Pirate Talent System

Seeing that the Thunder Fruit is not eaten by oneself, but given to his subordinates, he abandoned it. The power is not in his own hands, but in the hands of others 😵

This is someone who has never read the original work. What is the strength of General Ming Ge? General Xiliu's strength? Although I haven't read it and don't know the setting behind it, is 150 more domineering than a general? Let's not talk about the shortcomings of the fruit.

Why don't you have proficiency in killing the navy?

Why do I always feel that if this author continues writing and breaks through the bottleneck of the second dimension, there will always be a book that will become a god?

Day by day, I write about the Woolly Pirates. The special product of One Piece is the devil fruit. Day by day, I work on this system and that system. I can't be simple and crude, and give me a fruit. Self-righteous innovation is actually a poisonous point. It is better to spend some energy thinking about a fruit that has not appeared, or the original work did not perform well.

10 O'clock on the first floor. 10,000 Knots. See how many people are watching (⊙o⊙)😠

One common problem among Pirate fandoms is that they like to bring realistic theories with them to the Pirate World. For example, the Thunder Fruit, designed by Oda, is ineffective against rubber no matter how high the voltage is. The rockberry fruit is the superior fruit of the yakigori fruit. These are the rules of the pirate world set by Oda. But in the fan fiction, the Thunder Fruit finally turned into an all-powerful fruit, what kind of electromagnetic waves, and some people are crazy about the Thunder Fruit's own gravity fruit. The wind-type fruit abilities that don't appear in the comics are all used by the Thunder Fruit. Why don't you say the Universal Fruit. Also, after the Shao Shao fruit is fully developed, it has the temperature of the sun. Damn it, just a Flame Emperor move that looks like a little sun, but it has the temperature of the sun? The world of pirates has its own rules, and all kinds of things that mess up the real world are still pirates. My balls hurt.

What I find very strange is that. Why do we say that the navy must be righteous and the pirates must be evil? Isn't this more illogical? For example, if a pirate like Luffy in One Piece is evil, is he necessarily evil? He has a bounty. Does a navy like Captain Mouse have to be just? He also killed many people. So the boundaries between justice and evil are inherently blurry. This book is very toxic.

The protagonist treats everyone inside as NPCs and looks down upon them! In addition, Robin was involved in the early stage. Although it was very obscure, everyone understood it. Later, when I became the fourth emperor, I let go. He was flirting with Reiju, and he was forcing himself on the empress. The feeling changes. It's almost invisible, a typical example of success that goes rampant. In the early stage, being chased by the navy was like a dog. No one cares about him behind. After defeating Whitebeard and protecting the Fishman Island, the protagonist went there alone after someone else caught a fishman... I felt like he was mentally retarded!

The second time, one of the best pirate fanfics, in my opinion, it ranks in the top 4, I recommend a few books to you, One Piece Dark General, One Piece Dream Master, this author's Sword Soul is also very good, and there are a few other very good books that I forgot to name 🤤

The writing is average, and the generals in the front are a bit off in the back. The character's personality suddenly becomes obscene, and the swaying is even more disgusting. The character charm is gone. The pretentious part also has an awkward feeling. The paragraph when he was first wanted by the navy was not well described. What he said is going to turn the world upside down. Although we readers know that the protagonist will definitely rise, the taste of the words has changed so early. It is a bit childish to say that it is pretentious and a bit too certain. If it were changed to maybe one day your navy would regret this decision, it would be more comfortable. The descriptions of various pirate characters are okay and better than ordinary pirate fan novels. Secondly, there are too many fighting scenes. It would be better if the fighting descriptions were more detailed so that readers can have a fantasy space. Other aspects are not good. Delicate enough, such as love life, more than 800 episodes of One Piece, and memoirs. Generally speaking, it is well written among pirate fans. After all, the author who wrote about pirates may be younger and many things are not well described, such as the characteristics of each character, the protagonist's personality, fighting, and plot. The sense of immersion is low and there is no soul. In the end, I really feel regretful that none of the great writers wrote about One Piece, and I was reduced to the point where I couldn't find any good books.

