them and said goodbye.

Chapter 13 is gone and needs to be posted.

I read the book I had been reading for almost two months in just an hour, but it was not satisfying.

I came here during the 515 event. The book I read the most that year, I thought it was The Eunuch, but I didn't expect it to be finished in the end.

Why not update? Stopped updating again.

Earlier, the protagonist asked Whitebeard to take good care of himself, and it felt like it would give Whitebeard the rhythm of the elixir of life. Now if Whitebeard is written to death, huh. . . Is this a foreshadowing or an understatement?

You shouldn't start with Waldo. After all, it will take so long for the big pirate and the Momo fruit to defeat you as a new recruit? In addition, the spoon is uncontrollable. It can be compared with shaving, but it is far inferior to shaving. It is a simplified version of shaving, which is a bit unreasonable at the beginning.

Do you still want a eunuch in the end?😆

A good book is a good book, but it is not a cool novel. It is a typical plot novel. The character development is too detailed and too detailed. It takes a long time to just briefly describe the protagonist's inner understanding of the concept of justice. I was too tired to read it and gave up.

It's not enough. When will the update be released?

I have read more than 400 chapters of this book, and the early writing is perfect. It can be said that it is the best among Pirates fans. There is one point that I don't know if it is poisonous. It is that after Whitebeard was shipwrecked, he met Pig's Foot on a desert island. It was inspired by Pig's Foot that he began to have the idea of ​​​​adopting a son. Then Whitebeard, who was in his forties, and Pig's Foot, who was ten years old, became good friends. . . Isn't this nonsense? Whitebeard had this idea as early as Rocks' ship.

It's a pig's trotters with flesh and blood. In the past few days, someone in the fandom has finally written it with the attitude of writing a novel.

The protagonist is so holy I still want to see a navy like Akainu The protagonist puts himself at risk of death for a hostage If someone didn't happen to save you, you would have died. I really can't put it into perspective. Every time I see this kind of protagonist, I know that the villains are all weak. As long as they capture a little girl, the protagonist will be useless. Those bosses can't capture hostages. If a powerful pirate takes a hostage later, the protagonist will definitely not dare to move.

To be honest, my name is Wen Hu, I won't say my last name 😅

It's so cool, the author keeps writing, he's poor, but he can still order all of them

Justice? What a high-sounding word

They always make excuses for Luffy pushing into the city, asking you whether you will go and save your loved ones if something happens to them. The people Luffy saved from the beginning to now can be regarded as the most meritorious person in the world of pirates. Appetizer defeated that so-and-so to save Keya, defeated the evil dragon and saved Nami's village. Defeated the Sand Crocodile and saved a country. Restore the peace of the empty island in the empty island. Defeating Moria freed thousands of shadows. Chambord Island rescued a group of slaves. Qian Yuren Island saved Yuren Island. Defeated the turkey and saved a country. The main dish is to defeat the golden lion and save the East China Sea. Otherwise, the East China Sea will be severely damaged if it is not destroyed. Defeating Zefa saved the entire new world. Otherwise, the big pirate might be able to protect himself from the tsunami, but all the civilians in the new world would definitely die. Come on, those who want to blackmail Luffy, tell us what you want to blackmail Luffy about. Who in the world of pirates has contributed more to the world than the Straw Hats? Because it's the protagonist who saves the world, is it natural? Is it a heinous crime if one or two things are not very appropriate?

General Orange Tiger, the explosion flame is orange and is close to orange!

I just want to ask, what's wrong with Akainu?

I'm curious, does the protagonist kill all pirates? What should I do if I encounter someone who is mainly adventurous and has never killed any good people? There are also those who kill sailors, government officials, and bullies who are rewarded for killing civilians. Although the proportion of such people is small, they do exist. How does the protagonist make a choice when encountering them, like Akainu? I'd better give it a try, I want to see the perspective of the protagonist of this book as a navy. Could you please shed some light on this, thank you.

I have never understood why Straw Hats should become pirates when they can be merchant ships or adventurers! No matter how righteous their actions are, they are all promoting the reputation of pirates, damaging the credibility of the navy and increasing the strength of pirates. Doing good things while promoting evil is two-faced, okay?

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