The Immortalization Crisis

This writing style, this story structure... Isn't this a novel that I would read in junior high school? Over the years, I have made progress in writing work-related fishing report articles. Why hasn't the writing style of online articles that veteran authors rely on improved? This is really like someone reposting a novel written more than ten years ago on the Internet... What's going on? No matter how bad the novels written by others are, you should always read them...

Generally speaking, people who behave and speak like adults, are very naive, get emotional easily, and conquer other worlds by relying on delicious food. What kind of ancient writing is this? The content is bland, and can't they come out when they are older? Just like high school students in Japanese anime, do they have to be fifteen or sixteen to come out? Can you become a centenarian at the age of ten in ten lifetimes? He claims that his actions and thinking are like adults, but his actions are very childish. The author is not just in his twenties.

It's still a cliché. The old author basically can't keep up with the times and has slipped away.

The first 60 chapters are a masterpiece, but the rest are pure white. The author's innovative ability and innovative thinking only lasted for more than 60 chapters. Something like a messy prince's rebellion, it feels like a joke. If I want to read Machiavellian writing, why don't I go to the historical district next door.

After seeing that the pet was named Kunzai, I gave up the book, because when I saw the name, I felt like I was seeing a person, which was too dramatic.

The writing is really bad and the logic has big problems. Because those children who drank the blood of fairy spirits will be accepted as disciples by the fairy sect? If there are monks who deliberately infect ordinary people with fairy cells, do they have to accept all of them as disciples? Dozens of infected people can still accept disciples? Hundreds, thousands, or tens of thousands of people in the entire city have been infected, and the Immortal Sect will accept them all?

The protagonist is not like a time traveler, he is just an aboriginal, and he makes a fuss when seeing an alien. Chapter 50 of The Prince Raises an Army is not as good as before.

It's hard for people who can't stand the Xianxia with panels

The author doesn't know how to write about court and military battles. Some common sense mistakes are embarrassing to watch. If you have to write, just write it in one stroke, and don't write down things you can't write.

The pig's feet in this book are so arrogant. He doesn't even know anything and thinks that his imagination is correct. It's like he was an immortal in his previous life.