Night Crow Lord

I can accept the setting and three views of this book, and I also appreciate the author's plot concept, but the author's writing skills are really... It's hard to describe in one sentence... The layout is very large, but what I want to express cannot be expressed smoothly and completely, which always leaves readers confused (Red Rose Banquet Incident)... I can't put it into words The setting contents are infiltrated and reflected in stages, but are all given to the readers in one go. The game text cannot directly copy the settings (there are three chapters analyzing and summarizing the skill arrangements before level 10)... The writing is sometimes too procrastinating, bloated and meaningless. It is obviously a match-up that cannot survive three or five chapters, but it takes a chapter to introduce it in detail (the mercenary team was wiped out by the magic wolf). If you need to write a few characters to death and earn tears while letting the protagonist wake up and change his mind, there can be a better way of writing... The above are personal opinions and suggestions. The comment area also reflects on these issues. I hope the author can see it. In addition, I really hate some unintelligent trolls and unreasonable comments, such as "I love to watch but don't watch", "I still scream when I don't understand", "I only write as many words as you say" and other violent or unreasonable speeches. Although I haven't read much, I really hope that the author can write better and better. If you really don't like reading, you can just quit and delete the book, and you won't waste time typing so many words!

The experience setting is really rubbish. As a summoner, the monsters killed by the summoned beasts actually only have 1% experience, and they must be of a higher level than themselves.

Author, do you have any misunderstanding about foreshadowing? Foreshadowing is a hint from the previous paragraph to the following paragraph, but you didn't even use foreshadowing just mechanically, with abrupt turns, and the sudden result is contrary to the known information. The foreshadowing that no one can see (including the one that can only be found after looking at the results) is not a good foreshadowing, and after you read the results, you can't find where the foreshadowing is. You can just copy it mechanically. Who has set up the random variable in hand Currently 129 chapters

In fact, I quite like the setting of the World of Glory. It's a pity that it ended so hastily... The reasons given by the author are... Hard to describe... To be honest, I'm not too interested in the New World Magic Academy in the latter volume Regarding the author's mention of laying out the original destiny trajectory of "Art", I ordered it The problem of reading the big dive... I personally complain about the reason why it is not purely from God's perspective... This is indeed a bit toxic, mainly in two aspects: The first aspect is not to spread out the fate of "Art", but to describe this fate to the readers! What is the significance of showing the original destiny trajectory? What kind of content can make readers resonate, suddenly realize, and feel happy? The author has absolutely no idea... In my humble opinion, the original fate of "Art" as the son of sorrow should be "sad" enough. It should be an image of a struggler at the mercy of fate. Only then will readers feel the satisfaction of what has changed after the protagonist wore him and the regret of not being able to save anything... But when the author unfolds the original fate of After that, I personally felt that what I saw was the image of a "standard starting-point, loser-looking male protagonist who attacks against the enemy". There was no redeeming feature in the image. Rongguang's will was like his own mother's, giving him eyes all the way. The original "Art" didn't show any sadness at all and just killed and gouged out his eyes to attract girls... I... I honestly feel so bad looking at thieves, okay? I get angry when I think of the protagonist wearing such a thing! Especially in the arrangement of the trajectory, the original "Art" actually killed Promi! ! This is too poisonous, brother. The author made Prome so cute and the whole plot... This is simply feeding the readers💩... The author laid out the original trajectory, either to make us feel that it makes sense for the protagonist to wear him instead of someone else, or the original "Art" This image can have enough bright spots and tragic heroism to make readers feel sorry for such a character's failure to appear... Rather than making us feel that such a thing is lucky that he is gone... Oh my eyes, why do you still want to let me know that he has done these bad things... Is it so... Hard to explain in one sentence? The second point is... It's not from God's perspective, it's because the style you followed at the beginning was full of dangers and encouraged a wretched development flow... Later, the character of the protagonist changed a lot due to the encouragement of readers, and he was almost no longer in danger because of bad luck. The story of the ups and downs of the world... I just rushed to open Wushuang and feel happy... It was originally written as if there was no danger around the protagonist. You said that the protagonist will be powerful when he develops his career in the later stages. Everyone recognized it... As a result, after signing the covenant with the will of the world, the protagonist completely changed. It has changed too much... The action mode has also changed a lot... And basically all the other characters and interpersonal relationships laid out in the previous chapters feel useless... The plot also feels like a mess... The purpose is not linear... I rake here and there and pestle here and there... I have no idea about the next chapter after reading one chapter... I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. You said his main task is to correct the deviated destiny path... There is no difficulty or suspense at all. Why should I read dozens of chapters about how he does it specifically? ? ? What will the protagonist do next? Will there be any difficulties or crises? ? Does anyone know if the protagonist doing this will cause him harm? The only enemies who can be called enemies are Flo and Liant, and they can't quite figure out the protagonist... The problem here is that the writing power is not under control... To be honest, I think the beginning and early stages of this book are pretty good. Originally, when I saw the setting of the epic of the fate of the Son of Sorrow, I thought it would be a group portrait like "The Mystery"... The world view of Glory World is really innovative. The wizard lord is a good idea, the church infiltrated by mages is a bright spot, the ability setting is also very good, and the protagonist's setting is also very good... And then the author's writing skills... Destroy all these good cards... The writing is there, but the control of the plot is too weak... Many plots make people feel inexplicable after reading it. When I look back and think about it, I understand, the author is just enjoying himself...

