The Primordial Martial Sect

I discovered something amazing For those supporting characters and villains in the novel, as long as they are bullied, their families will definitely stand up for them, even if they are trash. And what about the protagonist? When the protagonist is bullied, the family will remain indifferent, even if it is the son of the head of the family, they will even step on him in return. However, the magical thing is that the protagonist's family will definitely grow, but the villain's family will definitely be exterminated. I just want to ask what is going on? Totally unscientific.

Do you really want to scold people for their messy fighting prowess, killing people at higher levels from time to time, often showing strength beyond levels, but often describing how hard it is to fight with people of the same level, and being severely injured by two people of the same level? Being frightened by a high-level murderer and running away? The Sun Sacred Body is awesome, the Taiyin Sacred Body is very powerful, and then the main character Taiyin and Sun are combined. Each upgrade is the limit of a strong foundation, and it is very difficult to upgrade! It's really rubbish to not be able to reach the same level in seconds like this!

I feel like I'm not good enough for her at all. In the next four years, I never had the chance to see her again. I heard that she was already working. What I was more concerned about was whether she was a wife and a mother. My career is gradually getting on the right track, and I can be considered a moderately successful writer. My novels were quite impressive at the beginning, so I am no longer embarrassed by money. When I saw her again, it was in Dongguan, in a dim room, just the two of us, and we were silent for a long time. She spoke: Eight hundred. Seeing that you are an acquaintance, I will accept five hundred from you. I tried my best not to tremble. I said: Come with me. Her eyes were dull for a moment, then flickered, and then she said like a fire extinguished: I'm not worthy of you, I'm just a lady, I have guests, nothing happens, I'll leave first. She left in a hurry. Later, I saw her on TV. She was being escorted by two policemen, with a look of horror and distress on her face. The last time I saw her, she came to see me. She was on the roof of the building, and I looked up at her from downstairs. I just looked at her like this for a long time, and then she left without leaving a word. The next news about her was a year later, when her mother called me, saying that she was ill and could not be treated, and that she wanted to see me one last time. I can't accept it and it's very depressing. When I arrived at the hospital, I looked at her pale face in front of her bed, looking much thinner than before. I smiled at her, I don't know how ugly that smile was, and she smiled at me as innocently as she did when she was seven years old. She raised her hand, and I hurried over to hold her hand. The tears couldn't help but fall down. She opened her mouth and said in very soft words: You know... You know... I burst into tears at this time, and immediately continued: I know, I know your heart, and my heart has never changed. I will not dislike you. We... She suddenly shook her head in excitement, interrupted me, and said in her weak voice: No... I want to... Ask you... Click on your avatar... And click on the author's homepage... Really... Can... I quickly said: You can... Really can read my book. I'm not lying to you. If you don't believe me, try it...

This book is really childish. It was okay in the early stages, but becomes more childish as it goes on.

The poison is just poisonous, just ignore it. After all, I still like the setting of the exercises and so on. I have always been worried about the pure yang exercises until I saw half of them. It is Tiandu MD again. If you are pure yang, you can write pure yang. After half of the pure yang, you can write about the yin and yang exercises. I think it was good and it poisoned me in an instant. I hate this kind of writing about the dual cultivation of yin and yang, and the feeling of the five elements being together. I feel like the writing is not lofty and cannot express the invincibility of the protagonist. Of course, I am not targeting the author, but I am tired after reading too many of these routines. Single-attribute training is good and it is also enjoyable to read. Many books, like this one, always forcefully insert the plot into the plot to require practitioners with multiple attributes to be awesome, and then write a lot of theories to find a balance with so-called geniuses. Half of the book is boring like this! ! ! ! ! ! !

The author writes very well. Come on! Only after I started writing a book did I realize how difficult it is to write a book! Routines are said to be routines, and being able to use them is already a big challenge. Thinking about how long online writing has been developed, no matter how you write, you will unknowingly fall into a routine. Finally, the author has a really strong mentality. I hope to become famous all the way through this!

It's okay in the early stage. In the later stage, he completely turned into a licking dog, a brainless virgin, licking him to death.

Mentally retarded and illogical

The character has a low IQ and too many poisonous points, making it unbearable to watch.

It's a novel about a counterattack by a loser, and it's also a counterattack by a sect disciple and a family disciple. This is a poorly written plot.