The reality is as evil as the pirate world. As the most developed country in the United States, do you dare to visit the slums at night? The people in Loli Island in the United States are no worse than the Tianlong people. Have you seen them being sentenced? So many children were sent to the island and then all disappeared. The Celestial Dragons were nothing more than that. The child soldiers in Africa and the Jews in the Middle East still used the banner of justice to kill civilians. In the war in Ukraine, it was inexplicable who was injured. So the reality is as evil as the world of One Piece.

There are a lot of trolls, who invited them? I read the comments before, but then Shuhuang looked at them and it was okay.

How should I put it? I feel like what I'm reading is not a One Piece fanfic, but a fantasy novel from the old era. It has a strong sense of instant recognition.

If you want to give it a try, I can tell you that this book is basically a complete book. The most idiotic thing is that later on, you become the four queens and protect the Fish-Man Island. Then a mermaid on the Fish-Man Island is captured, which has nothing to do with a passerby. Then the intelligence captain reports to the protagonist, and then the protagonist personally goes out to save it. It is so stupid that I vomit. Chapter after chapter of similar plots, I can't stand it. The second extremely poisonous point is that the protagonist wants to conquer Germa 66, but when he receives the other party, he directly starts to flirt with Reijiu. The chat process is written as if the author has never touched a woman in reality, which is simply retarded. In addition, Auntie only knows how to use steel balloons, fire and thunder, and Kaido only knows physical skills. Let's not talk about it. I want to laugh!

In the world of pirates, those who truly understand the domineering power of the overlord are the strong ones, and will not work under someone else. You see, Luffy's grandfather is also very powerful, but he just cannot understand the domineering power of the overlord. People with domineering domination are destined to be kings.

I'm a bit confused. After reading so many pirate fanfics, time travelers will not understand what a pirate is. People like Luffy are not so much pirates as adventurers. Why do they have to be pirates or marines as soon as they go to sea? There are no bounty hunters and merchant ships on the sea. Why can't they go to sea and form an adventure group? Although they will still be involved with the world government in the future, adventure groups sound better after all. Isn't it a main line to end the great pirate era and start the great navigation era?

This combat power is too low. Lucci was stronger than Sand Crocodile ten years before Luffy went to sea. He is also more domineering. His strength is still higher than that of Lieutenant General. Even if you wrote a book in 18 years, it is too outrageous.

Can't you practice the Six Styles of Haki by yourself? You have to activate the talent points to add points. If you don't activate it, it will be completely locked, right? Anyone who writes the system is pissed. Training by yourself is completely useless. You can only become stronger through the system.

It's a bit unreasonable. It's like the entire navy is chasing you around.

Suddenly I came across this book, and my heart skipped a beat. I still remember reading it when I was in the second grade of junior high school. I stayed up late to read it and read it after class... Now that I have graduated from high school, I really miss the carefree way I read novels back then. 😢

I used to read pirated copies, but later I found that it was not easy for the author to start reading the original version, but I am not a great person. I can only support the author to read the original version and never give a reward. Today I will reward the author. I hope it will not be too little. I also hope that the author and his family will recover soon, and I also hope that the author will update more. I only read it after a week. Come on, your writing is very good and gives people a strong sense of immersion.

Calm and shocking, a brainless slap in the face that only knows these two adjectives. It has nothing to do with the fandom. It is not as good as The Return of the Dragon King.

I won't go into details about the flaws in combat and plot, other reviews have said enough. I just don't understand why Goldfinger treats the navy differently. Is it possible that the navy is Goldfinger's own son and the protagonist just picked him up?

Although this book was written relatively early, there are many problems. But I think the One Piece manga itself has more issues with the patches and settings, right? If it weren't for the bonus of popularity and sentiment, I don't know what the poison would be like 😅. If I really change it to a novel, and put aside the halo bonus, I don't know how many Shen Nong would say that he was poisoned to death. I don't mean to criticize this book, but when you criticize this book, don't keep washing the original comics.

The name is useless, what kind of rubbish Ghost Hand Pirates group?

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I haven't read this book yet. Why does "My Experience" show that I have ordered this book? Does anyone know?

Come and read it with "One Piece: Crazy Bonus Points at the Start of the Death Camp" 😁

I saw 270, and I don't know if there is a Overlord color entanglement in the back (the author wrote it too early, the fight against Kaido once was written in June 2018, and the official One Piece only announced the dragon form in July)