First of all, this is definitely a good book. Although it is a system text, it is by no means a constant fight against monsters. It is an upgraded routine text (those who like this type of text can go here). The highlight of this book is the brain-burning reasoning, decryption and adventure (those who like relaxation and simplicity can go here). Secondly, most of the background and settings of this book are original by the author, and they are also explained clearly in the text (those who only read common settings such as DNF, Warcraft, DND, etc. Can go here). This book can be said to be a novel system adventure text. Finally, this is definitely a good book. (PS: This book is not actually abusive. The protagonist is nervous, cowardly, and overthinking. However, this also makes the image of the protagonist more full) (PS 2: It is recommended that new readers who read less should be fully mentally prepared) (PS 3: I hope the author does not want to be a eunuch)

I don't want to say that the plot is not dramatic. If you like it, just watch it. If you don't like it, don't watch it. It's ok? Do you like to see others complain? I only have one point, please don't write a bunch of stuff in the book that you don't complain about, okay? That's right... Then what? Not even a partition? What are you looking at? Can you either open a separate chapter or cut it off? Can you read it every time and then this? Why can't it be connected to the plot? It makes people lose interest in watching it😡😡

Why are all current novels system-driven?

How to say, I have bought all the chapters (currently I see 583 collections of this chapter), and I think I can still express my thoughts. The same sentence or paragraph, the same adjectives, connectives, etc. Appear repeatedly. It can be tolerated when reading, but for someone like me who listens to books at work, it is simply terrible. The more I listen, the more irritable I am. For example, I just heard this word in the last two seconds, and immediately Another problem arises. It is obviously a novel with a setting that is very interesting to me. Why does it seem to me that the more I write, the more casual it becomes, and I even feel that I am not proofreading much? The previous problems are not obvious. I feel that they only became serious after the author doubled the novel... This is not to say that the double version is not good or impossible. This is the freedom of the author himself, but I am very sad that it has reached this point.

I don't mean to criticize, the author's writing style is very good, and the writing has an attractive and mysterious atmosphere, but it really doesn't mean that you should write a cool article. At least the early writing should be a little contradictory. Qiangwei's story feels like it is all arranged by the boss, and the protagonist's participation feels very redundant, just like in some chapters. The content is purely for the benefit of the reader. Perhaps it is more enjoyable than a cool novel. At least don't not want to write a cool novel, but also feel that there are limitations everywhere. When reading a novel, the most important thing is to be happy. Don't write too much according to your own taste. It is a good novel, but I feel that it can be better.

Fortunately, I didn't listen to the book review about the abusive master, and he just didn't have enough talents at the beginning.

After reading Chapter 68, I feel that it is unreasonable to upgrade the crow profession without adding spirit. If there is only this profession, how to release the skills that require high spirit in the future, this profession cannot be established.

Wouldn't it be better to use suona for the time traveler's singing activity? 😁 Just a whim

I read the first part and felt that the biggest poisonous point of this book is that the author always thinks what he thinks, but what we readers want is not what you think, but what we think, understand? You always force us to keep up with your ideas. Who are you writing this book for? Are you enjoying yourself? If this problem can be corrected, then this book will be a good book and a fine product. Not much to say, there is a shortage of books. If you don't want to read this book, you won't have to read it for the time being. (The above is only my personal opinion and I refuse to refute it)

Brother, I have read Chapter 44, and I have a question. The Crow Mage was a summoner yesterday. He can't level up by killing the summoned monsters, so why is he just playing chicken? It's like when I play DNF Summoner and don't learn a single output skill of my own. I summon a dozen monsters to help clear the map. I still have to turn my wand to make the last blow to gain experience?

