The Study Master in Naruto

I couldn't even finish the free chapters of this book. . People say that when writing fan fiction, you need to have new ideas, be innovative, and have your own style. But fandom is fandom, and new ideas are based on this story whose world view has been fixed. Not all elements are added to it. That only serves to entertain the reader and does nothing else. The first is the identity setting, just a hotel employee. I have to find out some background of Chinese martial arts. Wouldn't it be better to just write it as a time-traveling journey by a martial arts master? I have been studying for several years and am still self-taught. I am really confident that I have learned real skills. The martial arts fighting and training methods are all separated. No matter how well you practice, you will be knocked down with one brick. You can't fight even if you practice for 100 years. Is the so-called true message a lie? If you don't teach you how to play by your true disciples, who will be responsible for killing people? If you have a golden finger, study honestly. After all, the title of the book is not xxx kokushu Naruto vertical and horizontal. Nor is it xxx The Rise of the Sword Master from Another World. Since we are talking about learning from a master, and since we have specifically chosen Naruto, we should write a classic that incorporates Naruto's power system. Brainstorming and alien system invasion are two different things. Originally, there was no problem in not having too much contact with the protagonist and the famous characters, but he got the mountain clan, but then he made a big deal about the mysterious power of death, which simply lowered the status of Goldfinger, especially when Goldfinger is not the kind of bombshell. I don't understand why you write these kinds of comics if you don't write them. Writing a cheat can only teach you whether you can transcend the world and pursue those so-called mysteries. Especially an adult! At least the soul and personality are adult. The thinking is mature. Even if he couldn't pretend to be tender for a long time, he just pretended to be stupid. When he saw Uchiha Itachi, he was so excited that he almost knelt down and licked him. . After finally getting out of the village, it should mean that I have learned a lot and found someone to practice with. But another inexplicable organization showed up. It's all based on the author's own compilation skills and has no sense of substitution. I started adding some incomprehensible settings again. By this point, I have lost the desire to continue reading. . . Maybe it will be better later. But it's easy to put readers off in the early stage, and it's of no use no matter how good the writing is later.

I hope the author doesn't open a harem, just have a single female protagonist, or maybe one more, and don't just mess around with women like those who open a harem.

He takes the protagonist he wrote too seriously. It's just disgusting that a descendant of a chuunin would receive so much attention.

When I saw the Raikage Village ninja kidnapping the protagonist, I couldn't go on. Normally anyone with any sense wouldn't kidnap him in Konoha. Wouldn't it be nice to just assassinate him? What's the use of kidnapping him back? Kidnapping Hinata can get you a white eye. What's the benefit of kidnapping the protagonist to Raikage Village?

After reading Chapter 24, a group of rural non-mainstream people were slapped in the face by the author, and they were caught off guard. The protagonist has already begun to practice swordsmanship, and he still pays attention to the light and agile double-edged sword. . . . Aren't you going to join us? Is this Naruto? ? ? Shouldn't I ask how to condense chakra on a weapon? Shet. .

Come on, I just started watching it, it's very good

I haven't watched much, so let me briefly explain: The protagonist sees others practicing swordsmanship and understands the meaning of the sword. The sword practitioner is called Miyamoto Musashi, and he uses traditional Chinese swords. That's it, I can't stand it anymore

I guess there are a lot of people who are confused, haha. Died by poison.

This book didn't hit the mark at all. The plot is so detailed in the forty chapters, but a 3-year-old kid was kidnapped inexplicably. I didn't understand it if I didn't kill the protagonist directly. Hinata has blood inheritance limits, so she kidnapped her back to have a bunch of blood inheritance limits. The protagonist has no value.

The children in Naruto are already precocious, but you are already mature. When I first appeared on the show, I saw Yamanaka Kaiichi acting so scared, and the same night I got to know the parents of others, and he acted so mature. The most unacceptable thing is that a four-year-old child is 1.2 Meters tall. Naruto is 1.47 Meters tall when he is 12 years old. Sasuke is 1.5 Meters tall when he is 12 years old. Do you want him to grow to 1.8 Meters when he is 12 years old?