Card War Chess: the Entry Starts with the Headless Horseman

The first battle begins in Chapter 21. If you don't attack, who will?

The rules of Yu-Gi-Oh are already very complicated, and you also added a war chess game. And it's not combined well, it's too confusing.

Can Guan Yu and Zhang Fei be considered the Headless Horseman? After all, there is no head.

😅😅I just caught up with the latest and cut it for me, wasting my money. The setting of this book is okay, but the war chess and card systems are incompatible. The author insists on integrating them together. It would be much better to write war chess separately. Moreover, the base effect that was changed midway disrupted the protagonist's previous adaptations to the base, and it was tiring to have to do the adaptation again. The main plot written by the author is very clear, which is the resurrection of the evil dragon and then defeating the evil dragon. The other plots are all branch plots. Normally, this kind of clear main plot should end well, but the author went sideways 🤔🤔

First of all, the author has a good idea, but if he doesn't make any choices and sews it all in, 100 chapters will not be enough for your setting instructions, and may even confuse you and the readers, making it easier for bugs to occur later. Then, after the battle descriptions are sewn together, the scenes become more boring. They have to be explained, step by step, and there is no passion. I don't play Yu-Gi-Oh, but I like to read Yu-Gi-Oh novels. Just reading the stories makes me feel aroused. You really can't substitute it. If your writing is not good, don't add the battle flag setting. This kind of chessboard battle scene is difficult to control

I feel that the descriptions of chess pieces and battles are too rigid. According to the author's explanation of the chess pieces, the activation of the chess pieces' effects are all marked with words (learn from Yu-Gi-Oh's K language). Without them, there is no effect at all (the one is useless against the magic level and below, and it is useless against super power). It is not acceptable. No real-time combat look

​ Card war chess worldview, classics join the magic academy, then use materials to refine the deck, and then play cards This process is basically the same in the early stage, and readers are happy to watch it, but there is a problem in the middle stage. Generally, this kind of novel will design another "original protagonist" (the protagonist in the card game), and then design an original main line based on the original protagonist However, the main plot of this original book is very poorly written. It is very superficial and not in-depth at all. It is all foreshadowing. Even the traditional semester competition is only superficial. In the end, the campus plot is very poorly written and it is directly GG (I have been following it, but I stopped reading when I left the campus to find a mermaid, and then the author cut it off) Crash point: In the early stage, I stayed in the comfort zone for too long and did not delve into the world view at all. I waited until the readers got tired of making cards, then hurriedly expanded the world view, and then g On the one hand, I stopped writing half of the original noble VS academy, on the other hand, I inserted the real world view, and on the other hand, the mermaid plot was also very difficult to write, and in the end it was a mess that I couldn't stand. Possibility of improvement: In fact, the author is a person who deeply digs into the plot of the nobles vs. The academy. He writes about why the nobles hate the undead, and then reveals that ancient demons and dragons can be resurrected through card making This way, it can be a foreshadowing of the nobles resurrecting the evil dragons. The protagonist is also an undead type + an undead killer, which is the best candidate to solve the current crisis. It can also expand the protagonist's ability, so that the protagonist can also resurrect ancient creatures (classic card elves) Summary It was a very good novel written in the early stage. The setting was novel and interesting, but the author did not know how to write the main plot. After getting tired of traditional card-making routines, he had to write the main plot, and then it collapsed.

Then let me ask you, you dedicated a chapter in Chapter 44 to saying that you don't want to engrave a magic spell and let the material play its own role, but there is still a plot to engrave a magic spell and seal the chess piece later... At that time, I felt that the protagonist's explanation was quite far-fetched. You can have all kinds of chess pieces by relying on the entries. What does it have to do with the need to orient chess pieces with certain functions? As a result, the author's left brain attacked the right brain.

Believe first, then believe 😊 In fact, I am writing a novel called Crow Mage. I think it's okay. Or maybe there's nothing that can be done about the Western fantasy genre of wizards like Crow, so I might consider giving it a try.

Ask, those who post fitness photos without patting their heads, do they count as Headless Horseman entries? Be a bodybuilding statue chess piece of the Headless Horseman

The author is used to Shui Wenshui, and the free chapter is also a back-and-forth conversation.

The beginning and introduction look very similar to the Buddhist-style life of a cat villain, but it has been the best on the site for several years. I don't know what your book is like.

It's quite slow-paced, and there are indeed many rules and explanations, but it's not too confusing, and it's quite easy to understand. I think it's quite interesting in terms of creativity, but it's really too slow. I don't know if I can assemble a complete set of chess pieces before it's put on the shelves. I write this in the hope that the author won't be hit by the comments. Well, keep writing.

Let me talk about the feeling of following the reading. I saw the chapter about going to sea and stopped reading because the whole plot from the appearance of this new card group to this one is very separated. It can only be said that it has nothing to do with the previous plot. It has nothing to do with the protagonist's core deck of the Headless Horseman and Crow. It is very mysterious. Let's talk about the previous plot. In fact, there is no need to write about half of the card academy? This card almost only appears in one battle in the book. Deleting it has no effect at all, but makes it more difficult for readers to read The same goes for card making. The main thing is a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west. Whatever you do, you basically draw cards randomly with entries. You always want to make a certain card, but suddenly the entry comes up and you pull it in to see what happens. This is the process. It's enough to create a random trance card once or twice to complete the core of the deck. Doing it all the time is a bit aesthetically fatigued. It will be much better to build a complete main deck and then start to advance the plot and then develop a new series of decks. The Decapitation Orc series deck does a good job of integrating the two elements of the protagonist. After making the Tyrant, you should start to postpone card making and promote the main plot upgrade.

I don't feel the need to write war games and cards at the same time

It's awesome, I like it. Isn't it too weak to only have two bases to support one ordinary base? The crow is not inferior to other birds. At least it is an ordinary base. The same is true for the Headless Horseman. Generally speaking, isn't the Headless Horseman a pretty strong undead? Why are you pulling so hard? There can only be civil war.

In fact, the author's setting is fine, but the key point is that the application of battle flags and cards in reality is a bit nonsensical! You might as well just turn the battle flag and cards into auto-chess mode! At least it won't be difficult for everyone to watch, and the plot can be connected!

It's too confusing, and why add cards? I watched the main character play war chess for a long time, and I really don't see the need for the cards.

I ordered it to 159, and then when I saw 52, ​​I realized that there had been no updates for many days. I checked the comment area and found that the author had become a eunuch, but he didn't say it clearly. Oh, what a waste.

The author is a standard Western fantasy author with a very good foundation, and the problems in this book are not so big that it cannot be continued. Looking forward to the next new book.

I haven't read much of it, but I came across it during a limited-time offer. I said in the chapter review before I even read a few pictures that my head hurts when I read it. It's not that it's not well written, it's just that I need to read the previous plot settings over and over again, otherwise I'll always be confused, not to mention that this thing is completely sewn. Now it seems that this novel is pornographic. Come and take a look.

It's a pity. The settings of the war chess and talent boards are quite interesting.

The rest is okay, I really like this theme, why don't I update it?

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