The World of the Brave

Although I want to say that a ten-year-old child, even if he has practiced martial arts, cannot beat a standard adult. The resistance to blows and strength are not at a standard level. Even if the age difference is about three years, there is still a chance that he can fight. The eight-year gap does not exist at all, unless the adult's body is hollow~ and then he is mentally retarded, or his limbs are close to scrapping, and it is possible if he is extremely weak and can't concentrate at all. But this is a novel, and the setting should be in a dimension like One Piece. In reality, it's impossible.

The character of this book is a brave man without brains! ! !

The more I look at it, the more I think it looks a lot like Thriller Park, but it's also quite nice.

It is estimated that the finished book will have 1.5 Million words, and the current length is 2.3 Million words. Convinced, you kept your man's promise

There are very few book reviews, and I have read more than 40 chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore Imitate Thriller Paradise, and force others to think that I am unique. It is completely different from Thriller Paradise. My book is much more reasonable, and it's okay. Metaphorical criticism of Thriller Paradise I want the protagonist to show a high IQ, and I also want to write the protagonist to be normal and close to life. Regardless of simple and complex puzzles, I have to write about a lot of psychological activities. If the writing is reasonable, it is acceptable. Don't you think it's embarrassing? None of the supporting characters and protagonists have a specific image, making it look like there is a lot of foreshadowing behind it, but in fact there is nothing It rigidly writes some normal definitions of events and characters, and then contradicts itself.

This book is really funny. It feels like the author's self-pleasure book. Although the writing style is not trivial and the plot is not vulgar, there are many genuine complaints. First, the protagonist has gone through several detective reasoning dungeons and completed them well. Because I am a mystery fan, I like this type of dungeons very much. But one thing is that the protagonist has solved several cases, which shows that the protagonist has good logical thinking ability, reasoning ability and observation ability. This It is a sign of high IQ, but the author just made the protagonist a math idiot, an idiot who can't even distinguish between 24 and 26 letters in English. What is needed to learn this aspect, especially mathematics, is logical thinking ability. You have good logical thinking ability, but why are you so bad at math? Also, the protagonist is completely powerless against mazes, worse than ordinary people. Mazes also require this kind of observation and reasoning ability, right? The protagonists in general novels are usually not perfect characters. It is normal to have high IQ and low EQ. However, you split the high IQ into two halves and it is completely contradictory. I don't understand it. Is it just to match the protagonist's secondary disease and increase the amusing factor of the protagonist? Secondly, we can find from the article that it is best to farm wild monsters without thinking when upgrading. Good equipment is more suitable for farming dungeons. In general fantasy novels, the protagonist goes through all kinds of difficulties and obstacles that are difficult for ordinary people to experience outside, and eats rare treasures of heaven and earth, which are rare in thousands of years, so that he can level up at a speed far faster than others. When I look back, in order to let the supporting characters catch up with the progress of the protagonist, the author, such as the heroine's friends and brothers who have not seen him for a long time, can barely keep up with the protagonist's leveling up by staying at home. This kind of unreasonableness can be ignored, and it is harmless. However, the protagonist is playing games at home all day long when he is not doing business, but the level upgrade is very slow. At first, it was said that players in big guilds have secrets to level up, and they are almost thirty years old. I thought about it and let it go. Now I see that the level is 25, and the equipment is not bad. But the supporting character Brave Invincible is also a solo player, and he seems to be still a student? The students should at least take some classes and work part-time if necessary. The other party is already level 32 and may have better equipment than the protagonist. This is very funny. This brave and invincible hero is the protagonist, right? The protagonist needs to fight desperately to catch up, but can't catch up with others' progress? Third, the protagonist participated in this PVP competition. At the beginning, he said that the top 100 people in combat power would be assigned one person to each group. After the game, he said that all the players he met were the top 100 players in combat power. However, he immediately slapped himself in the face and said that half of the top 100 players went to the team competition instead of the single player competition. Then the PVP match was not like a PVP match. There were almost no normal one-on-one arena matches in the schedule, and there was no melee. There was also a melee in the finals, and NPCs were allowed to infiltrate and let the protagonist fish in troubled waters. In order to increase the difficulty for the protagonist, other novel authors will temporarily strengthen the villain's opponent, giving them a BUFF or something, so that the protagonist cannot win too easily. This book does the opposite, giving various DEBUFFs to the supporting characters, weakening the supporting characters, and not giving a fair 1VS1 chance, because without weakening, the protagonist cannot beat him.

Congratulations to the author Jun for his new book recommendation. You are different from those Bichi who were newly recommended in Chapter 8~

Am I ignorant? Which online game has so many puzzle copies? A real world + virtual online game world + multiple dimensions. Are you sure readers will accept it? If you want to write an infinite flow, just remove one of the three worldviews. What role does your real world play? The main line hasn't moved much, but a lot of branch lines have been cleared. Also full of special codes to solve puzzles. Is this a detective novel or an online game? Various inexplicable settings. Forced jumps in and out. To make a little progress in the "main world", you will definitely have to clear a few puzzle dungeons. If I have the skills, how about I just go for one online game + two puzzle books? I kind of know where your 300,000-word outline came from. And how big can it be in the main world? How many NPCs can be killed by players? What kind of uniqueness is there? I've killed them all for you. Can you make another batch? If the missions are all unique, there will be millions of players in the public beta. How to complete them? This cannot be solved by passing the blame to intelligent AI. I don't know why you threw yourself into the street after you tried to persuade me several times. I'm convinced.

This book has a shortcoming. The narration describes the protagonist too deliberately, such as the word troublemaker! I feel disgusted after seeing it too many times!

The Book of Shields, the Book of Salamander's Seal, the Burning Golden Bead, the Slate of the Wise, and the Book of Baal's Clay Tablets, these all came from Danterian's bookshelf.