Konoha Shichimiju

It's good. You shouldn't interfere too much in this Naruto world. It's already good if you can save the second generation. Food articles are nothing else. I personally think this world is well written...

I really don't understand why there are so many unsavory comments in the comments. I personally think it's pretty good. I don't overly comment, lest some people comment that I was invited here by the author...

I have read every novel by the author, but this novel made my eyes shine. I am looking forward to what kind of operations the second generation will do after the resurrection. They will open a store with the real cultivator... Or they will be all-powerful...

I quite like the Kakashi one, but this one. . . How can I put it? The daily writing is actually quite good. I like it a lot, but since it is a warm daily life, and the relationship between the characters is also very good, the death of the character makes people uncomfortable. And the attitude of the protagonist. The protagonist is not a dying old man. He can watch his relatives and friends die one by one and still have a good relationship with him. Moreover, when you wrote, you wrote out the plainness of the protagonist. It makes people feel that the protagonist has not tried to change anyone's death. At the beginning of the Warring States Period, food and clothing were a problem, and death was the norm. He was clamoring to be a chef with no ability to protect himself. He also ran away from home. Even if the protagonist's aura kept him alive, he should know the value of power. And since you decided to write about daily wars, you can skip it and directly enter the peaceful era instead of just having one more witness like the original. The system is generally very poisonous on purpose. If you don't develop the system into a wife or a combat fan into a comrade, the system can be treated as a tool. Publish the task and give the reward. It's so neat and tidy.

When I first started watching, my first impression was very bad. I saw a guy who was incompatible with the ninja world. He was complaining about the system and the system. He clearly said that he had been traveling for two years, but he couldn't see any maturity. Could it be that he had never seen refugees who were hungry and cold?

I feel like I can't fill this pit of cooking ninja. When will the ninja unleash his ninjutsu? Isn't it during battle? Author, think about it, even if you bring food that can enhance fire damage, you won't have time to eat it! Two ninjas fighting is not a fantasy. A small flaw can lead to death, let alone eating food during the battle? You said that the ability can be stored for a month, but who knows when the war will start? Even if you know the battle, can you still maintain this ability once the timeline is extended? And only the ingredients provided by the system can have this effect. Isn't it nonsense if you want to become a cooking ninja?

People who like to read prose and short stories can consider it Those who like traditional online articles are not recommended to read this The rhythm is very simple and concise. The author followed his idea completely. It can be said that he basically ran an outline in the later stage. Therefore, some parts are very poisonous for online articles. But these ideas are indeed worth reading The world view and setting stitch together Naruto and Little Master, and the writing style is similar to high school compositions. The emotions are absolutely sincere and I respect the characters I pirated the tickets and didn't have an account in high school at the time. I would like to thank the author for his help and growth. PS: The people who gave the positive reviews like me are probably the same age, but if you think this book is good and helpful, then it is worth reading

The author has started a book on system flow, but he doesn't want to read about system flow. . . Bad review

As you can see from the front, there are too many flaws. With so many memes, is the word count really good? This system is a real failure

The protagonist of this book can die. Really, it will be the same with or without him. The plot will not change at all. At most, some terrible psychological descriptions will be added. In fact, it is still the same as the original work. But watching this work is really not as good as reading the original work. The protagonist is extremely useless and hopeless. The author forcibly put such a piece of shit into Naruto. I just want to say one thing: Brother author, please don't insult the original work, okay? Since you don't plan to change the plot, why would you create a new character? If you just want to create a simple spectator, you really don't have to go to such trouble. We have eyes, okay? We can watch the animation, but please don't insult the original work. I know that the author wanted to write a daily novel about Naruto, where the protagonist wanders around the world, comprehends life, and understands the true meaning. That's why he had to kill a lot of people in the plot, so that the protagonist has to watch others die even though he has the ability to save people. You are trying your best to create a sad atmosphere, right? Does the author think that readers will say: Ah, this plot is so profound and touching. It's so deep, so touching, and I see that the only desire that keeps me watching is that the protagonist dies quickly, and that Payne, Madara, or anyone else can come over and kill this bastard. It's an insult to Naruto and the system, and it lowers the minimum limit for protagonists on the entire Qidian website. Don't troll: If you have the ability, do it. To be honest, if I had time, at least I wouldn't write worse than this one. I would just follow the original work and then arrange a non-existent protagonist. Who wouldn't? I can arrange more, including Passerby A, Passerby B, and the waiter of Ichiraku Ramen.

The system shaping is "very good", annoying ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ, I don't want to watch ┐(─__─)┌, but everything else is pretty good. A simple complaint┐('~`；)┌. You can stay or go as you please, hehe

Choose daily? Did the author lack consideration? Isn't Naruto's theme about fighting?

