A Certain Scientific Naruto

The author said that the protagonist doesn't understand Naruto, he only knows a little bit about it, but now I see that he knows more than a little or two, even which techniques are for whose exclusive use. Are you sure you're setting this up so that the protagonist doesn't understand Naruto? Is it because you want to skip the plot and say that the protagonist doesn't understand Naruto?

1. One thing that may not have been noticed by anyone is that although the author often crosses the fourth wall and grabs us to complain, he rarely introduces the author's views on Naruto in the article, and I often see this in other fan fiction. The author introduces his views on the original work in the text, which actually leads to a seemingly irrelevant result, that is, the image of the protagonist disappears: It should have been a good place to elaborate on the protagonist's psychology, but it was taken away by the author. The author becomes the protagonist instead of the protagonist, or in other words, it is as if the protagonist is just an NPC and the author (or the reader) is manipulating him. And I feel that the author attaches great importance to describing the protagonist's image, and often tells us about the protagonist's setting at the end of the article, hahaha. Perhaps the lack of an image of the protagonist makes it easier for people to assume him? But I prefer full and vivid people rather than NPCs. 2. The foreshadowing that spans hundreds of chapters is definitely not what some book friends think. It is pretentious and illogical. On the contrary, the foreshadowing revealed in the next chapter is just a foreshadowing. What kind of foreshadowing is it? 😏 Such foreshadowing just shows that the author has a complete outline before writing the book and has a clear understanding of what he wants to write. I believe that book friends have read some articles that become more and more outrageous as they are written later... Many of these articles have broken outlines. The authors are either not prepared, or they adapt to the comments and change the outlines randomly. 3. Detailed description! For example, after Hagoromo was injured, he tried to sit up twice, Deidara's tone of voice, and so on. The details are in place and very reasonable. The details are in place, and the character image comes out. ( There is no line change, hand movement, division ) Of course many off-the-wall descriptions can be understood as the author's intrusion, but this book gives me the feeling more like, this is what Hagoromo is thinking. This is how Hagoromo, as an outsider, has never been able to integrate his thinking into the world of ninjas. That's why Kushina, as his only person who can be called a relative, is extremely precious. She is his only place to stay in this world. He and Kushina are actually in a relationship rather than lovers, and she is his only support. After Kushina's death, only the "extra" future can give him the feeling of actually living in a real world. Complain, even if no one listens. Make jokes, even if no one understands. I have always felt that this is where the loneliness and pain of time-travelers lies, that is, the sense of fragmentation of reality and the accompanying loneliness of being unable to integrate, rather than the superficiality of lying on the ground and crying bitterly (naming and criticizing someone). Very few authors can write about a feeling that I can relate to. Many authors also write about a sense of fragmentation, but it gives me the feeling that they are added to the article on the spur of the moment, rather than having such a smooth feeling throughout the entire text. And can a time-traveler who lacks this feeling be called a time-traveler? Delete the first chapter of Fighting X. Who else remembers that Xiao X is a time traveler? (ಡωಡ) The world of Naruto is inherently repressive... A small number of violent elements (referring to ninjas) with strong personal power actually make society more repressive... And the blood theory added by AB to fill holes or dig holes makes it even more oppressive... I really like Naruto fanfics that can write this kind of feeling. As for the joyful and refreshing article, in fact, for me, there are 20 chapters in the whole book and I feel that the author has written too much ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

I stopped reading this book after reading more than 100 chapters. I can't understand the strength and shape of the characters. How can I put it? I don't understand why the author wrote this book.

It's not scientific at all. It's all about fighting

There was too much nonsense. I gave up the book after reading chapter seventy-nine, and mostly skipped through it.

