A Certain Scientific Pirate

In previous One Piece fanfics, whether the protagonist is positive or negative, they cannot escape a simple dualistic world view, because the main readers of One Piece anime are high school students in Japan. The first twenty chapters of this Pirates fanfic describe the "thief" flavor among Pirates. One Piece has such an interesting world view. The sea in the Japanese manga is full of tenderness and the color of young people's passion. What can be expressed in the manga is far less detailed than the text, and it is too thin. As soon as this novel started, I felt that the sea was no longer like a boy's theater. It can give the characters a three-dimensional sense. One Piece cannot be drawn as a manga, and it does not meet the reader's positioning. But a cruel pirate world is what I think One Piece should be like.

The detailed writing skills, character strength and plot rationality are much better than those of Shadow Stream, which is quite impressive.

I hope the author will not follow the original plot. It is better to deviate greatly from the original plot. The plot takes place after the war on the top. This setting is good, but the plot is a bit bland. Probably the protagonist wants to do A. It is best not to directly write about how this incident affects the protagonist so the protagonist does it. Instead, the protagonist encounters an unexpected situation in event B and makes the protagonist do A. That's about it,,, By the way, you must write an outline, don't be lazy, this is very important. If the plot is messed up... It's still a peach.

It's very beautiful. Come on, author😊🤓

Aba Aba~

Although it takes a process of continuous development and hard work to unleash the full power of a Devil Fruit, after eating this indescribable "fruit", I instantly knew its most basic "efficacy" . Just like a baby's innate reflex, humans know how to suck when they are born. In other words, when I took a bite of something like shit, I also understood another thing: I can fly. And I need to restrain the urge to take off at all times. ... (Source: Chapter 2)

I haven't finished watching it yet, but I only saw the part of the Navy headquarters, and I felt that the supporting characters were too brainless. The protagonist, a new recruit who had just joined the army, defeated the major and achieved 1500 power points. He was quite admired by Lieutenant General Garp. How could such a person be questioned by the recruits at the same time about his strength? Although 1,500 power was not recognized, it was not like no one saw that blow. Why do people only talk about 300 power? The protagonist isn't too low-key anymore, and there are so many mindless supporting characters, it's really boring to watch.

Some people always think that the three most powerful generals in the navy are weak? Regardless of the past general or the current general, as well as the navy with the strength of the general, let's look at the achievements we know today. Who is the absolute deterrent for the navy to dominate the sea? They are the three most powerful generals of the navy (the marshal is basically at the headquarters, Garp is the lieutenant general and has semi-retired, and the strength of the old lady who is the chief staff officer is unknown) Do you think the strength of the three generals of the navy, who shocked the four emperors of the pirates and countless big pirates, is lower than that of the four emperors? Protect the maritime interests of the Tianlong people. Without the intimidation of the three generals, how could the Tianlong people still play so unscrupulously? The navy, which controls the four seas and the great shipping routes, and opposes the Four Emperors in the New World, does not have the position of the navy without the three generals? Even without the use of the Four Emperors, big pirates from all walks of life can crush the Navy to ashes. Whose deterrence does it rely on to protect franchised countries around the world and attack non-franchised countries? They are still the deterrent force of the three most powerful generals in the Navy. Why are Long's revolutionary army always hiding? Do you think a few vice admirals can do it? Still the deterrent power of the three generals. If the Navy's highest combat power cannot even defeat the Four Emperors, will the navy be the overlord at sea? World government, can it still be called world government? As the three most powerful generals, they basically go on a single mission in most cases, taking turns to sit at the naval headquarters to maintain deterrence in the new world. In the past, the overlord of the sea was the navy. As expected, the overlord of the sea will still be the navy in the future. The current marshal Akainu is the strongest marshal in history, and the current navy is also the strongest navy in history. Don't tell me that the navy is strong because of its large number of people and high technology. Without the deterrence of generals, the navy would not exist at all.

