Evidence of the Sun King

The author spends too much meaningless energy on Surya, which somewhat crowds out the scenes of other characters. In Chapter 393, when the Skaven attack Helmgart, it is obvious that this character has no characteristics, not annoying but not likable.

Everything about this book is good, except that I feel like the protagonist claims to be for human beings, but in fact, the core is all LSP driven by the lower body. To be honest, it's a bit annoying to describe girls too much, but I can't stand the occasional interesting storylines and fights. It would be better if there were less descriptions of girls. Now I don't want to read novels about wanting to have a relationship with a beautiful girl.

Emperor's Choice (X) Slaanesh's Choice (√)

I don't know what the author's purpose is. The biggest problem in the Middle Ages was the Bichi in the lake. It was said that it was to weaken Chaos, but in fact, what the Bichi did accelerated the destruction of the world. The things that Tigris Imrik and other people did under the guidance of Bichi all helped Chaos. Man Bald's back stab is nothing compared to this Bichi. You said that you read countless background information and finally wrote a story about a green pond in the lake and its licking dog to save the world?

This book is a rare piece of writing with average fighting skills and is worth reading. But on the emotional front, are you planning to write about a stallion? And are you still a tracheologist or a feminist? So at a glance, it can be seen that the emotional lines are all skipped.

After reading Chapter 240, except for the poor description of female emotions, everything else is fine. It can be considered a relatively good Warhammer novel or a Western fantasy novel. There is nothing sinister about the main plot. As for the female protagonists, the plot and description of the book are particularly interesting, but don't expect any logic. If you think about logic, it is all poisonous. In the main plot, the barefoot girl is inexplicably fucked and is extremely poisonous. The protagonist's harem is suitable for viewing with the kidney, not with the brain.

Rating: Liangcao Boutique Creativity: Excellent -, this book belongs to the Warhammer fandom, which is relatively niche. The author cleverly combines the medieval Warhammer world and the Warhammer 40K world and made a secondary setting, which is relatively novel. This is more friendly to casual readers who do not understand the Warhammer world view, because casual readers do not need to understand the Warhammer game settings. After all, all settings are subject to the author, and there are a lot of interesting things in this chapter that are said to be popular science for casual readers. Characters: Average+. The author's handling of the characters in the early stage was very good, giving people a more realistic and three-dimensional character with distinct personalities and logical character behaviors. However, in the middle and later stages, the logic of the character's behavior was inconsistent and the character's personality growth was abrupt, causing the novel to have a more obvious sense of tearing. Plot: Average+, as a fan novel, the plot design of this book is already relatively good, but there are still problems in the middle and late stages. After the protagonist enters the Kingdom of Knights, the plot seems a bit bland, and it is a bit forced to be dramatic (pretentious), and the jokes are too serious, resulting in the world view being torn apart, and there is no sense of substitution. Writing style: Excellent-, the author's writing style is more sophisticated, and the description of scenes, characters (especially stockings) is excellent. Summary: This book was originally a niche fanfic, but the author's excellent secondary creation made it a relatively excellent fantasy novel. However, in the middle and later stages of the transition, some settings are contradictory, so it can only be regarded as fodder.

Didn't you notice? Did Queen Fu Hongpao die in battle?

Okkllot 9llYn Oi

I've been raising it for a long time, and I don't know where to write it now? Has Kangkang gained weight~ Has he hit the universe?

