Super Magic Architect

First-rate idea, third-rate script.

As a newbie reader, I mostly read simplistic, light novels, so I'm only offering my personal opinion here. I initially picked up this book because of its synopsis. However, after reading it more thoroughly, I found the content to be completely different from what I expected. This book is actually a mindless, formulaic fantasy novel disguised as a specific world setting. It has absolutely nothing to do with the synopsis or the world setting.

The comments are all criticizing it 😂😂 I like reading this author's work because their titles and such are incredibly sophisticated.

The premise is good, but it's somewhat difficult to execute. The novel's background is very broad, but the writing is too perfunctory.

Yu the Great came before Lao Tzu and Confucius.

It's a good subject matter, but unfortunately it has too many flaws.

I haven't finished reading the first part, but the world-building is great and very creative. The magic and bloodlines are also pretty good. However, in a university that has been passed down for so many years, there isn't a single person who can appreciate its value. Most of the students are just jealous people, and there's that Professor Yu or something. All the other professors are idiots. Okay, the author's writing skills may not be quite there yet, but the idea is really good. Keep it up!

I couldn't continue watching. Whenever he encountered a problem, he'd say, "Come on, I'll make a weapon." It was so fake. Other characters racked their brains to make weapons, but the protagonist did it like it was nothing, making weapons whenever he had a spare moment.

It was really frustrating to watch. It was full of self-righteous and satisfying moments. Someone slaps the protagonist on the left cheek, and then the protagonist turns the other cheek. The so-called counterattack was also bland and uninspired. The plot was terrible, the character descriptions were terrible, and the first-rate ideas and settings were paired with such terrible content.

This is a satirical, face-slapping story. Overall, the concept is novel, but the story is somewhat thin, focusing only on the protagonist's story without considering changes in the environment. The ending is not very rich, but the writing is solid, the story is expressive and captivating, making it a good book that you can't put down during a reading slump.