The Immortalization Crisis

The writing style, the story structure... Isn't this the kind of novel I read in junior high school? Over the years, I've improved at writing work-related reports and dabble articles, so why hasn't my writing style improved in the online novels that veteran authors rely on for a living? This really feels like someone reposting a novel they wrote more than ten years ago online... What's going on? Even if you're really struggling, you should at least read a novel by someone in the same field...

So-so. The characters act and speak like adults, very naive, and easily emotional. Conquering another world with food—what kind of outdated writing style is this? The content is bland. Also, couldn't they have been older? Like high school students in Japanese anime, why did they have to appear at fifteen or sixteen? Ten lifetimes of being ten years old and becoming a hundred-year-old genius?

It's the same old story: older authors are basically out of touch with the times and have simply disappeared.

The first 60 chapters are masterpieces; the rest is pure white. The author's innovative ability and ability to maintain an innovative mindset only lasted for about 60 chapters. All that nonsense about the crown prince's rebellion feels like a joke. If I wanted to read political intrigue, why don't I just go to the history section next door?

I dropped the book after seeing the pet named Kunzai, because seeing the name made me think of a person, which was too distracting.

This book is terribly written; the logic is seriously flawed. Just because children drank immortal blood doesn't mean they're automatically accepted as disciples by the immortal sects. If a cultivator deliberately infects ordinary people with immortal cells, are they all to be accepted as disciples? If a few dozen infected people can be accepted as disciples, what about hundreds, thousands, or even tens of thousands of people in an entire city? Would the immortal sects accept them all?

The protagonist doesn't seem like a transmigrator; he's more like a native, making a fuss over meeting an alien. The "Crown Prince Raises an Army" arc is a bit of a filler, with 50 chapters, making it less engaging than the earlier ones.

Those who can't stand the visual style of Xianxia games with character panels are in trouble.

The author can't write about court politics and military battles; there are some common-sense errors that make it quite awkward to read. If they have to write about it, they should just gloss over it; they shouldn't pad it with things they can't write.

The protagonist of this book is so damn arrogant. He knows absolutely nothing but thinks his own assumptions are correct, as if he were an immortal in a past life.