. . . In fact, I think kindness is a very good quality. Why do you have to be criticized? In reality, do you want to be scolded if someone helps you? emmmmmm, I posted it on my grave a few months ago, and I'm still making noise. Goodness is a matter of three views, and everyone's understanding is different. It is good to discuss opinions, but it is forbidden to argue. I believe that the world is not black and white. We all know who is the hero and who is the enemy. Goodness is not absolute. All we need is not to harm society and to have a clear conscience.

A book with excellent writing and setting, worth reading

Having a heroine in this kind of novel is like having a fly in a glass of water It would be even more disgusting if there was a crow that turned into a monster girl or something.

I really don't think this book is poisonous, but it made me see the cruelty of the Internet literary circle. The cake is only so big, and there are too many people who want to eat it. It's terrible. It's hard for new authors to be surrounded by hackers, trolls, trolls, and river crabs!

Although I couldn't continue reading because of the plot and some settings, the setting of the Crow Mage actually made me write a book based on crows, a pure Crow Mage. Instead of using crow as an auxiliary. For example, the first ring: summon crows, the second ring: plague infection, the second ring: Crow's Eye, the third ring: surrounded by crows, the fourth ring: death declaration... If it is to defeat the evil god, it is estimated that there will be special individuals with high infection such as Thousand-Eyed Crows.

To be honest, whether I am playing games or reading novels, I have never seen a profession in which the protagonist is so weak, and the skills are contradictory to reduce the strength. The core skill of the Crow Mage is that you can share skills with the crow. If you want to share, the core skills must have the highest priority. And if you want to share the skills, then the different body structures, different bloodlines, etc. Can definitely be overcome. As a result, when I encountered the first skill, Meditation, I was told that crows and humans have different structures and don't have wizard blood, so they couldn't use it. Why do you want to do this? As long as the crow's body structure is different from that of humans, he can share the success of any skill with you?

The main character, Mao, doesn't even have the strength to go out and travel every day. He is abused every day. It's so pitiful. The more I watch, the angrier I get. I want to transform into a character in the book and go up and break his legs. 👿

I'm really convinced. As a summoner, the monsters summoned kill the protagonist, but the protagonist can't get experience. He has to kill it with his own hands to gain experience. If you set it like this, you might as well write the protagonist's profession as a warrior. It's so reckless.

Why are there so many people complaining about the book in the comment area? I think the book is very good, the plot is great, the world view is quite big, and it is also my favorite type. Although there are some shortcomings in the book, that's not what it's like! This book is not a cool book. Those who like cool books can go out and turn right. One more thing to say: Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Is this pet battle setting serious? ? ? The Summoner's summoned monsters do not give experience when killing monsters. The Summoner must fight them. Is it so easy to play? ? ? ? ? You might as well summon a set of weapons and equipment and let him be a melee summoner. Even if you say the remaining health lasts the last hit, it barely counts. The monster is dying and the remaining health will not explode? I feel like the setting is so weird, what else can I summon? Is it used as an eye position?

A self-titled article by a kp who thinks he has a high IQ lacks foreshadowing and foreshadowing, and the logic is blunt. Halfway through the story, I feel like I can't make it up anymore. The joke is not nonsense, the adaptation is not random fabrication, and the suspense twist is not random writing.

This one feels better! It's the sunny one, so cute!

Come and look at the author's name. Come and look at the author's name. From now on, his novels will be blocked. If you like to enjoy yourself, go ahead and enjoy yourself slowly. You will be addicted to reading his novels. The author is enjoying himself from the beginning to the end. You can enjoy yourself by yourself. If you have to come out to harm others, it is too much.

I have one thing to say, this book is really good. I don't know why so many people are criticizing it. Is it because many people can't keep up with the author's ideas in 2019 or some other reason. Anyway, I think it's okay.

This protagonist is so useless, useless at all, and the plug-ins are also useless. After so many pictures, he has not become an official wizard, and the plot is too slow.

I'm not sure what the author wanted to express in the early stage. The protagonist had no purpose and didn't know what to do. He was a slow upgrader and even joined an adventure group for no reason. As a result, everyone except the protagonist died, which made people numb.