The Divine Cause-and-Effect System

The author's writing style is good, but I feel that the whole text is too depressing, and there is no sense of system flow. Staying in other worlds for more than ten or twenty years is not as good as other supporting characters practicing for half a year. Although I feel that the author is trying not to overwhelm the writing and not let the plot and force value rise too fast, but this way of writing makes people feel that the protagonist is too useless. It's good for the author to have his own ideas, but since it is a cool novel, it must have enough cool points. Not all protagonists of cool novels are Long Aotian, but at least the protagonist must have his own characteristics. Not to mention always invincible, at least he must be the strongest one at every stage. Moreover, the protagonist of this book seems to have been toyed with in the middle of the applause. As the writing goes on, it becomes more and more unbearable. The protagonist's character is also a bit repressed and unable to let go. He does not have the mentality of a strong man. Personal opinion: Don't blame the author.

The protagonist is in the world of Xianxia, ​​and knowing everything at a glance is a mid-to-high-end basic skill. Just looking at the atmosphere of the main world, it looks like a pure world of martial arts, but it is more than that, and there is no Xianxia flavor at all.

And the author, you said that Emperor Dou is the same as the Great Emperor? I kind of laughed! The Great Emperor can cut down the stars, and the Red Dust Immortal can enter the river of time! Can Dou Di cut off the stars? The Great Lord of Heaven reverses the course of time? Just because Dou Emperor can smash hundreds of thousands of miles of earth?

How can he compare to Zhe Tian by fighting against that garbage cultivation system that feeds energy? 🤫Zhetian's cultivation system was left behind by Emperor Huangtian. What state was Emperor Huangtian in? Immortal Emperor! That is the Daluo Jinxian (the real Daluo Jinxian, not the Daluo Jinxian that is prevalent in various prehistoric novels). The master realm in the Great Master can support an immortal king to death, even worse than 🤫

It feels like the protagonist's experience in so many worlds has been in vain. He is just like an ordinary person without the mentality and will of a strong man.

Nosy, indecisive, benevolent as a woman, add to dogs

Yes, for now, the author, Zhu Xian, has written something that has not been written before. Keep it up. I hope you won't see another A Chinese Story and White Snake in the future. 😐 That's too vomiting. Come on, you cold-blooded Xiaopu 😁

So the heroine just picks it up and takes it all, so the opportunity is not enough.

Why do I feel like the main character is a loser! The mentality of the protagonist is really not suitable for this kind of spiritual world, and the city is pretty much the same.

After reading the last chapter, I finally confirmed my thoughts. It turns out that "junior sister Chen Li" is the protagonist! ! ! …