Most of the readers who read Naruto fanfics want to make up for the shortcomings of the original work, so as to see a different Naruto world. But this novel is completely unreliable. The update is slow throughout, and the tragedy left by the original novel is not changed at all. The key point is that every time a tragedy occurs, the protagonist is obviously capable of changing it, but the author insists on cutting a little here, strengthening the villain a little, and finally writing the plot characters back to death. For example, in the plot of Gaara, the protagonist is stronger than the average movie level. He knows that Gaara will be assassinated by his father, but the protagonist is willing to watch his uncle be killed by Gaara. When asked why he doesn't save it, the protagonist replies that he is world-weary and scared. I am also drunk. I ab would like to call you the most useless protagonist in the starting point. There is a saying. What you write like this is nothing more than inserting an extra character into the original work. The plot ending is not as good as the eunuch.

Opened a new book? ? Come on＾0＾~! I've also opened it, let's encourage each other 😜😜😜

Can't understand what the protagonist wants to do? Are you a viewer of Naruto World? Nothing can be saved, nothing can be changed, or I don't want to change.

I haven't been able to stand it since the death of the Watergates. Why do you have the nerve to put a light-hearted label on it? I've lost my good mood for the day.

To be honest, I only read a few chapters, just for reference. Personally, I feel that this novel is not comparable to Naruto. I have only read a few chapters. Most of them are just like gourmet food. They introduce dishes and so on, which are seriously inconsistent with Naruto. Also, I feel that the protagonist's IQ is not up to par? As a time traveler, you obviously know your family. You will be destroyed. If you don't practice seriously and change your destiny, why do you cook? There will also be the Nine-Tails Rebellion, the Konoha Collapse Plan, Pain's attack on Konoha, and so many dangers. What do you think if you don't practice? Even if you want to cook quietly, you must have the strength! Are you afraid that time travel has exhausted your intelligence? I read the book review and found that Ya's whirlpool was destroyed and he didn't help. Even if you are a time traveler and have no feelings for the whirlpool, you have lived for several years and you didn't help at all. I'm drunk. The content is for reference only! The content is for reference only! The content is for reference only! I think the author's Kakashi is quite good-looking. I also saw that the author has a new book, which seriously ruined my impression. . . . . Hey|(´･_･`),|･_･`),|･`),|.

At the beginning, I said I would make everyone happy, but in the end, no one around me was happy. It was amazing 🙂🙂🙂

What is the difference between disbanding the Uzumaki clan and destroying the country of Uzumaki in the original novel? The young clan leader who is equivalent to the Uzumaki clan personally brought the entire family to a dead end. They still managed to survive as a group. To disband is to seek death, and to remain anonymous? Do you think the whirlpool is the Senju? You can't hide even a hair, not to mention that the Uzumaki clan generally has several times more chakra than others. What can you hide? I didn't see any humanity in the protagonist. The emotions you wrote in the book, including the relationship between the protagonist and his father, were really artificial. Maybe you thought you were very touched? Saying that you are a time traveler is heartless and you insist on writing some artificial emotions. Since you have written those emotions, does what the protagonist does live up to those emotions?

Forget it if the protagonist is a person who really has no fighting ability like Uncle Hand Fighter. He obviously has fighting ability, knows the plot, is senior, and is trusted by the Hokage, but he doesn't change anything. Except for the second generation, other tragedies that should happen still happen. Others forget it and don't save the children who have grown up. I am speechless. Do you hate giving chicken soup and just watch them die? ? ? After reading the comments, it turns out that Little Pepper is going to die too, haha, bye bye. The protagonist is really lonely...

Abandoned the book 🙂, the early stage was relatively joyful. After the eve of World War I, it can be said that Shippuden plot has an extra skilled chef, who completely acts as a spectator. In World War I and World War II, all the damn characters died (except for Tobirama Reincarnation and White Fang retreated to the background). People who could save more or less just wanted to be chefs did not save. Kushina and Minato tried their best to save, but they failed to save me. I was disappointed. The protagonist who has been in the world for more than sixty years does not have the IQ to strategize nor the strength to crush everything. Naruto's choice of comfort in troubled times was a bit reluctant.

The writing is good, but since Tobirama's death, I haven't read it. I feel that the author knew clearly but didn't save it. Don't say anything. I feel like writing a fanfic is just to save regrets. What is the author doing? He is an observer who follows the history of Naruto and watches his thoughts. Then it's better to just watch the Naruto anime and you don't have to follow it chapter by chapter. After seeing the death of the rope tree in a scribble, this book can really be discarded 😤😤😤😤

