The Study Master in Naruto

I couldn't even finish the free chapters of this book. People say that fanfiction needs to be original, innovative, and have its own style. But fanfiction is fanfiction; originality is built on a story with a fixed worldview. It's not about adding every element you can. That only pulls the reader out of the story and serves no other purpose. First of all, the character setting is terrible.

I hope the author doesn't create a harem story; a single female lead is fine, or even one more is acceptable. Just don't let the author, like those harem stories, have the protagonist constantly philandering.

They take their own protagonist too seriously. The fact that a descendant of a Chunin receives so much attention is utterly disgusting.

Seeing the Raikage ninjas kidnap the protagonist made me want to quit. Anyone with a brain wouldn't kidnap someone in Konoha, would they? Wouldn't it be better to just assassinate him? What's the point of kidnapping him? Kidnapping Hinata would get you the Byakugan, but what good would kidnapping the protagonist do for the Raikage?

Upon reaching chapter twenty-four, I was caught off guard by the author's unexpected and jarring commentary on rural non-mainstream culture. The protagonist has already started practicing swordsmanship, specifically a double-edged sword that emphasizes agility and dexterity. Is this a crossover? Is this Naruto? Shouldn't you teach me how to condense chakra into a weapon? Shit.

Keep it up! I just started watching, and it's already pretty good.

I haven't watched much, so I'll just give a brief overview: The protagonist observes someone practicing swordsmanship and comprehends the essence of swordsmanship. The swordsman is named Miyamoto Musashi, and he uses a traditional Chinese sword. And just like that, I couldn't take it anymore.

I reckon a huge number of people died from the poison, haha.

I completely missed the point of this book. The forty-odd chapters are still written by a three-year-old, with such detailed plot points in the beginning, and then he's inexplicably kidnapped. I don't understand why they didn't just kill the protagonist outright. Hyuga has a bloodline limit, so why kidnap him to create a bunch of bloodline limits? What's the protagonist's value anyway?

In Naruto, children are already precocious, but yours is overly mature. He acted so scared when he first appeared, but that same night he was befriending Yamanaka's parents and behaving so maturely—the contrast is too great! It's creating problems where none existed before. What's most unacceptable is that a four-year-old is 1.2 Meters tall, Naruto was 1.47 Meters at 12, and Sasuke was 1.5 Meters at 12. Are you expecting him to be 1.8 Meters by 12 and 2 meters by 18?