There's a Bug in My Body

I really like the author's online games (can you tell me about the amazing website???), There are a lot of jokes~🤭🤭🤭

The game is so advanced, there is no video recording, event recording or anything like that?

I abandoned the book after more than 200 chapters. This is my first time to write a review. I wrote a good online game article like a stallion. Can't I live without women? Isn't one woman enough? Is it interesting that so many chapters have been deleted?

This book was a masterpiece back then, a real masterpiece. I used to read it every day, and those people who commented that this or that didn't work have been there for so many years. Do they need to criticize it? Why don't you watch those masterpieces handed down from ancient times to the present? I just want to lament that Internet trolls are everywhere. It can be said that in reality, I am submissive, but on the Internet, I attack hard.

I have just read dozens of chapters, and there are so many typos that it's hard to read without seeing the lines at a glance. In terms of plot, how should I put it? It's basically a fun journey. The content is quite watery, and many things fall apart if they are even slightly realistic. It often seems like dozens of chapters have been missed. For example, at the end of the Evolution Island plot, a bunch of bosses suddenly come out to torture the players to the point of death. Did they eat the whole process? The Heaven-defying Hero Slime, which I created after so many chapters, feels useless. I used it for just one game and then left it at home to eat dust (I just saw Food World). Well, it's Long Aotian's routine, but judging from the current content, Pig's Knuckle will not have a girlfriend. Even if he wants it later, it may be an NPC. Just read this book to have a good time. Pay attention to the party, be serious about the party, old bookworms, and don't join the actual party. It will kill you every minute. The game content in it is extremely imprecise, and there are many loopholes. I don't know if the author will continue to read books in the future. Alas, it was originally written for slimes, but the results were not satisfactory.

First of all, let's talk about the advantages. As an online novel, an online game type novel, it has a unique setting and story, which makes the early stage of the novel sufficiently attractive to readers with related preferences, and the early stage is indeed very good. However... The novel began to decline seriously in the middle period. Some of the loopholes in the previous article accumulated and exploded directly. I analyzed it. First, the writing is not good. Writing requires literary background and cultural connotation. If you can tell the plot in detail, concretely and fluently and describe the story wonderfully, it is a good work. If you can incorporate your own unique characteristics into the work, that is, put your personal mark on it, it will be a superior work. However, this work does not meet this requirement or is even far from it. For some people with literary mysophobia, the viewing experience is even more uncomfortable. Second, logical loopholes, simply speaking, are unreasonable. In this case, you can only lower your IQ to keep up with the rhythm of this book, which makes it uncomfortable to read. Third, the plot is deliberate. Some plot arrangements are too deliberate, giving people a stiff feeling, making the whole text more unfluent, and also lowering your IQ. The viewing experience is extremely uncomfortable. This is the main reason why I abandoned the article. Fourth, I don't like the literary design. The story is too routine and deliberately rigid. There is a huge gap between various settings. The full text cannot be penetrated, and it becomes more obvious as it goes on. This directly leads to the failure of this book. …

Seeing this, I am sure that I am trying to bring Stana back to China.

Seeing so many people talking about stallions, I felt relieved and started watching🤤

I would rank this book T1 among online game novels in the past two years, but it's not too much. I painted it for the third time in 5 days, and it looks really good! It's a pity that the author has changed his career and no longer writes about online games. . .

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the writing style is too colloquial, the subject matter is very good, but the writing style is flawed, and the self-exciting points that pop up from time to time are difficult to get, and they slip by.