"Fake Extra: His Heart Died on the Night of the Nine-Tails Uprising" Konoha's Shiroyasha died and died. After all, almost no one could defeat him in a head-on duel, and later on, he rarely left Konoha. The funeral was small, with only a few people. Along with the burial was a scroll made in the future. It was raining that day, and the leaves were rustling in the rain. The funeral was cremation at Hagoromo's request. Inside and outside the flames, Hagoromo's face was smiling, while Mirai's tears never stopped mixing in the rain. No one has said anything about Qing Uzumaki Mirai's feelings for Shiro Yaksha. Her younger brother, the Sixth Hokage, didn't know either. He only had a vague feeling that his sister might like her, but it wasn't a master-disciple relationship. Mirai really liked Hagoromo, but Hagoromo never responded. After Yuyi's death, Mirai aged quickly. It took her one month to complete the twenty years of her peers. One month after Yuyi's funeral, her dazzling long red hair could only be spread out on the pillow. "Do you like him that much?" Naruto looked at the woman he had called his sister all his life. In the past, she would have screamed in embarrassment and rushed over to beat him. He was used to it. Mirai wasn't looking at him, she was looking at a slug on her shoulder trying to keep her alive. "Do you know?" Her voice was still crisp, but weak. "I stayed with him for several years in Shigulin, from a baby to a mature man. There were only two of us in that place." She turned to look at Naruto with gentle eyes. "That place was boring. He and I were the only ones alone, so I forced him to tell me stories. He told me some nonsense. He didn't understand girls at all." "Then..." Naruto was about to speak, but Mirai stretched out his hand to stop him. "Listen to me, I can only tell you these words." Mirai narrowed his eyes, "But after I came out, I gradually started to want to go back to the past. No matter how bad that place was, it was still a world between him and me. He only had hatred and me in his eyes, and he would not think about other things." Naruto sighed. This sister who forced him to call her sister all his life was really poisoned. "I know, I know," Laiwai tilted her head and looked out the window. The Shiggy Bone Forest was filled with mist. When she was a child, she had hardly seen the moon, but now she suddenly wanted to return to the Shiggy Bone Forest. "Of course I can tell. Who does he see in his eyes every time he looks at me? She is my cheap old lady!" "But what does my liking for Yuyi have to do with her? She just arrived a little early, so how could she come at me head-on! What's so proud about taking advantage of this?" Mirai cried, her low sobs full of grievances. When she was young, Hagoromo would always appear every time she cried. Later, when she grew up, when she cried, it was indeed some other inexplicable guy who appeared. Hagoromo or others wanted to find her a husband, but she only liked him. Mirai cried for a long time, and within a few days, the long hair as red as fire disappeared from Konoha. After Naruto finished presiding over the funeral, he couldn't help but think of Mirai's last words again. In this life, she came earlier than me, so Yuyi's heart died with her that night. In the next life, I will definitely come earlier than her.

Author, can you write about his skills in Chinese? You always write in English. Have you considered the feelings of us 'patriotic youths'? I don't understand it at all 😭

The protagonist has NB abilities, possesses all the abilities of Gun Sister, and knows the general plot of Naruto. The protagonist has gained a great reputation on the battlefield. So, as of Chapter 155, has the protagonist done anything that affects the plot of the original novel? 1. Process: The protagonist participated in three battles against the Sand Ninja, severely injuring Ichibi Ending: The Sand Ninja recovered the Ichibi, and Konoha won as in the original plot. Well, the protagonist is still young at this time, so it is enough to be handsome. 2. Process: The protagonist investigates the Land of Rain, meets Nagato, and fights against the Scorpion of the Red Sand Ending: restrains the Scorpion of the Red Sand, or lets the Scorpion escape, and passes the information that the Scorpion killed the Kazekage to Konoha (how useful is it to the plot??) 3. Process: Participates in the peace talks with Hanzo of the Land of Rain, Hanzo proposes to cooperate with Danzo, and helps kill Nagato and the others Ending: Has no impact on the plot... 4. Process: Participated in the battle to recapture the Byakugan of the Hyuga clan, fought against the Four-Tailed Murasaki, fought against Terumi Mei, Zabuza, and the future three-generation Mizukage Yagura Ending: The Byakugan was not taken back, only a small character was killed, which had no impact on the plot, and no changes. He could have killed Yagura, but failed for a strange reason. 5. Process: Sneak into the Iwa Ninja troops, give the Third Raikage the final blow, and kill Loess? Being chased by the Tsuchikage and luckily escaping with injuries Ending: The process is very cool, but without the protagonist, wouldn't the Third Raikage still die together with a large number of Iwa ninjas? The protagonist kills the Raikage and incurs the hatred of the Kumo ninja, so that the feud between the Iwa ninja and the Kumo ninja moves to Konoha? Summary: The protagonist is very powerful, very capable and handsome, participated in many key missions, and has an impact on the plot of the three battles: 0.

Saw the last conversation between Kushina and Hagoromo. I still cry

I wrote it in a mess, I don't understand it, I don't recommend it.

