In Tokyo, I Have a Wish-Granting Machine

The title of this book is very likely to mislead readers. A wishing machine is supposed to allow you to make any wish you want. But what you actually did in Tokyo was help others fulfill their wishes and then participate in a lottery. How about changing the title to "Living in Tokyo, Helping People Who Aren't Making a Mess Fulfill Their Wishes" 😰

It's well written, don't write anymore.

The beginning was alright; some plot points were illogical but didn't affect the overall main storyline. However, the part about the arrival of the evil god really got off the charts, completely deviating from the main plot. The storyline that had unfolded earlier suddenly became meaningless. Moreover, the timeline instantly shifted from a low-to-medium magic modern society to a high-magic creature, the arrival of an evil god, which completely disrupted the main storyline.

What kind of plot is this? I've read so many novels and this is the first time I've seen a plot that's so addictive. One minute it's slice-of-life, the next it's mysterious, and now it's explaining the rules of mystery. Are you playing a game with me? This mix of slice-of-life and mystery is really addictive.

Well, the book itself has a decent premise and writing style, but the problems are twofold: first, the blatant suppression of the protagonist's power; and second, the inexplicable inclusion of the evil god plot. If you're going to introduce such advanced power, why suppress the protagonist's power in the first place? The problems are so bad that I couldn't continue reading after jumping to this point.

I've read up to chapter 26. It's just everyday life, with no connection to the plot at all. The plot is about revenge, but the content is about finding a job and living. The wishing machine's purpose is just to give you skills so you can show off in your daily life.

What was wrong with you to write this plot? Did you release it just so you could have some explicit content? Did you sell your account?

With this cult element introduced, it feels like there's no point in watching anything further. Because the preceding events and the protagonist's subsequent efforts are meaningless. Without some author intervention and divine intervention, the plot has already gone completely off the rails. The main character will no longer have any screen time. Writing about everyday life is meaningless.

This "evil god descends" thing is really toxic. If an evil god has descended, what's left to watch in everyday life?

I occasionally browse through the blogs of these veteran authors, and I was surprised to find they've written something again, though it's not for online games anymore.