Online Game: The Primordial Era

I was bored and looking for books to read on some small websites, and I accidentally came across this ancient book. I have looked for many books before, but most of them stopped reading after reading only one chapter, which made me feel sick to my stomach. In fact, the routine doesn't matter, I just hate pig's feet pretentiousness and the villain is mentally retarded! This ancient book cannot be said to be refreshing for me. I finally have a book that I can read. Knowing that I had just read Chapter 137 (written after the third rejection), I was really moved by the author's spirit. So I downloaded the Qidian Reading APP and came to support the author. I quite admire the author's broadmindedness, you could also say I'm envious. . Really, come on! 🙂

Do you think Dayu really didn't do anything when he passed through the house three times without entering? Don't forget, his wife later turned into a Wang Fu Stone, and Sun Wukong jumped out of the stone. The key is that Dayu's Dinghai Divine Needle still listened to Sun Wukong's words! Do you think Sun Wukong did nothing when he immobilized the Seven Fairies? Don't think that nothing happened because the monkey immobilized the Seven Fairies. Otherwise, why would the Queen Mother and the Jade Emperor be so angry? They haven't seen the Seven Fairies since Pantaoyuan, right? Then seven gourd babies appeared. Why can they turn into stone like monkeys? ​Here is something to think about. Later, when those seven little gourd boys bullied the disheveled snake spirit every day and pinned the snake spirit down, nothing happened. How did the Dragon Balls come out? It's obviously a snake egg, but Sun Wukong is looking for the dragon ball everywhere like crazy. After sorting it out in such an orderly manner, I seem to have discovered something...

There are too many books in the bookshelf. . . I've finished ordering, but there are still more than 400 chapters left to read. . . I don't know when I want to watch it. . .

After reading dozens of chapters, to be honest, the worldview has great potential, the setting is also good, and the gradually advancing storyline shows that the author really treats this book with care. But! There are various loopholes in the plot, various logical conflicts between the behavior of the main and supporting characters and their identities and backgrounds, IQs that are not online for a long time, and there are meaningless characters... As an old bookworm with increasingly mysophobic tastes, many toxic points are really hard to stick to... It's a good time to get together and get together, and I wish the author a better next book!

Again, there is a trouble-making and useless fat man next to the protagonist. He must be really poisonous. . .

This book could have been good, but the key point is that the protagonist is too useless. If the protagonist does not have the halo of the protagonist, if he is not ahead of everyone, he is not the protagonist. No wonder the author keeps complaining that no one reads his book. If he doesn't want readers, he blames the author for his bad writing. No one wants to read the protagonist. The protagonist is always ahead of others. Author, you must understand one thing, what species is the protagonist? If the protagonist is not written to be more awesome, the film will be trashy, and the protagonist of the plot is forced to appear to be awesome. Don't you think it's very contradictory? What kind of courage does a garbage protagonist have to look awesome? To be the protagonist? Who gave you the courage to continue writing? It's not as good as the eunuch. It was okay at the beginning, but in the end, others overtook me one by one, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

Fat friends persuade me to quit, not because I look down on fat people, but because there is a fat friend in ten of the fantasy 4 books, which made my scalp numb.

There is an aura of forced intelligence, the feeling that the protagonist is not too smart, various suspicious points, and abnormal things. Did the protagonist forcefully deceive himself into accepting it? The plot arrangement is too rigid. Why was he the protagonist? Is there anything special about it? No matter what is high or what is low, Hanwu is at least number one, and has always been number one, so it feels good to step in. The protagonist is like a fool, with no decisiveness at all.

Hundreds of chapters later, I am still fighting with the players. It makes me tired to watch. I can't hold on even if I jump from one chapter to 10 chapters.

Death has more than 200 chapters. I have to say that the theme and world view are very attractive to me, but the behavior of all the characters, including the protagonist, is really unacceptable.