This book is a bit dark about the Emperor. The Emperor is written as the Ancient Sage, and the Ancient Sage is written as a god. However, the Ancient Sage is not a god at all. In the Warhammer world, the older you are, the stronger you are. It is even more nonsense that the Emperor does not have the power to destroy stars. The setting of the Eldar God is actually the subspace projection of the Eldar. Even if this setting is not followed, the Eldar Gods can only be regarded as secondary gods. The so-called defeat of the Star God actually means breaking the body of the Star God from the undead. The Star God's body is still fine, but Slaanesh destroyed almost all the Eldar gods when he was first born. Kane's claim to be the strongest god except Asuryan was also broken into pieces by Slaanesh. What else is there to brag about? Can you compare with the emperor? These so-called gods in the material universe are either essentially powerful life forms, or they are believed to be gods by their own people. In "The End of Time", Asuryan and the Eldar Gods are just refugees from a world destroyed by Chaos. As for Asuryan in Warhammer 40k, he is also a younger brother, straight up. In general, Chaos God > Star God > Eldar God and Asuryan. With this little strength, how can you have the courage to challenge the Lord of Humanity? ? ? In some background information released by the Black Library (such as Xenology), it is implied that Khaine and the other Eldar gods were the first sentient species created by "the Ancients", or the Old Ones, who were also the creators of the Eldar and many other races in the 40k universe. Other Black Library publications suggest that the powerful psionic Eldar were themselves created by the Old Ones so that they could generate their own psychic projections for use in the war against the C'tan. After the demise of the Old Ones, the Eldar worshiped their psychic projections as gods. The Emperor is able to shape stars in the sky into spheres with a diameter of 12 meters, confining them without allowing them to collapse or release gravitational waves, so that visitors will not be pulled by them at all. Original text: At the center of the hall was Idalia, beautiful guardian of a million ideas. She burned endlessly, crimson and furious in her stone prison – a caged star, bound by wards so powerful that no living Librarian could untie them. The star was only forty feet across, crushed by the will of the Emperor Himself. - Mephiston: Blood of Sanguinius The Emperor is at the same level as the Four Vendors at the lowest level. Do you think the Eldar God is stronger than the Emperor? And the fairy in the lake, Bichi, talks nonsense and is really disgusting. The Emperor is a young Old One? ? ? Who told you? ? ? The Old Saints were just early highly intelligent beings, not even gods. The Old Saints created the Eldar. Then you say that the Emperor is not as good as the Eldar gods. Then you say that the Emperor is the Old Saint? Are you contradictory or not? The Emperor is neither an ancient saint nor a god. The Emperor is the Emperor of humanity, and humanity is the humanity of the Emperor! Khorne, one of the Four Vendors, can pick up a knife and directly slash a plane in the military book, and Nurgle's back garden, which is also the Four Vendors, was burned by the Emperor, and there is no way to deal with it. God of the Eldar, I beg you not to touch the Porcelain Emperor.

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Guess who she is~~

Let's talk about the feelings of readers who don't know the background of this book at all. In fact, I have never watched Medieval Warhammer at all, and I have no idea about the Imperial Gray Knights Space Marines or anything like that. But I think the majority of readers who have played Medieval Warhammer are probably not the majority. We just treat this book as an original fantasy novel. I really like the protagonist's fantasy adventure in the mainland, and I am passionate and moved by his experiences and stories. But the emperors, space warriors, galaxies, etc. That pop up from time to time always make people laugh, as if they are always reminding you: this is a very absurd small map, and the era of interstellar technology is the main event. I really don't like this feeling. I think the story of the mainland and the battle with the Four Evil Gods of Chaos is enough to make a spectacular epic, isn't it? I hope the author can add less interstellar plot~

Just write about stockings and women's skills. Any book you open can become popular. If you can't survive writing online articles, you can still go to the No. 1 Club to get a subsistence allowance.

The male protagonist starts with legendary strength and aristocratic background. Then he was madly ridden in the face by a mercenary kid. Is this really logical? Or in an extraordinary world that values ​​strength? It's impossible even in the real world.

