Desert Emperor

To be honest, I still like this kind of novel. The kind that becomes a god and an emperor. And although the lines are a bit mediocre, they are still very touching. The journey of the protagonist... I have personality flaws so I won't say anything about it, but it should still be very comfortable for other people. But! But! Why do you have to be a sister? ? Is it easy for me to find a good book? ! Can the author pamper his readers? But to be honest, the author's three books are actually very suitable to my taste, except that the updates are a bit slow...

I came in based on the title and introduction, but I was deceived emotionally. When the author is writing, he will add some miscellaneous things, and write down all his divergent thinking. He really thinks about everything, which makes people have a headache, because the additions are all used to cheat the word count and are of no use. Then add the encyclopedia, and there is very little content that you can actually read. Data is constantly being poured into it, and some of the data is wrong (I don't know if it has been corrected). It feels like the author is not writing a novel, but just trying to get some coupons. It's really poisonous. Those who can write compositions for high school students and want to read good novels should not read it. Elementary and middle school students who are a waste of time can read it. 😰

The awkwardness of this book is not a problem, and it is not a problem if I don't read it all. But it is not as good as the author's other two books. I always felt that the writing was so awkward that I couldn't stand it.

Young man, you are on a narrow road. Good guy, the more you write, the more niche you become. The opening chapter is LOL + A Certain Magical Index + Scientific Railgun, so except for random passers-by, most people who read your book are fans of the above three categories. For example, I came here for the golden crispy chicken... I have never read A Certain Magical Index and Scientific Railgun, but because I am already very familiar with the plot. I understand, so it's okay... PS: I've been spoiled by various authors' novels (spoilers) to the point where I don't want to read them anymore, Then, Persona + Headless Horseman Persona, Good Guys Headless Horseman Persona is okay, it's been around a few years, I believe most people have heard of it even if they haven't read it, but what is Persona? Never heard of it! You are invisibly screening readers... And even if you want to write about a niche, you should also write something simple and easy to understand. I read the two or three chapters of your introduction three times and still didn't understand it. Maybe my understanding ability is not very good, but I believe that most people who read novels will not understand it in detail. I think your book is quite to your liking. I suggest you ask the readers about their situation in the book club (if there is one) or in the book review section without affecting the outline. It is best to take advantage of the fact that you have not written much and delete this volume and rewrite it. Of course, it's just a suggestion, because I think your writing is very interesting to my taste, so I kindly give you a suggestion. If you think you can write it well, don't write it as a fan, write it in an original way, and write down all the settings clearly. If you can express it clearly, that's also good. Above

Just write fanfics properly. What the hell are you going to do with a bunch of gender-changing homosexists? Apart from feeling disgusting, I don't feel good at all.

The system currency is always regarded as "golden sand dollar" by me (*/ω＼*)

Shurima, your emperor has joined the Kentucky Fried Chicken combo

I knew this author when I saw the author said that Magic Forbidden is greater than Dragon Ball 🤭

Brother, I've given you the tickets, please give me more 🔨🔨🔨

I signed the contract as I kept raising it. . .

This novel is a work for the author's own entertainment. The author is often proud of himself (I really don't understand what he is proud of). The protagonist has no logic at all in his actions and does whatever he wants. All the messy settings are completely incomprehensible.

This is purely a self-pleasure novel. Those who have been exposed to the games and animations written in the book may find it interesting, but those who have not read it have no idea what the author is writing. They feel that the relationship between the characters is confusing and it does not make sense at all. If the author is the kind of author, I will just let my thoughts become words, then OK, write whatever you want. If the author regards writing a book as his own job, look at the comments and how many bad reviews there are.

I was originally very interested in this subject, but when I saw that the original characters changed from male to female, and female to male, I couldn't figure out why these novels insist on transforming men into girls and women into masculines. Do they have any special quirks?

Good guy, I endured the nausea and read twenty chapters, but I really can't stand it anymore. You have to do a good job of banning demons and have twins change their genders. It's just disgusting. I'm not interested in the rest anymore. Fans are generally read only if they are familiar with them. I hope the author can take a good look at what readers want to read.

This book will definitely not be popular. After all, the world in which Shang Shang Shang opens the book is very niche. Although Sister Pao is famous, it does not mean that the work is famous. To be honest, if the book had started with Marvel, this book might have been highly recommended. Even One Piece or Naruto would have been much better than this. Of course, it all depends on the author's own thoughts. If he just writes for his own pleasure, then it doesn't matter. If you want to get good grades, it's best to write more popular background works.

After reading Wo Ying, I felt that the writing style was not right, so I turned to pirated copies and finished watching Fate, which I wanted to watch the most. . . . I can only say that this book is too narrow, and I even feel a little regretful about the starting points I spent on it. It really made me feel confused and felt like it was written by someone else. It suddenly became dark, and it was so dark that I had no idea what it was about. 😅 It's a pity that a good novel suddenly ended up like this. I think I support the author, and the following chapters. . . . . I hope people who can get the author's ideas will support me, that's it

Obviously, resurrection armor is used here! Why do some people really think the finale is over...

After reading a few chapters, I just want to say: As long as you are happy, author

The human form of Yellow Chicken should be similar to La Er

I haven't read the novel yet, but after reading the hot reviews, I feel like the author is a dickhead? Right? Na, na na, na na na, na na na na na na? Persona and Headless Horseman Persona are a game and a light novel (with anime). Both of these works are very niche, and it is difficult to understand their charm without playing them yourself. I have played the former, but I have no interest in it, so I abandoned it and gathered dust. I have read the latter eight or nine years ago, and now I only have an impression of a few distinctive characters. I have read several novels involving these two works. After reading them, as long as the main plots of these two works are involved, they are not satisfactory-compared to popular online novels, they read more like self-interested fan fiction for fellow fans. I won't talk about your 731 Academy. The author was stupid and blew himself up. Now he has almost offended fans all over the world. It's so cool. This is not interesting to me. I just saw the hot comments and thought of it. I typed so many words but didn't want to waste it.

I barely finished reading The Forbidden City, but I really couldn't stand it. It's not that the author didn't write well, it's just that I couldn't understand it.

Very good, the outrageous setting in the opening chapter can dissuade 90% of people and also earn traffic, tsk tsk

May I ask the author, does this book have a female protagonist? If not, I watched it

If you change too much, it's better to write about the original world. If you change too little, it's better to see the original world. This is the current situation of infinite streaming. In the end, creativity loses to reality

I'm numb, Sister Pao has a sexual transformation? I'm trying to persuade her to quit at the beginning

Can anyone tell me if there will be such a disgusting sexual transformation later? I saw the author's statement in Chapter 42. If there is later, I will leave early. Don't waste this money and end up like readers begging to read your book. If you don't change it, we won't suffer any loss. Anyway, the money is in our own account. Have you finished it? Let me know if there is such a disgusting story behind it. If not, I will just make do with it.

What about slime? ? What about a punch? ?

Young man, you have eaten shit, now it's time to call the servant of the desert

The magical changes at the beginning really dissuaded me. After reading more than ten chapters, I can only say, just be happy.

The writing is quite good. It may be boring in some places, but the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. I have read a lot of books, but the three books written by the author are all good. Among them, Lord of the Silver Crow may be mixed with too many things from the other two books, which is a bit unsatisfactory, but the remaining two books are very good. It is recommended to read them in order, first read Night Crow, then Sand, and finally Silver Crow.