After I finished watching it, I felt that the protagonist was a supporting character from beginning to end, just on the edge.

Make do

Let's play Idiom Solitaire! I'll start with a wonderful pen

Most of the current pirate novels have made a serious mistake, or rather a flaw! That is the time of sea voyage. In many books, as soon as the protagonist shows up, he is rushed by various generals and then fights. What's going on? Does sea voyage take no time? Who else but Kizaru can get to a place that takes dozens of days and months to sail on the sea in just ten or dozens of minutes? If it was so easy to be blocked by naval masters, there wouldn't be so many pirates on the sea. I don't know if this book will make such a mistake!

I don't understand. As long as the protagonist tells the navy that he is a user with the Piao Piao Devil Fruit ability and wants to join the navy, the bosses of the headquarters will naturally pay attention to it. Why take such a roundabout route? If the top fruit is well developed, at least he will be a general candidate. Why hide his strength 😵

Hahaha, if you don't hurry up, I'll raise you to the limit, right? ψ(｀∇´)ψ

"Garp is the only one in One Piece whose strength does not decline with age" is a classic rumor. Oda's original words in SBS are: A reader asked "Why are there so many uncles in One Piece?" Oda replied, "I like uncles. Regardless of male or female characters, the depth of their characters will increase with age, so there are many interesting people. But in reality, the older you get, the weaker your physical strength will be. Some young people will be They look down on the elderly because of this, and refuse to respect the elderly. So, if all uncles, old ladies, grandpas, and grandmas don't get sick as they get older, I don't know how cool it would be. This is what One Piece wants to describe. One of the fantasy themes. Sooner or later, all readers of this book will grow old, and you must hope to be as strong as these people in the story. " Then the picture next to it is Doctor Dori, Garp, Rayleigh, and Whitebeard. I don't know how to tell from this that Garp is the only person whose strength does not decline with age. Isn't this nonsense? And in the comics, Garp himself said, "I really don't want to grow old, my power has become weaker recently." Rayley said, "I really want to help them, but it's a pity that time is not forgiving."​

The plug-in is credited to the account, this time the plug-in is a bit fierce. These days, cheats are becoming more and more outrageous.

Whether to write about the navy or pirates, the navy is badly written, but pirates are the best. After all, this is a world dominated by pirates.

From an entry point, the author is at the level of a master

Intellectual female doctor prpr

After reading almost a hundred chapters, I wanted to ask, does this novel have something to do with science?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, let me talk about my feelings Protagonist: Mo Fei Faction: Navy Character: Rationality Ability: Piao Piao Fruit My reading experience is that this kind of rational and utilitarian character appears in the protagonist of a hot-blooded novel. In fact, the look and feel is quite average. In the overall environment, he is hot-blooded, positive and solemn. The protagonist of Heart Place is actually quite out of place. He has no goals and no beliefs. He feels like he is just dawdling around and working hard to climb up, but the characteristics of the protagonist are not reflected. The protagonist has a certain sense of superiority and looks down on other characters, but there is no description of the ability or determination of the protagonist to match his sense of superiority. In short, it is so-so, tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it.

It's so awesome. I can't stand it anymore after 200 chapters. The more I write, the more boring I become.

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See you next time, Momiji. My favorite is the Pirate Alliance. It's a pity.

I really like the book you wrote, the author The description of the article made me feel quite emotional when I read it It was interesting, but it didn't feel vulgar to me.

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As for the new book, I hope I won't have to read it with my brain. I just want to read it for fun.

I've raised it to the end and I don't want to read the next 100 chapters.

Although I was surprised that I kept it until it was finished! But I still ordered and read all the remaining chapters! Overall, although the pace of the movie ended at a super high speed, the plot generally came to an end. Of course, it would be perfect if there was an extra chapter or a supplement about the protagonist's emotional drama at a later date~ Please take care of your body and rest well, and I look forward to the next book being more exciting!

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