The evaluation is that after chapter 200, it is just a mess, both witty and witty The content of fighting and war is purely based on the number of words, but after chapter 300, it is easy to talk, you like to play awkward, right? A few female characters are purely tool people, and they may only be used as snacks in the early stage. You Warhammer fans are so pathetic, even with this quality, they can order an average of 3000

The current situation on the battlefield (I mean there may be some omissions, welcome to correct me) Expeditionary Force: 5,000 from the Knight Kingdom side, 2,000 from the Dwarf side, a total of more than 7,000 Battle situation: The right wing of the expeditionary force was completely wiped out, the left wing suffered heavy losses, and the Chinese army fell into a bitter battle. First there were the greenskins, and then the ratmen. The fact that the expeditionary force has not collapsed yet is due to the elite nature of the expeditionary force itself, the bravery of the commander, and the charm and command of the supreme commander. The long-range troops had no ammunition and had to fight in close combat, and the reserve team joined the battle and it was difficult to save the situation. The mage troops stalled, and everyone of the Holy Grail Knights was injured. Originally, they could only rely on the super strength of the commanders to support themselves, so as not to be eliminated prematurely. However, due to the sudden appearance of the undead, the greenskins and ratmen were attacked from behind, giving them a chance to breathe. Bafengshan War General: The number of troops is unknown (a conservative estimate is that more than 10,000 people were put into the battlefield, I remember bringing a few spiders) Battle situation: Goblins were used as cannon fodder, a large number of elites were not fully committed to the battlefield, and the green-skinned guards were still in their hands and were not fired. The previous battle with the expeditionary force had consumed some goblins. Because of the large number of troops, the generals were overwhelming and had an advantage. Later, they were flanked by the Skaven. The greenskins left a large number of corpses in the unexpected chaos. After the chaos, they began to use one against two. After destroying the right-wing expeditionary force with the Skaven, they fought back and forth, fighting on both sides. Now they were attacked from behind by the undead and suffered heavy losses. Headhunter Warlord: Unknown troop strength (equipped with heavy firepower and large monsters, a conservative estimate of over 10,000) Battle situation: Unexpectedly attacked the greenskins from the side, appeared on the right side of the expeditionary force, successfully relieved the pressure brought by the greenskins to the right-wing expeditionary force, and then wiped out the right-wing expeditionary force, annihilated the Sea Soul Guard, and the headhunter single-handedly killed Black-Hearted Lepp. The raid on the general at Bafeng Mountain was successful. After the general recovered his strength, he was temporarily suppressed. The battle started on two fronts and the expeditionary force was suppressed at the same time. Now they were attacked from behind by the undead and suffered heavy losses. Blood Queen: Unknown troop strength (remnants of the Undead Empire and an unknown number of Terror Beasts, maybe a black carriage) Battle situation: Attacking the greenskins and ratmen from behind to gain a significant advantage, and declared war on three parties at the same time. They were blocked by the greenskins and ratmen and could not attack the expeditionary force. What is breaking up a fight? Beating everyone involved in the fight to death is what breaking up a fight means.

It's time to collect names, badges and features for the protagonist's warband! As the beloved son of the Emperor, what characteristics will the Warmaster's warband have in the future? Let me start with one—— Chapter Name: The Purifiers Chapter Emblem: The base is a red and white book lying flat, with swords and warhammers crossed on it, surrounded by a pair of outstretched wings. Above it is a skull, and above that is a tilted chalice sprinkled with holy water to symbolize purification and cleansing. Chapter motto: Live for the Emperor, die for the Emperor. Characteristics of the Chapter: In connection with their recruiting planet, the Purifier Chapter is equally renowned for its noble spirit of sacrifice and brave fighting style. All recruits of the Chapter must travel the entire world alone before being eliminated by the Chapter. In addition to honing their combat skills and fighting spirit, they must also practice the eight virtues recognized by the Chapter with their own actual actions. No technological artifacts may be used during the entire process, and only the most primitive melee combat weapons such as swords and war hammers can be used. It is believed that the purpose of this rule is to pay tribute to the Chapter's Primarch Llane Malcador - a direct result of this travel is that the Purifier Chapter has more Stormtrooper Squads than other Chapters. The entire process may take decades. Affected by this harsh rule, the Purifier Chapter has probably the most experienced company of recruits in war. Many recruits have war experience comparable to that of the main companies of some Chapters. Their noble virtues eclipse even those of the Ultramarines and their sub-chapters. Another characteristic of the Purifier Chapter is the application and exploration of knowledge. Many Chapters and even the Adeptus Mechanicus are crazy about being able to visit the vast library of the Purifiers - it is believed that the Purifiers' database contains a lot of wisdom from Warmaster Llane Malcador, and its source may even come from the Emperor himself. Another feature of the Purifiers is the large number of sub-species humans in the Chapter. These sub-species are particularly common in think tanks (pointed-eared sub-species) and logistics equipment departments (short-legged and long-bearded sub-species). The large use of sub-species humans and the high proportion of psykers in the battle group once made the National Church very worried, but This worry has never actually caused any real trouble to the Purifiers - the Warmaster's high position and high regard from the Emperor are obviously enough to deal with all objections, and the Warmaster's "Reverse Corruption" skill is obviously enough to defend against possible betrayal and corruption in the warband.