Compared to others, the feelings between the characters in Red Leaves are always delicate and sincere. Qidian often sees that when the protagonist sings, the heroine's favorability goes up; when the protagonist steps forward, the heroine's favorability goes up; when the protagonist is gentle and considerate, the heroine's favorability goes up... When the favorability goes up, new modes of getting along are unlocked, and then there are postures. Here in Hongye, it often feels like an inverted situation: from the first time we met, the relationship gradually became so deep that it was natural, and there was not much writing, just like the warmth of family. However, these are troubled times. In order to protect this bond, I traveled across the battlefield and became famous as Shiro Yaksha; Have you ever thought about how to become invincible in the world of ninja? It's just to make up for the mistake, to maybe save someone in time, to burn yourself - but it's still not enough, then keep burning until it's gone. The precocious boy is almost childish and innocent at this moment. Kushina, who was about to become a mother, showed deep tenderness and comfort. Facing her smile, the bloody boy restrained all his anger and started talking and laughing as usual, but this was the last time.

Although it has been finished for a long time, I still want to say something. The first time I read this book, I remember it was before the Qidian fan incident. After that, I saw the death of the fourth generation couple and abandoned the book. Recently, I accidentally saw this book. After seeing the death of the fourth generation couple, I realized that this was the one I had seen before. For this book. . I just want to say. . The male protagonist doesn't take the fourth-generation couple seriously at all. . He talks about fighting to the death with Payne and sealing the four elephants. . But for the sake of raising a future for himself and other plots, he forcibly killed four generations of couples. Is it unthinkable that Payne would come? Opposite are enemies with the Time and Space Ninjutsu Hakukaku and the Mangekyo Rinnegan Eye. Will you die if you sneak Jiraiya and Tsunade back? Will you die if you open up part of your brain to the third generation to make them believe in you and protect your only master and relatives? Since you are willing to fight to the death for Jiuna, are you still afraid of exposing your own methods and memories? I'm really angry. . . It's self-evident that Junai's status in the heart of the protagonist is obvious, but the author still chooses to eliminate Junai for plot cannon fodder, which is really annoying. . . Never mind. . . Vent your emotions

The author's self-pleasure is written everywhere, making it extremely confusing to read. Forget it 88

After wandering around the Qidian library for a long time, I found this book again. This fanfic is really impressive. There are quite a few problems with this book, whether it's the development of abilities or the plot, as some people say the protagonist has no impact on the plot of the Three Wars. But I still recommend future book friends to read it. The author of this book has a good grasp of the psychology of a lonely person. Especially the emotion towards Kushina and Mirai is the deepest among all the fics I have ever read. You can often see people giving out sugar and haircuts in online articles, but old readers will always feel a sense of emptiness after reading too much: in the face of the complex emotions between people, words are always pale and powerless. To put it harshly, fan authors should not only be interested in making money and describe emotions in a routine, third-rate authors write about crises to stop the knife, second-rate authors use third-party narration to force tears, and first-rate authors write about daily life, focusing on embodying emotions in details. Really, after reading online articles for so many years, I know more routines than the author. I can hear the author's abacus ring through the network cable. Very few authors can properly handle the psychology and emotions of a character who is different from a person living in normal society. I don't know how many of my friends who are reading this fan have read The Game of Life and Sora no Kyoukai, but I think book friends who like the characters of loners and travelers can give it a try.

Lack of identification with the protagonist. The protagonist is the kind of person who thinks he is aloof from the world and "indifferent" to the people who have given him help and warmth. It seems that the protagonist has done a lot of things, but in fact, none of them has changed the people around him. Death and injury are the kind of injuries that are obvious that you are friends and relatives. I know that you are going to die, that you are going to be plotted to death, that you are going to be killed. I comfort myself over there, "I can I'm not strong enough to change these." And then that's it. There are too many narrations and explanations. Maybe one move is made in one chapter of the battle. Since you choose to read the fanfic, nine out of ten of them will naturally have some understanding of the original work. However, the author just introduces the key points through the narration. Sometimes the protagonist in the author's book does not know it. After all, the author arranges the protagonist because he does not know much about the plot of Naruto. There are also some jokes Maybe I'm relatively reticent and can't get the cold jokes or anything like that.

I couldn't understand the station between Ai and Yatsuo from the beginning. The male protagonist forced his wits to stay. He could kill Ai but didn't. He could have taken down his defense without being seriously injured, and then prepared a backup plan from the beginning. Then Shinkuna still died, and he was speechless. He said that he remembered the general plot, and then nothing changed.

What I wrote before is okay. But after reading a little more and reviewing the comments, I found that there is no difference between having a protagonist and not having one. Getting stronger won't change anything, and if you force the plot to kill, it's better to re-read the original work. . . . . Originally, I read time travel stories just to see if I could make up for my regrets, but I still tried hard when I couldn't change anything. It was a waste of effort. .