I really don't know what you think, but I couldn't stand it after seeing Chapter 14. What is this system? Doesn't the food article system provide recipes? It's better to just give experience cards. Does it make the protagonist dependent on the system? I don't know what the author wrote later, but I couldn't read it after reading Chapter 14. I guess the money for the 14 chapters will be in vain. I will only talk about the first 14 chapters. I haven't read the rest, so I am not qualified to comment on the first 14 chapters. The biggest poisonous point is the system. This system is generally called blood-sucking flow or parasitic flow. Anyway, my label is like this. This kind of system is generally It's that kind of thing. It's none of my business whether the host dies or not. The next one I'm looking for is basically benefits and punishments. Let's use money as an example. For example, the system issues a task asking you to earn 10,000,000 money within the specified time. If you can't earn it, you will be fined ten times or 100 times. Then in the Immortal Cultivation style, failure is punished by death and obliteration. I recommend that you don't do it. Look

When Mito went to the Mist Ninja battlefield with his life force exhausted, did I really think the pig's feet were interesting? Creating such a sad atmosphere all day long, the main thing is that you have the ability to change it, but you just watched your sister fight for her own life force. That's bullshit love for chefs. Even if you make the most top-notch dishes, it's useless. The ninja world doesn't need this kind of thing. Your things can't bring happiness to others. . . .

? ? ? If you don't want to save anyone, why would you want to develop a deep friendship with someone you know when something is going to happen to him? ? ? Why? Is the protagonist a fool? It doesn't matter if I don't save you if you don't have friendship. How can I bear it if I don't remind you if you have friendship? Why are you doing this? !

I recommend that those who have never watched Naruto should read this book. If you just watch it for leisure and entertainment, the effect may be very good. The protagonist is equivalent to Ichiraku in the original work. Starting from the first generation, he has witnessed the death and birth of many generations in Naruto. If you have watched Naruto, I suggest... I won't go into details, just read what I write later. The tragedy in this book is exactly the same as the original work, nothing has changed, For example: the first generation died, Kai's father opened the eight doors and died, Obito became black, the fourth generation couple died, Naruto is still a jinchuriki, Uchiha is still killed by Itachi, Gaara is still black, etc... I don't mean to criticize, I just state this fact simply and objectively. Because I'm afraid that some people may read it with the idea of ​​changing the plot at first, and end up being disappointed like me and abandoning the book. So if you read this review and choose to read this book, you must be mentally prepared: the tragedy that happened in the original book will not change. The protagonist is just a chef (with film-level or above abilities). He either eats or becomes decadent throughout the day, but his mentality is very good and stable. This is a highlight of this book 🤭

There are also some people who often criticize authors. I don't want to say that you can do what you want and everything will not go your way. If you want a cool novel, one that is invincible and can start a fake harem, and seems to be such a gentleman, then find another way. To be honest, fan fiction is like the YY in your own heart. You always hope that the plot will be as you want it, so that you can Let more people see it and agree with it, and then have a greater sense of identity, then I might as well open a book myself and like this author who loves to update or not, and can earn some royalties, right? And to be more vicious, why don't you just go to Kishimoto and say these things that want to change history? After all, this is just the inner world of others, and there is no need to talk about good or bad.

I saw a lot of them, mostly because the second generation had to die, the vortex dissolved, and the system slipped away I thought it was strange, save the second generation? No hope? Spring rolls for you to eat, the second generation, the second generation, even the second generation is dead. What makes you think the protagonist can be saved? Long Aotian? What? Third in the ninja world? Just read the book carefully, don't criticize the sky and the earth every day, understand everything? Do you know what it all means? The whirlpool disbanded. I was a little confused when I saw this, but thinking about it again, who can fight behind the whirlpool? The next four major countries, what the hell are you making a fuss about? Are you going to open the six-lane mode and go up there in seconds? Can you read a book? The whirlpool is just like living in seclusion, and those who die are unwilling to leave, okay? System? I don't think there's anything wrong with it. There's no system and you guys are so awesome and you're so damn good at complaining. How do you, a time traveler, know so many recipes? You know so many and you're still a small citizen on Earth? Collecting money in the early stage is indeed a bit abrupt, but isn't it gone later? Finally, let me say one last thing, God, Naruto is a battle show. There are not many battles in the original Naruto book. You tell me that it is a battle show. How can I copy the plot of the original work? Do I just tell you that the second generation died, time flies, the Sannin period, White Fang died and then Naruto period? Although I do feel that it is a bit watery, after all, it costs money, but the author can control the emotions well, and writes well about the feelings of relatives.

Wow, I am really blown away. The writing is really good. I don't understand why so many people are complaining... The world is a real world with tragedies and joys. It doesn't have to be a world where everyone is alive. Let it go. There is no need to insist on a happy ending. Anyway, I think the writing is really good.

To be honest, the protagonist really worked hard. Hatake Kakashi's father did not die after he was reborn in the second generation, Nagato did not turn black, and Naruto and Sasuke did not turn out like the original. These are all changes made by the protagonist, and the protagonist also worked hard, so it cannot be said that this book is not good.