How can I put it, the other party does have the truth... This book is indeed suspected of infringement. However, I think we can negotiate reasonably with the other party. You must know that the Warhammer series is a niche game among mainland players. Many readers have heard of it for the first time, including myself. But through this book, I gradually became interested in the Warhammer series of games, and I also purchased the genuine game on Steam. Isn't this an advertising effect? If one out of 100 readers buys a genuine game, isn't it a huge economic benefit to the developer? It's rare for an author to write a series of novels that are very popular, so why must they be banned? Can't we authorize cooperation? I believe that developers also look down on the convenience of writing novels... The key is what kind of benefits it can bring to the other party! In fact, from my point of view, I am already preparing to buy Warhammer 3... I hope the developer can be open to this book, and all of us readers will repay it by buying the genuine game!

I won over you and wrote a Hammer Warhammer. There were so many emotional dramas in the harem that it was unbearable. I thought I was on a male channel emotional channel.

Today, with the help of a map, I will give you a popular science about the historical prototypes of Batonnia 🤭🤭 Because these historical prototypes are really interesting.

Not enough for Slaanesh, but pretty enough

After reading it, as I grow up, I don't know as much about women's clothes as the author describes in one chapter.

Today there were people advertising in the group. I asked the management to come out and do some work, but the management kicked me out of the group? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I want an explanation

It's understandable that you have a foot fetish. Just write a little and it will be fine. If you keep writing, it will be a bit disgusting.