After the Kyuubi incident, the story falls apart a bit. The protagonist's thoughts should not develop like this (I think)

The twelve-year-old student is more powerful than his teacher, Uzumaki Shinkuna. The adult Uzumaki Shinkuna, a Uzumaki tribesman with countless sealing techniques, a Nine-Tails Jinchuuriki, can't do anything to one of the One-Tails. Let you, a student who has only graduated for a year and studied with the master for a year, deal with it. Do you think Uzumaki Shinkuna is disabled? If this is the case, what use does Konoha need such a jinchūriki? I wonder if Uzumaki Shinkuna is dead, even if she is a sealed soul, as long as she is still there, does the level of Kyuubi have to lie down? Is it a bit too much for you to weaken Shinkuna Uzumaki like this and let you, a little brat who is going to the battlefield for the first time, show off?

It was okay at the beginning, the setting was good, but after reading it, I felt that the main character was ruined. I only read Chapter 270. I want to write a review. My personal opinion is that the ability is too focused on electric shock. Although I learned a lot about sealing techniques, I basically only used the Four Symbols Seal, Bagua Seal, and the Twelve Hexagrams at the end. I have a small amount of chakra, and I only know thunder, fire, and water. , The Five Elements Seal that Uzumaki Kushina gave him for his birthday was of no use at all. He kept using the electromagnetic gun to attack. After destroying it, he felt like he was just an ordinary jounin. Also, he was set to have a super strong brain and learned things quickly. When he first read the book of seals, he said he was very interested in the Flying Thunder God. After hundreds of chapters, there was no movement. The author The villain is too advanced. Pain Obito is very powerful, but look at what time, not long after Hanzo died, you Nagato Rokudo came out, and you still have more chakra, all these are the six gods. Did Yahiko die in vain? Obito's ability is abnormal, but you have arranged so many seals, it is of no use at all. When you come back, there will be no scum left after your home was stolen. , Too much emphasis on the cause and effect of Naruto, and there are some minor problems. Slugs also have the ability to heal. If you have a disabled hand for several years, you will not be able to cure it. Life is inconvenient, the action efficiency is low, and it is illogical. I feel that many of the abilities set by the character are not effective. The only ninjutsu used is Thunder Release, which is not used much anymore. It is directly an electric shock user, and the physical skills are average. No skills with the sword at all.

To be honest, this book is not that bad. On the contrary, the language of this book is still very cheerful. Maybe some people can't accept it, or maybe the word science will be targeted by trolls. There is everyone on the Internet, and many people do it just for the sake of trolling. At least I've read dozens of chapters and it's not poisonous.

How did this 10,000-book score come about? ? ? ?

Starting from the Nine-Tails Rebellion, it has become a literary high novel.

I just finished watching it, I think it's pretty good, it's funny, it's touching. The first time I was touched was when Matt died, and the second time was the Night of the Kyuubi, "Goodbye, Shinkuna, never see you again, Uzumaki Shinkuna" really brought tears to my eyes. Only after reading this can I understand the protagonist's feelings. He also loves Shinkuna, as a teacher, and as a sister. , Love as a lover. Once Shinkuna dies, the meaning of his existence in this world ends, and he becomes more and more casual and unreliable. His only mission is to raise the Maelstrom siblings and take revenge. Dealing with Kaguya feels like it is just incidental, leaving a clean soil for the environment he has lived in for thirty years. I hope to continue to see other works of the author.

Accurate! The biggest drawback is that it's unpleasant! The protagonist's efforts have never gone as planned, and he has been shackled by all parties, which is quite uncomfortable.

Is the male protagonist Barry Allen the greatest Flash in the world? He is the fastest and has the highest contribution, but he is always late, never catches up, and can never save the people he wants to save, right?

The protagonist has the ability to develop ninjutsu himself, so why is he copying other people's original ninjutsu to show off? I can't stand this poisonous point.

The author is too bad, just to make up for the word count. Many sentences can be explained in two sentences and he has to write four to five hundred words. This situation is not an exception. It is very common in this book, which leads to unsmooth reading and poor viewing experience. In the middle of a fight, hundreds of words of psychological description are inserted. This kind of writing is really bad for character.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Attack the Qiudao Jade with your hands? ? This hand may have disappeared in an instant. According to the official settings, if there are 7 attributes awakened, you can touch it casually. If nothing is touched, it will disappear.