I, Kimimaro, Want to Live Forever!

Taking immortality as the main route is quite good, but I personally feel that there is no need to deliberately emphasize immortality, immortality, etc. It seems a bit awkward.

The pursuit of immortality flow seems to be quite popular recently, and I personally like it very much. Kimimaro suggested that we get a pair of high-purity Byakugan in the future. I have always felt that the Byakugan and the Corpse Veins are a good match. After all, they are also the eyes of immortals and the human body of immortals, and they are also very beneficial for subsequent surgical operations. 🙂 Corpse Bone Pulse is still more suitable for the fighting type. Personally, I feel that Kimimaro's dance of Hayabusa at the end of the original work is not as good as earth escape field control. If the bones are combined with Kakuzu's earth spear hardening technique, it may be good. There is no need to pursue a Gundam like Susana. The Gundam does not match the bone skills. If you must have a Gundam, you might as well just create another system of skills.

The most annoying thing now is being in the world of Naruto. I don't have to use ninjutsu or taijutsu. I have to use things from the pirate world. I'm speechless.

Now that I see it, my interest is almost gone, and the recent plot has been dragging on. You wrote it well in the early stage, why do you have to side with Konoha now?

I remember a fan said that Kimimaro's blood disease was due to the awakening of the trait of sharing the ashes of killing. It feels more reasonable. I hope the author can refer to it and cure it. It feels like Orochimaru is useless...

It feels like the author wants to do everything, everything is complete, and he gives the protagonist so many abilities that are of little use, and only a few are enough in real battles. It cannot be that more is better but more precise is better. He has many abilities and can do everything.

Daily poison😠😠😠

The system gives the protagonist various magical transformation skills in the world, and he can actually teach them to others, which is a bit poisonous 😰😰😰

Last but not least, to be honest, apart from fighting, daily writing is really not fun. Naruto is not suitable for substituting too many dark politics, otherwise it will immediately deviate from the theme. What are all the readers who watch Naruto doing? Because Naruto is their passionate, forceful, and brainless happy anime. If you want to play dark, it is better to write more and go out and cause trouble. Anyway, fight, fight, and as long as you don't kill the famous ninja in the original, you can brush other jounin. Even if you brush it with a statement that "the protagonist is allowed to give up the mission when he sees it", it does not infringe Golden Flash 🤫

Suddenly it occurred to me that some people said that Obito could never be cleansed, and one of the reasons was that he killed his teacher and his wife. I think the quality of this teacher should be discounted. I think Konoha's method of one jounin leading three genin is more like an old employee leading a new employee. When reporting, there will also be old employees who will familiarize new employees with the work. New employees will call old employees and also called masters. Ninjas with families like Obito are mainly trained by their families. They have their own system of fighting methods, and the teacher's role is limited. Unless they are ordinary people like Xiao Li who have received the teacher's true biography.

After that, the chuunin followed the plot too much, and the abilities of other worlds were forcibly weakened to suppress the protagonist's strength. If he tried too hard to lick Akatsuki, he might as well do research with Orochimaru's development base and become the big boss. If he wanted to cooperate with Akatsuki to catch two tailed beasts, someone would naturally come to take the initiative.

For me, who has watched Kakashi before, I seriously doubt that this is a studio article

The protagonist has so many abilities. I feel like I can fight Orochimaru with just a few. Among them, several of the Shinigami's abilities are definitely above Akatsuki in terms of combat power. However, the performance is so bad that I feel like I can't even beat Orochimaru.

As expected of Kimimaro, after being transported through time, he still pursues the same pursuit as Orochimaru, even lower than Orochimaru. Orochimaru pursues immortality because he wants to master all ninjutsu and does not have enough time in his life. 🤭

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The protagonist is very good at licking the original character. If you like to see the protagonist's licking skills, you can check it out.

I don't understand what the author is thinking. After writing the limited monthly reading, I then wrote about Dragon Vein World. These two are dragging and have nothing to do with the main plot. They are okay if they are written separately, but the word count is just too slow to write them consecutively.

There are many things that make people excited when put into anime, but are ridiculously awkward when put into novels. The biggest problem of the author is that the writing method is very visual, but it is awkward to put it in the text narrative. If it were put into anime, I think it would be very good. ╮( •́ω•̀ )╭

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Come on, the world of Naruto is much more interesting than the previous reincarnation, but it just lacks publicity. Hurry up!

Tsunade in this book is no longer self-righteous. Many of the protagonist's actions clearly have nothing to do with her, but as soon as she knows about it, she puts herself in a good position. It's so disgusting.

The world of illusions is no longer suitable these days. It would be better to go straight to the end as soon as possible. Don't be too formal

The plot has been a bit bland recently, and the climactic four battles are just like playing house. If you can be a chess player, you will have the final say. If you have to be the gunner yourself, you will fall out of gear! If you feel that the climax of the plot is too short, you can completely reverse the plot, just like the original work, Obito-Madara-Kaguya. In fact, there is no need to switch gears to follow the plot.

The author of your six books is a Naruto fan, and all of them are close to or born in Konoha. You have written too much about Konoha in the past two years, so have you ever considered writing about other countries?

It's a pretty good Naruto story, the plot and writing are good, and there aren't any big flaws.

I spent a month in total in February and read it all in one go. Today there are only 34 unread chapters 😐

This novel should be finished soon, the author is working hard

Finally updated, where did the author go to whore?

It ended in a hurry