As the title says, this part was originally a reply to a certain book friend, but my response to this chapter has reached the limit, so I will post it here for the convenience of that compatriot and interested comrades. "Is this true?" Said Jarrod. "As I said..." Lilith said. "No," he growled. "No, stop that nonsense. I'm only human, and I want to know if my whole life has been a lie. I want to know if my people are pawns in the hands of some unheard goddess." "Who told you that?" "Does it matter?" Jarrod shouted. "You just have to tell me it's not true. Tell me you're not the Lady of the Lake, and I'll apologize to you. I'll give up my seat on the Council and we'll never have to meet again. But tell me now." Lilith said nothing. There was no tension or guilt on her face, just calm. "I don't deny it," she finally said coldly, "in fact, I'm proud of it. I'm proud of the promotion of your savage ancestors." "You took advantage of us," Jarrod said. "We are just pawns on a chessboard, dying for a non-existent goal." He raised his sword. "We thought you were a beacon that knew us, guiding us. But you led us to destruction. Now the greatest among us is dead, and the rest are about to follow them." "There is no other choice," Lilith said. "Prophecy is my gift, and I saw the end the moment I was born. I needed an army, and you provided it to me." "Why us?" Lilith looked aside. "Asuryan would not agree to the creation of a new race. Not after he saw the results of creating the elves." She turned and brushed his sword away with her staff. "I chose your ancestors to devote themselves to a greater goal. I pulled them out of the mud and gave them nobility and glory second only to the elves. Without the creed and law I gave, your ancestors would have been destroyed in the civil war, or trampled into the mud by orcs and worse things." She raised her staff and almost pressed it on his chest. "Make no mistake, human. Everything you have, your glory, your lands, your martial prowess, is all due to me. I hold your honor and your loyalty, whether I am the Lady of the Lake or the Lady of Magic. I will not apologize for collecting debts." Jerrod heard a low, bestial howl, and realized it was coming from himself. His sword hand was shaking with rage, and his blood was pounding behind his temples. The tip of the sword was raised. "You're no lady," he said softly. "You are a demon." "No," Lilith said. "I was just the one who did what was necessary." She lowered her staff. "It's necessary, Jarrod." Her tone melted and became apologetic. Her proud stance fell, replaced by guilt. "This world must be destroyed. But that does not mean all hope is lost. There is a world - a paradise - where life can flourish again, even if it is consumed by the fires of Chaos. I could not have done it without the sacrifice of Bretonnia. It will be worth it." She took a step towards him, arms outstretched, but Gerald ducked and backed away. "Listen to me," she pleaded. "This war cannot be won. You cannot win, nor can your brothers who died for the Empire, nor those who died in the Civil War. But some of them, the souls of some of the dead, still live in my Arcadia, protecting it from evil. Even now, the souls of your brothers, the knights who died for the fairies, for me, are still fighting for a new world, fighting for a better world." (PS: Ghost Oh. In fact, the Taoyuan Township behind was finished earlier than the planet. Afterwards, Lilith turned pale with fear and ran into the arms of the spare tire Teddy and cried emmmmm) "So, even if we die, we are still your weapons?" Jerrod said. He shuddered. "Our ghosts can't find peace either?" Lilith put down her hands. Her eyes were filled with sadness. "What are knights? Aren't they warriors who always sacrifice for others?" She said softly. Jerrod took a step back. "That's no consolation, considering you made up these creeds," he spat. He shook his head. "Is this everything? Is this what we mean? Live as lackeys and die as lackeys, slaves to a master who only treats us as weapons that we can throw away after use?" "Isn't this how you treat your serfs?" Lilith said. (Jerrod: mmp, you are indeed right, you deserve to be the one who compiled these creeds) Jerrod said nothing. He couldn't think, couldn't breathe. What is he asking here? Doesn't it all make sense? Lilith suddenly knelt down on her knees and let her dress fall apart. She nodded slightly. "If you don't believe me, kill me, Gerald, Duke of Quines. Put me to death for what I have done. All I ask is that you swear on your honor - the honor I bestow upon you - that you will fight for the Avatars. Fight to stop the Darkness, fight for the New World." Jerrod hesitated. Then he raised the sword high and grasped the hilt with both hands. In an instant, he was ready, ready to kill Lilith with one blow. But it was still too heavy for him. His whole world, his, the life creed of all his people, was nothing more than a goddess's gamble. It was a game of superhuman strength, and they were just pawns, pushed around like children's toys. "Why?" He shouted. "Why do you do this to us?" "I told you", she said softly. "Repeating it won't help you understand. I made you the tip of my spear and wielded you as such. But now, you have turned your back on me in my arms, and the tip of your sword is pointed directly at my heart. Pierce in." Lilith looked up at him. "But before you do it, you must swear an oath to me." "I... No," he said. "Swear no more, no more deceit." "You will swear to me," Lilith continued, as if he had never spoken. "You will swear to me, Gerald of Quines. You will fight for the Avatars and die for them, as you almost died for me." "I refuse," said Gerald. "I wouldn't give my life for you, or anyone else. You broke us, destroyed us, and I've decided. I..." He paused. The sharp blade in his hand kept trembling. In front of his eyes, he gradually passed every fallen fellow cavalryman, every fallen comrade and relative. They died believing that the Lake Fairy was watching over them. But in reality, it was all just a cruel lie from a goddess who didn't care about them at all. But something organized him. Some stubborn strand of his past, the strand before Lilith shattered his faith, tugged at his arm. A small part of him whispered to him, telling him that what he was thinking was unworthy of his dignity. Killing her would only prove that she was right. It was necessary to prove her machinations and deceptions. . . His people would never come into contact with the light without her. Jerrod looked down at her. He looked directly into her cold, alien gaze, and then said loudly: "You are wrong." Lilith blinked. Jarrod lowered his sword. "You are wrong," he said, "The glory of Bretonnia was not given by you. We don't owe you anything. On the contrary, you owe us a lot. And you don't want to throw them away easily." (PS: Fortunately, this Gerald is known as the landless Duke, otherwise anyone would be choked to death by Lilith's sentence, "Isn't that what you do to the serfs too," by the way) The person who leaked the secret to Gerald was, of course, the bald Manfred Mann, the king of the gang 🤭🤭🤭)

