One Piece: the Strongest Ice Dragon

After reading the first few chapters, I want to ask, has the author really seen the setting of the Dragon Slayer in Fairy Tail? Why can't the protagonist of this book eat ice? If you say it is a foreshadowing and does not want to show this ability in the navy, please explain it. Why do I feel that you are not familiar with the ability of the Dragon Slayer?

Long live the dead fish face of Death

Almost all authors who write about One Piece fanfics describe Akainu as a villain that everyone hates. But with Oda's urine, I am 100% sure that many people will cry for Akainu when the plot of Akainu comes out in the future. We all know that every bad guy who has a scene in One Piece has a sad past behind him, let alone Akainu, a navy who insists on absolute justice. I am sure that Oda will clear Akainu's name in the later stage. Akainu must be a good person.

Although I have only read more than one chapter, I always feel that this golden finger is absolutely useless in the world of pirates! ! Looking at the catalog again, I still want to be a pirate... I just want to say one thing, if you are seasick, be your sister's pirate! ! ! In the world of pirates, dragon-slayer wizards come to attack one by one, and destroy a group of them together! When I think about this kind of person who is obsessed with any means of transportation, in a world where he almost needs to live on a boat all day long, instead of rushing to his grandma's house, he can go on big waves that defy logic, tsk tsk...

This is not as good as setting up an animal type, a fantasy beast species, and an ice dragon form. 70% Of people cannot accept the power system of other anime in the pirate world.

If you want to write a seasick protagonist in One Piece, then you can write a Pirate King. Haha, what kind of One Piece should you write?

The system produced can also cause seasickness. Let's not talk about it. To tell a joke, the ice dragon was frozen, and the ice dragon was stabbed by the ice sword. This is no different from a fire dragon being burned by fire.

I just read a little bit and I want to ask, is the heroine of this book Zefa or Kuzan?

What the hell is domineering that only belongs to human power? Luffy's apprentice Kung Fu Manatee in Alabasta appeared two years later, but he was using Haki. Manatee can practice dragon training but he can't? ?

I really don't understand the author's thinking. I have to copy the setting of seasickness, which makes readers unhappy. I haven't watched Fairy Tail anyway. I only know that in the world of pirates, seasickness is really unacceptable.

The poisonous point of seasickness has completely taken its toll on my body.

There is no harem or stallion in the second dimension, what else is there to look forward to?

Why do the protagonists of so many pirate books end up becoming pirates? Why don't they go to the end of the navy? The plot is so aesthetically tired.

That year, OP was still one piece

The key is that the author makes too big a difference between the generals and the four emperors and the lieutenant generals. Until now, he still has no idea of ​​the strength of the protagonist. Isn't it a bit too much to be able to fight back and forth with the general for a while and to be vulnerable in front of the four emperors for a while?

How should I say it? The Western dragon is also called a dragon? Lizard

The protagonist is really hypocritical. If a pirate kills a civilian, he will die. If his comrades kill a civilian, he will cover up. It's disgusting.

As soon as I saw Dragon Slayer Magic and Pirates, I was depressed. Do you follow the settings of the stun vehicle? That wouldn't look good.

To be honest, why not change it to a fantasy beast-type ice dragon fruit? If you directly become a dragon, wouldn't it be better than a dragon-slayer wizard?

When I saw Chapter 65, I didn't want to read it anymore. If you want to save people, why bother dragging other people with you? If you don't come, you will kill them. You actually have to swing a knife at your comrades for a few people. In One Piece, a person who betrays his comrades may end up like Gu Gao Hong, who has no companions and is finally defeated by others.

I can't stand it any longer Tony kills innocent civilians indiscriminately The protagonist stands up for his friend who kills innocent civilians indiscriminately What are these three views?

I haven't read it yet, but I just browsed the comment area, and there were all complaints, and there was nothing wrong with it. The author who complained had nothing to say, 😄, ​​and slipped away.

Where did this come from? Is this still domestic?

In Mine Clearance, the protagonist Long Aotian is short-sighted. I was a novice in writing in the early stage and lacked logic. I didn't read it in the later stage and was persuaded to quit by chapters 34, 5 and 6.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

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The author has obviously read One Piece, but not too much or carefully. There are many details that need to be corrected

I couldn't stand the first picture. I couldn't climb a tree, and then I just threw a stone and shot the coconut down. It didn't make sense. He is still a dragon slayer guide who can't even climb a tree to see. It's exciting for a while, and it's boring for a while. 😅

It should be animal type·fish fruit·phantom beast species·ice dragon form

Half of a book is the author's request for votes, and his voice is also drunk.