The Immortal Court Descends

First, the protagonist's personality hasn't been fully developed yet, which is understandable since he hasn't been in the world for very long. However, I hope the author will pay attention! How many chapters have passed already? It's time to finalize it. Secondly, the protagonist hasn't killed the scheming woman yet.

All I can say is that he died a good death. 🤭🤭 They want to use characters from prehistoric times, and they want to be dark. Then he created a Nascent Soul cultivator comparable to a prehistoric era master. Those who don't know might think this book is the originator of the cultivation genre.

What a brain-dead novel! No wonder it didn't become popular. Instead of striking first, it waited for others to catch up, and then it came up with some brainless self-confession and a saintly white lotus flower act.

Chapter 6 is no good. Everyone else makes it clear they want to kill the protagonist before entering the dungeon, but once inside, they help the two sects when they fight. You're helping someone who wants to kill you? Don't talk about uniting against a common enemy; how can someone who just transmigrated have a sense of belonging?

I couldn't even finish a few chapters. They said the Blood-Transforming Divine Blade was one of the top divine abilities in the early stages of the Investiture of the Gods, but it couldn't even take down a Qi Refining stage cultivator with a single strike. Is that supposed to be a divine ability??? And what about the essence blood?

This is utterly nonsensical. It's common knowledge that the primordial era is the pinnacle of cultivation novels. Here, Laozi's magical artifacts... He uses mortal artifacts. Let alone innate spiritual treasures, he has a ton of acquired spiritual treasures. He uses a piece of trash for a belt. Doesn't he feel ashamed? You can write about other systems.

👍I've been following along, and the initial idea was indeed good, but due to my limited skills, many readers who weren't as focused as us had a lot of questions. But as I read along, I could see the author's progress and changes, and I believe you can write a good work! Get it published soon, and I guarantee you'll subscribe!

This protagonist is even more disgusting than those rich kids portrayed as evil. When he had no ability, he just sat and waited to die; once he gained power, he caused trouble everywhere, even going so far as to ask the emperor if he had ever heard of Sun Wukong. He has the face of a despicable person.

If I were the protagonist, I would reveal the brass ring, since it's already lost anyway. Whether others believe it or not, there's no further loss, and it also disgusts that woman, so why not? Besides, what if someone actually believes it? It's better to believe something is true than to believe it isn't.

Chapter 80 Qi Refining Level 4, Chapter 160 Level 5, Chapter 240 Level 6