Overall, this book is good, especially before the protagonist becomes the King of Knights. As the author said, the overall rhythm and plot were very well designed. However, after becoming the Queen of Knights, on the whole, as the author said, the tone of the overall chaotic world conflicts greatly with the image of the cool male protagonist, which is very abrupt. First of all, I am a member and have read the whole book, so there is no need to talk about level issues. The following are my personal opinions. Although it is an afterthought to comment here after so many years, I really want to complain. First of all, as mentioned above, under the tone of the dark world, the male protagonist is not happy or happy. On the one hand, the male protagonist cannot fail, and on the other hand, he must highlight the characteristics of the world. In this regard, the author tried his best, and by the way, I think the author's writing skills are quite good, or very good, but the plot design is still a headache, mainly due to the addition of a lot of plots with unclear meanings. Machiavellian tactics are necessary and important, but very abrupt. From Bafeng Mountain and the Dwarf King, tacticians are not simply not saying what should be said clearly, but predicting and planning the other party's behavior through the design of things. In other words, people are just tools rather than results in machinations. What is really important is the goal to be achieved. Let's make some complaints, of course, these are basically after becoming the king: 1. Where the dwarf king is, the dwarf king is questioning in an attitude of educating his descendants. The logic of behavior is testing, and the protagonist's choice is tolerance. The choice here cannot be said to be problematic, but it is obviously inconsistent with the tone of the novel. It was different from going to the high-precision place later. At that time, there were clear and ulterior secrets, so it was very logical to be patient, just to reduce the sense of existence. But the meaning of arranging this plot at this time is just to let the male protagonist grow. But it conflicts with the heroic and fearless style of winning the previous battle. Of course, I'm not saying that the male protagonist has no brains. That's also stupid. However, it was a bit strange to see an image of victory being shattered in an instant. But I can still understand it. 2. Make a serf Holy Grail Knight a marshal. I don't see the point in this. Qualifications? Personal combat power? Command ability? Is there no one else to direct the entire country? In fact, what I guessed at that time was to bring up one of the nobles who had previously opposed the protagonist, let him be a target to absorb the firepower, and then kick him out if something went wrong, to prove that it was not that I didn't give you a chance, but that it was useless even if I gave you a chance. If there is no problem, I am a good judge of people and will not be nepotistic. But sealing this one, all I can think of is that in order to win over the goddess again, it is the Holy Grail after all. But what's the point? Do it for outsiders to see? Prove the king and respect the goddess? I didn't understand it, and to be honest, I didn't see anything special at the end. On the contrary, it confirmed everyone's surprise at the time, didn't it? In order to prove the rationality of this abnormal decision, it might be better to set up a separate plot proof for it, but there is no such thing. 3. The rest is basically about the struggle in the harem. It is said to be a harem, but apart from having children and satisfying sexual desires, it is actually a division of power. Whether it is the infiltration of female knights or the reconstruction of the Witch Council. There are two problems here. The first point is that power is only responsible for the source of power. The infiltration of female knights is normal. From a certain perspective, they are angel investors. But it's hard for me to comment on a few witches who have been fighting for so many years and don't understand this, especially Veronica and Aurora. The intelligence agency formed by mother and daughter is actually compared to Dongchang, not Jinyiwei. On this basis, not knowing how to please anyone is actually a bit immature. Taking the initiative to ask for a title for his daughter is something that a mature political figure cannot do, right? Later, I felt that the author simulated