One Piece Food System

I think writing fan fiction is about not changing the plot itself. This is the main story line. If the plot of your combat power has completely collapsed, what do you think about using it as a reference for combat power in our real world? The character traits in the plot are also not adhered to, just like someone who has never watched One Piece writes a pirated version of One Piece to gain popularity. In the eyes of us who have watched One Piece, you really look like someone playing basketball. I don't want to talk about you. After reading a few chapters, I just can't stand it anymore. I never knew that the author of Qidian novels could be so low.

Oda said that those who are not in the windless zone are not Neptunes, they are just ordinary sea beasts. The author also thought that Neptunes are too easy to deal with. Princess Shirahoshi can control Neptunes and is known as one of the three ancient weapons that can destroy the world. Neptunes are not that easy to deal with.

In the One Piece novels recommended in the past, the main characters were all on the pirate side. None of them wanted to read one on the navy side. Now I finally read it. Come on~

I offended the Tianlong people because of a classmate. I was about to say that the protagonist was very thoughtful, but this was the result. . . I almost fainted as I held my breath in my heart. .

There shouldn't be any plot about the Celestial Dragons from the beginning. They are a bunch of idiots and have no ability. They talk about the potential of generals and the four emperors. It's useless. It's a stupid plot.

Hello everyone, I am Shennong. With my physique, I can withstand all kinds of toxins, but I was poisoned here.

Everything else is good, except for the setting of Food Demon, which is not so good. . Taotie? It feels like the painting style is messed up. . Is Zebra's Food Demon not good enough?

Wow, what a fighter in this novel. . . . . The first picture was so addictive that I was convinced, and some people said it was a good idea!

I saw a book list and said it was a classic. I read dozens of them. The first few chapters are okay, but the later chapters are very wise. Starting from the appearance of Huang Yan, you wrote him as a small-minded person. Huang Yan and Zefa just have different ideas, but what are you doing!

Death from poison, the author groans

I was originally very interested in the subject matter, but what the hell are in Chapters 7 and 8? Is this an insult to the intelligence of our readers? Chicken soup? I think this is a bowl of moldy chicken bones.

I thought it was 5 updates a day.

By the way, One Piece has already linked up with Food Hunter, right? Although I don't remember how many episodes it was, I still have the impression of Luffy learning nail boxing, right?

Finally I know the reason why this book did not do well. The author's writing is indeed good, but it's a pity that he can't write cool articles. By the time I reached more than sixty chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. In many novels, the protagonist hiding his identity is a major exciting point, and often this exciting point can be used throughout the entire text. As another vest of the protagonist, it can do many things that the protagonist cannot do and can promote the development of the plot. However, this book is really weird. It took a lot of effort to create a vest, and it was published to the world in just a few chapters.

The article is not on topic, the author should change his name! Just call Pirates Everywhere and show off.

There doesn't seem to be much written about food!

After reading Chapter 8, I don't want to read anymore. The author's thoughts are different from mine.

I've read ten chapters and it's not that great.

It smells like the third young master of the Tang family, and is similar to the general outline of Xuantian Baolu. When I was young, I thought it was very reasonable and awesome. When I look back as an adult, I think it is just the truth that I take for granted when I sit at home. If I really use these principles to shape my outlook on life, I am afraid that I will not be as sensible as animals.

I wonder if the author has watched One Piece. Even someone like me, who doesn't know One Piece very well, knows that Drake's Fruit was eaten only when he was an undercover agent. Most of the navy, Devil Fruits have made great contributions, and Devil Fruits were obtained by chance. How can a child eat them? Do you think everyone is Luffy?

I would like to express my personal opinion. I have read more than 200 chapters and feel that there is a lot of nonsense in each chapter. Now I can't stand it anymore. And when I met Princess Weiwei later, I felt very embarrassed. Why do you use the phrase "you have heard of me"? I can't stand it anymore. It's too watery. But the overall plot is still very good. Friends who like pirates can read it. This is just my personal opinion and don't take it seriously.

To be honest, I still like the innovation and ideas in this chapter of the novel, especially the connection between the prisoner of delicious food and the Pirate King. But there is one thing, why is Kizaru written like this? Even though many things in One Piece have not been updated so early, it is not shown like this in the manga. It is really uncomfortable and feels stupid.

What's the comparison if the combat power is not on the same level at all? You are a billionaire and you set up a street stall?

To be honest, there are too few descriptions of gourmet food. In Chapter 150, only the section describing brandy lobster is gourmet food. Why are you writing about gourmet hunters?

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

Hancock Nami Robin is the heroine? 🤔🙂

Highly recommend "Live Broadcast Transformation into a Pirate Empress" I... Want to be the Pirate Queen's man!

The comments section is very violent, but actually I think the writing is okay? At least I finished reading it. I just felt that the ending was too rushed and I didn't feel like I had read enough. There were some flaws in the writing in the middle, but if I persevered, it became more interesting later on. Please, the author is not a great writer who won the Nobel Prize for Literature. How could he possibly read every Every word in the chapter will make you feel better and make you feel at ease ? There is something wrong with striving for perfection. As long as the general direction of the whole book is correct, the requirements are so high. Don't read online novels and read award-winning books. Absolutely every word is carefully selected.

It's basically a weakened version of Huahuaguo. . By the way, doesn't the author post a post to collect skills for supporting actors?

Major General Morris lowered his head and said to his child: "You see? This kind of person who can't even carry out what he says is never worthy of trust. There is no need for you to become friends with this kind of person. You should be lucky that you don't have to study under him. What is more terrifying than being the last person is a person without credibility. This kind of person never needs to hand your back to him. Always stay away from this kind of person on the battlefield."