Douluo: Martial Spirit Golden Thunder Bamboo, I Have a Mortal System

The author has become addicted to his own personal setting and cannot extricate himself. Previously, the Wuhun Palace was chasing Ning Rongrong, and now they are chasing the protagonist. As long as they don't join the Wuhun Palace, they will be hunted down, right? In the original work, those people with innate level eight or nine and innate soul power who have not yet joined the Wuhun Palace are okay.

Don't do this. Ning Rongrong is being chased by Wuhun Palace. When he meets the protagonist, let him go first. Please spare me.

The Shenwu Soul Palace is chasing Ning Rongrong, it should be Sword Douluo who is chasing wild geniuses, right?

Big brother, please be smarter. One of the martial arts skills in the original novel is almost invincible. Are you so good at cultivating immortals?

The one about Ning Rongrong's pursuit almost made me give up reading the book. It's not because the characters are OOC, it's because the plot is unreasonable. How old is Ning Rongrong? How can she not be surrounded by bodyguards? Is the sect safe to let him out? It feels like the author forced him to form a bond with the protagonist. It's too deliberate and not interesting.

It's too poisonous. I saw Xiao Wu going to Star Dou at level 30, and then Xiao Wu returned to the Lake of Life. Looking at the chapter title, he ran to Beast Academy again. It was too poisonous. The author was completely immersed in his own self-pleasure. Can it be logical? For us old bookworms, it's extremely poisonous, okay?

The current Douluo fan fiction is really outrageous. This guy is just cultivating immortality. The Pangu Axe, Chaos Pearl, and Good Fortune Green Lotus all came out.

The ninth soul skill, Golden Thunder Bamboo Pole Vault! In the end, he obtained the Earth's physique in one leap and killed indiscriminately.

It's really poisonous. It's made up out of nowhere. The preface and the follower are inconsistent.

No, no, even during the Qi training period, I can kill through the God Realm.

I haven't watched Mortal, but I'd like to ask, doesn't the Elephant Armor Skill cause a painful debuff in the later stages? Is it worth setting up a permanent debuff for a little advantage in the early stage but no use in the later stage? Besides, the effect of re-cultivation of San Gong is even smaller. Also, it is impossible for Wuhun Palace to intercept and kill Qibao. It is unrealistic for Bibi Dong Gang to be in power at this time. If the Enshrinement Palace is to be destroyed, it should be destroyed first by Lan Dian (Landian is both hostile and weaker). It will not be a big fanfare. It seems to be a theatrical version. It feels more like a parallel world in which Wuhun Palace is smeared and strengthened by Tang Sanwei Guangzheng.

It's a mess, with a lot of typos, and even added personal settings.

After reading the first eight chapters, I feel that the setting is pretty good, but I still have some shortcomings and questions that I would like to submit to the author 1. According to the fact that the protagonist in the first eight chapters is close to level 20, the level will increase very quickly, and the overall pace of the book will be faster. Have you ever thought about slowing down the level increase in the future? 2. The article feels a bit stiff when I read it. I wonder if the author can polish it more in subsequent articles. 3. If you go to "Yuanyang Hotpot" in the future, after all, there is ink jade sacred bamboo in it, I feel like you can make some plans. 4. Since the protagonist has practiced immortality skills, in the subsequent content, will the protagonist go to other planes, stay in Douluo Continent, or end with returning to Earth? If it's not convenient to disclose, you don't have to answer 5. Is this book without a heroine/single heroine/multiple heroines?

There is no hidden skill that dares to be practiced. It was okay the year before. The little brat came and the rats came. If you weren't in the seventh house, you could get through it. You were discovered by Mo Hen even if you practiced to the tenth level at such a fast speed. If you have money, it would be convenient to have a separate dormitory.

I figured it out. This is Douluo Continent where the mentally retarded version of Mouse is located. I dare to go to the waterfall to look for silver in Holy Soul Village. Mouse is already nearby.

You need a system to play Excavator Continent, are you so disabled? If you can find a light skill and float on water, you can dominate Douluo. It's really an anti-aircraft cannon to kill mosquitoes.

I think it's okay. After reading a lot of readers' comments, many readers are now obsessed with being dark for the sake of being dark. I've read ten chapters so far, and I think it's okay. Anyway, I will run away if it collapses later. Personally, I have read a lot of Douluo fanfics, and those that are related to mortals are very interesting to read. Just reading a novel is enough. There is no need to do it like scientific research. I have read a Douluo fanfic before. The martial spirit is in charge of the sky bottle, but the more I write about it, the worse it gets. In fact, fighting against the same person, to put it bluntly, there is only one line, early development - academy competition - the road to becoming a god - the final battle. People who are too ruthless usually can't stand it. Private settings are too complicated and there are too many to read.

Since you have consulted the Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and have gone to Douluo Continent, a world where the jungle is essentially the best of the weak, you must be able to settle accounts! We will settle accounts anytime and anywhere! Because this is the characteristic of the protagonist. Go crazy like a psycho and be a love brain like those others.

Very well written. Come on, come on, come on, come on, update!

It's very nice. Please keep up the good work, author.

It's very beautiful. Please give me more support, author.

When can Xiao Wu and A Yin be included in the collection? Since there is already an insect repellent technique similar to the beast control technique, why not just use secret techniques or make a spirit animal ring to adopt her as a spiritual pet? Is it really okay to just leave her in a wild and ownerless state? Have you never read the original work or something? Didn't he know that Tang Hao could tell Xiao Wu's identity as a soul beast at a glance and had already set his sights on her? Why don't you hurry up and bind her as your own pet, then teach her the breath-holding technique and take her out of Notting College? Why are you waiting so long, if you're not afraid of losing it? You knew clearly what kind of character Tang San and his son were, but you didn't hurry up and stay away. You actually dared to hang out in front of them. What's even more outrageous is that you actually took Xiao Wu to the Holy Soul Village. Are you crazy? Are you afraid that Tang Hao is blind and won't target her, or do you think Tang Hao is broad-minded and won't steal your opportunity? And once Tang Hao discovers that there is something wrong with the Blue Silver Emperor, and you two have been to the Holy Soul Village, then his first target of suspicion will be you two. Do you think he will kill you directly? You don't think that he will reason with you and still be fooled by you, do you?

What does it mean when Wuhun Palace pursues Ning Rongrong? I saw this part of "Hao Hao Hao Sudden Coming" before, and 99% of the people were poisoned to death by you.

It's okay, it's fine if you don't follow the path of the original work. Don't go too far with the private setting. The one with the little green bottle is time and the one without the little green bottle is reincarnation. And don't forget that Han Li will have revenge sooner or later. Unless it's pointless, Mulan needs to resist the unexpected Han Li, so he didn't go to ask for an explanation, otherwise Master Le would have become a master.

Pig's trotters practice in school and are sneaky. They can avoid being noticed by mice, and there are many secrets in pig's trotters.

The plot arrangement is also a little more reasonable. Can six-year-old Ning Rongrong run to Notting City? It is impossible for Ning Rongrong to escape at the age of six, and there must be a protector secretly.

As long as you don't have a harem, it's still fine.

So far, it seems that the overall performance is good, the rhythm does not drag him down, and he has a mortal sense of sight. Come on, I am optimistic about you.

You started out rubbish. You were born with level 6 soul power at the age of six. Will your soul power reach level 100 when you are 100 years old?