the struggle between power factions and then placed it in the harem, but the two are different. The second point is that the author separates feelings and purpose too seriously. For a while, the male protagonist thought that the people in the harem were pursuing him because of something he possessed. It also happens in modern society and is normal. But what is abnormal is that if a person treats you badly and is ugly, but he is rich, your goal is very clear; but if a person treats you well, is handsome, and is rich at the same time. Can you tell how much is emotion and how much is purpose? So many times when I look at the back, I feel that the people in the harem are not the harem. The bosses of each branch are trying to win the favor of the boss of the head office in order to obtain more resources and get more budgets. Judging from the background of the dark world, it's no problem. After all, it's all transactions. One sells his body and the other sells his resources. It's consensual. But again, this is not at all different from the overall tone. 4. I was speechless when the dark elf maid rebelled. As I said before, no matter how clever the strategy is, people are not the focus, the focus is the results. The author has to go to the next chapter to explain it, but I feel that this explanation is just what the author wants to explain, nothing more. Because it's very contradictory. First of all, the maid's motivation for doing this is to show authority? ? ? The beauty of lowering and uppering? ? ? Testing the boundaries of power? ? ? I don't understand, what's the point of doing this? And was it because of a few words from the protagonist that the Dark Elf's emotions returned to their peak? ? ? What is the plot of the Asasi male protagonist? ? ? If you kill the protagonist, I will count it as your hard work. Moreover, to say the least, if you don't have the emotion to return to the top, what do you want to gain? Kill the male protagonist and start a war with the Kingdom of Knights? Then Chaos invades and everyone is finished? Or is it to show strength and tell the male protagonist that he is better than Lilith? Is it enough to have yourself in the future? What kind of three-year-old plot is this? The later patch said that they wanted to prove that they are not lovers but allies. This is because the male protagonist must and can only unite all forces, so he will ignore everything you do, right? It's good. The male protagonist has no temper at all, which is very good. The logic is very reasonable, if the male protagonist is Chu Xuan. But that's not the problem! ! ! ! I believe the dark elf told the male protagonist to help him build a new force and then betray him. Even such a covert threat is fine, but what's the point of doing it openly and then doing nothing? ? ? What I can't understand is that you are very good at palace fighting and thinking about yourself, but the male protagonist has no countermeasures, not at all, and has complete trust; the dark spirit will also be reminded of the good times in the past by a few words. . . I really do. . . Of course, it can also be said to be Malcador's legacy, but I can only say that the author is happy with this plot. Moreover, in this plot, everything is said in a dream, and all the words and actions of the parties are just what the author thinks should be like this, and Jiajing did not dare to do this. If the other party doesn't understand, or guesses wrong, then the whole play will be over. But I can only say that it's pretty good. After all, it's just a novel. The above is not complete, but the general idea is still expressed. Although the complaints are very powerful, I still want to say that this novel is actually good enough and the xp is also very good (if you don't think of the harem as people who come out to exchange their bodies for resources, because I find it boring when I think about it). The overall plot control is still online, and even with the parts I complained about later, I still think it's enough to keep me entertained. As for before becoming the king, I think you can get fairy grass?

Come back today and see that it is actually better than Su Huan. Emperor may actually consider writing a second part. After all, Warhammer is actually a very grand subject. There is still a lot to write about in 40k.

I can only say that fortunately this book was written six years ago. Today, there are too many points that would make this book a hit.